texasranger_10 posted a comment on Monday 30th October 2006 7:04am

outstanding story. can't say much for the end but we have seen it all. about how his life ended. i will take what was said earlier in the story and accept that as what happened. he became the house husband and his wives all got thier dream job and family all in one. again a verrry good story.

atlantis-rob posted a comment on Monday 30th October 2006 7:01am

Great work! Excellent job on the battle and the way ti went. Good job on ron's reconcilliation with harry and such too. Excellnt job all around. Cheerio!

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Monday 30th October 2006 6:57am

Great story, I'm glad you are going to do a sequel. Because Draco is still out there and what is he going to be up to. Thanks for Writing.

MPF

siaru posted a comment on Monday 30th October 2006 6:43am

...And so the Harry Potter and Company A-Capella-Climax Quintet portkey away into the sunset, vocalizing strenuously and often; I look forward to the promised reprise-and-curtain-calls. This tale has been another enjoyable romp, over-the-top in trademark Kinsfire style, and I don't regret reading it for a minute. Thank you muchly for sharing it with us.

Oh, and I like this version a lot better than the blank-verse one you posted first. Even though that was all cliffie, this version is a much better read.

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 30th October 2006 2:03am

That wraps it up for Voldie and Lucius. Is there anything left but an epilog? Snape getting 4 Potters in his class 12 years from now or something? Does sound like a lot of death eaters got away, though.

Thanks for writing.

Tom A.

Davideg posted a comment on Sunday 29th October 2006 11:13pm

fantastic story i love that voldermort got his mind litraly blown away.

Mariposa posted a comment on Sunday 29th October 2006 12:35pm

Awesome chapter! Truly awesome!

mike bates posted a comment on Sunday 29th October 2006 11:17am

very cool chappie here. will be waiting in anticipation for the last one

Panaka posted a comment on Sunday 29th October 2006 10:53am

M82A3, if it absolutly has to die. Works well on humans, lightly armoured vehicles and Dark Lords.

nice one

DJ posted a comment on Sunday 29th October 2006 9:49am

Nice work all around but I love what you did to Malfoy. :) So what's next for them?

KLGreen posted a comment on Sunday 29th October 2006 5:53am

cute are all Harry's Wives pergnant?
If so How far along?

James Barber posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 4:39pm

Outstanding story one of the best! I hope there is at least an epilogue!

Terry Swain posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 2:46pm

Great chapter. :)

C. Harris posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 2:30pm

Wow, this is really great!

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 11:28am

Good, I like the two prog atack . Also the way Harry vanquish Tom. But are your going to wrap every thing up or jest close it here?

Jason Karr posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 9:10am

this is a nice chapter.

MaryJane6707 posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 9:08am

What an incredibly fantastic chapter! That was brilliant! I love the comradery these characters are able to have with one another. I am also happy that Harry will be able to repair his relationships with those he cared for. You have done an incredible job with this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

djo posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 6:47am

it seems as if we are approaching the end of a wonderful story - i would love to read on!

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 5:19am

Fantastic chapter. I'm glad that you are clearing out in preparation for NaNoWriMo. Of course that is a purely selfish reason on my part, as I like reading your writing.

Thank you for writing.

Mike (MoA)

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Saturday 28th October 2006 4:41am

Great, the final battle got a little Murphyied but they improvised, adapted, and overcame. Great job, thank you.