By Kinsfire
Reviews
DizzyG posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 11:14am
Hmm, I would have sworn there was polyjuice involved as the head of the DMLE really should have been able to resist the imperious. Umbridge didn't strike me as particularly powerful with regards to magic.
Stygius posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 10:57am
is it the defense against the dark arts curse?
nice to see this updated.
razor_M posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 10:35am
holy shit, Lily might need some ice for that burn... or maybe a cooling charm? This is awesome, keep up the kick ass work!
Tumshie posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 10:00am
Great to see an update here Keith, another excellent chapter, can't wait to see why Lily is acting as she is
riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 9:58am
I am sorry to say I really don't care what Lily reason for the way she is acting, I just hope that Harry don't let her off with lame reason. She turned out to be just as bad Dumbledore and Petunia, I thought that Lily sorry.It great that Harry decide to date Hermione, Well that explain Madame Bones action since the summer. I wonder if Harry would ever trust her, since so many people say they were under Imperius it hard to tell who is honest and who is using as a excues.
Jonathan Northwood posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 9:57am
I have -so- missed your writing. Thank you for another lovely chapter.
Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 9:54am
Great chapter!!!
I won't beg for updates coming sooner since I know that you are TRYING hard. We your loyal readers are so THRILLED when you and your wife (HI DOROTHY!!) update.
I do hope everything is going well for you both. It's been so long since I have heard from either of you ...
Take care and I look forward to the next update ...
As Always,
Muirnin
Ezra'eil posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 9:43am
Oh snap, that last comment was cold... Real cold!
Viridian posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 8:58am
All I have to say is that it must be one doozie of a reason!
Also looking forward to some mil-spec toad thrashing in the near future...
Seel'vor posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 8:38am
Keith, that parting shot is vicious. I heartily approve.
Does anyone in this damn story die? It's like everyone's a Time Lord, and they just regenerate.
Tanaxanth posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 8:36am
Ouch.... Prongs is gonna be back on the couch...
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 8:29am
Doggone, here I am checking my email after I get home from work, and here this is: woohoo! First, I look forward to whatever it is that's making Lily act this way, but still, it makes me wonder even if the cause is discovered, whether Harry will just turn around and forgive her, no problem? As she is right now, I have a hard time believ=ing that whatever her reason, otion, spell, test, or whatnot, that Harry can just walk away from the hurtful way she's acted. Interesting to see that Amelia was under the Imperious, or was she? Her spew(no house-elves actually harmed, LOL) was vile and nasty and sounded a lot like Umbridge, and if that was true, then I look forward to Madam Bones using a barb-wire baseball bat on her, ala Cactus-Jack. Glad to see Hermione's parents survived, and that she had a happy reunion, and that her and Harry are getting on well, and hope it lasts them the rest of their lives and beyond. Great addition here.
Patricia Lee Finley posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 7:41am
There is?! There had better be a darn good reason for her acting like that!! Hurumph!!
loatroll posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 6:05am
Nope I think all her.. goes in the family.. or perhaps not. :P
Unexpected twist with the whole Umbridge imperiousing Madam Bones there, really well made one at that.
Really great chapter, really looking forward to more.
dennisud posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 5:51am
I truly hope you DO explain it to us AND Harry as well as hoping to convivnce Harry of what happened to Maddam Bones.
I almost forgot about this one then I got hit in the face with the Jealous Lily and a very distrustful Harry!
Please continue!
dennisud
P.S.- I have an outline for a new story I have not had the muse to write.
Let me know if you want to see it!
dennisud2015@yahoo.com
Rob Shell posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 5:51am
Wow, I was just re-reading this story last night and now I wake up this morning and there's a new chapter :) This was a great chapter, I figured Mrs. Bones was being affected by a charmed object or something so its nice to have it confirmed. I'll have to go back an re-read it again to search for anything about Lily but offhand I don't remember you hinting at anything like you did with Bones. Also I was wondering if you still had the original versions of Like a Phoenix and It Started One Summer? I remember reading them on a yahoo group but it's been ages and even though your doing a rework on It Started and have finished 2 Part of the Like a Phoenix Trilogy it would be great to re-read the old versions again.
Thanks,
Rob
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 5:35am
I was a little worried until the end that Harry was letting Lilly off too easily, though I am shocked at the latitude Dumbledore has seemed to given Lilly in regards to Hermione. Overall a great chapter, though I think that the Lilly/Hermione situation is going on a bit longer than is realistic, but still great job, thank you.
MonCappy posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 5:23am
Lily is a worthless fucking bitch!
Andrew Niehaus posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 5:16am
I hope it's imperious.
Dave McCombs posted a comment on Tuesday 27th May 2008 11:50am