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Aelita posted a comment on Tuesday 20th November 2007 12:06pm

This is so good! Can you please finish it and fast!

scribbler posted a comment on Monday 5th November 2007 2:26pm

PERFECT SO FAR!! I'm very impressed with what you've done with this story and I am excited about reading the rest of the chapters...just as soon as you can post them!

Please...don't stop writing. That would be *bad*.


Regards,

the_scribbler

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Wednesday 31st October 2007 4:30am

Aaaah, this is getting so cute. You have got to update, I'm absolutely loving it!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Tuesday 30th October 2007 6:04pm

Oh, I just love it, all the time. Keep up the good work

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Friday 19th October 2007 3:49am

Poor Grangers. Though it seems unlikely I do hope they make it out ok. Hermione will be devastated if they don't. I'm really liking this. I'm looking forward to moving into your work, also.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 18th October 2007 3:47am

I never pictured Amelia that way. It's interesting, because she always seemed like the one decent person in the Ministry. It's a little off putting to me, to be frank. I would expect it from lots of characters, but not from her. I guess it's a little to OOC for me. And I'm also a little confused by Remus. He seemed like a puppy, and I always had the impression the wolfsbane helped, but not by that much. So I don't know, most of this chapter was really good, but some things really threw me for a loop. And I was absolutely baffled by what happened to Snape. I have no idea what occured, which probably has to do with Dobby explaining (he speaks so confusingly). But I do find it realistic that he went after Hermione's parents instead of straight after Harry and his family. Snape knows exactly where to hit Harry where it's going to hurt the most. That part was really believeable and overall the thing was good, I just had those few complaints.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Tuesday 2nd October 2007 3:34am

I know what I said, but oh my lord this is amazing. I'm glad you picked it up or I may have never read it and it's fantastic. Ok, going away now.

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 20th September 2007 5:24pm

Next review in ch 8. I don't think it's worth it to review if the author's not going to read it, so yeah. I'm interested to see where this goes, it's such a differnt twist. See you around chapter 8!

Hemotem posted a comment on Monday 10th September 2007 3:53am

Great story thank you.
I do hope to see more soon.

Hemotem

joeBob posted a comment on Monday 20th August 2007 8:09pm

Interesting story. A little too maudlin in spots but still engaging.
Thanks!

sblackfan posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 4:06am

Great chapter. I love how you have the girls getting a little bit closer.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Saturday 11th August 2007 7:36am

Brilliant chapter, as usual. I look forward to further installments!

Anaknisatanas posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 3:41pm

Really nice update. I'm looking forward to what will come next. I like how Snape's been treated so far, although it would have been nice to see him get reamed out by Lily Potter again. I also enjoyed seeing Lavender and Parvati, so often the fact that they share a dorm with Hermione is overlooked.

Flamefoxrose posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 2:23pm

It's break my heart for Harry all that pain. And no adult worth their salt care to fight for him. The story is wonder written. Good work.

Donald McLeod posted a comment on Thursday 9th August 2007 12:31pm

I liked her story but I think that you will do justice to her story and by the read you have improved it by giving the the suporting characters depth that I have not seen in most fanfic and for that much even in publish works. I do not mean it as a slure on wrighter in any way because I fine read of any good story is diverse and entertaining as the authers work their caft diferent ways of telling their story. So good work and good Luck.

Zvoni posted a comment on Wednesday 8th August 2007 9:36pm

Well, i've reread the story, and i can't find Hermione asking Lily about the Priori Incantetm Lightshow and why she and James came out of Voldies wand.

Could you direct me?

Kinsfire replied:

*writer commits repeated headdesking*

I knew I wrote it.

It's in the NEXT chapter, in a conversation between Lily and Hermione. That chapter is at the beta right now.

I apologise for the tone of the response before. I knew I'd written it, but forgot that it hadn't come out to the readers yet. Rest assured, that very thing IS in Chapter 11.

*writer walks off muttering to himself about making sure of what he's talking about first*

Zvoni posted a comment on Tuesday 7th August 2007 4:33pm

Right, i haven't read all reviews so i don't know if anybody mentioned this:

Since this story sets off after Book 5 there is one glaring contradiction to Book 4: The Priori Incantatem Lightshow during the duel between the Dork Lard and Harry at the End of Book 4. Care to explain how Lily and James came out of Voldies wand, when they weren't killed?

This is an excellent story with the one mentioned exception. Keep going!

Kinsfire replied:

Care to go back and read closer? When they're talking about it, Hermione specifically asked that question.

kittykatluver posted a comment on Tuesday 7th August 2007 2:41pm

Hello! Just wanted to drop a note and say that I really like this story, but to please consider trying to keep it clean...? You are a really great writer, but your stories are a little risque. I don't mind your other stories that much (Since I'm not reading them, my criticism isn't exactly valid, is it?) but I would really like to continue reading this one. If you would consider it, I would be obliged. If you want to ignore me...(*Smiles*) I can't argue with that, can I?
On a funnier note, can you imagine Snape with punk rocker clothes saying "Sweeet..."? (*Snorts*) Weird..
-Ol

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Tuesday 7th August 2007 8:39am

Ah, poor Snivellus. He is, and always will be, a bitter, twisted man completely controlled by his unresolved sense of grievance. Even the slightly skewed version of him in the last book still carried this essential element of the character.

I just want to add that I like what you are doing with Hermione. It is odd to see her as the focus of the angst rather than Harry; I suspect that the humour will be found in their fumblings around each other.

Looking forward to more where this came from. Do let us know how your attempts to publish your original work went.

BenRG's Rating: 7/10

dogfoot75 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th August 2007 7:58am

I like Snape, and I like Hermione. I like that she's mourning now, and I'm interested to see the Potters' teaching styles. Lily is turning out to be quite the bitch.

But why does Harry have to be the same exact person in all your fics? In the earlier part of the story, and in canon, Harry is not self- flagellating, and he is not apt to do anything that Hermione asks of him simply because it's her. I don't understand why you don't stretch yourself and go with the original author's version of Harry.