Darak1 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th January 2010 2:59am

What I fail to understand is why Harry and consorts came back to Hogwarts as well as why they took no precautions against what they knew was going to happen. I'm afraid this fiction is handling itself the same way book 6 and 7 of the original were, things happen without logic or thought behind them and the reader is left to see them pass without understanding the why or how. A simple leviocorpus on Harry and a portkey once out of the ward would have been enough to get them all out.

joeBob posted a comment on Wednesday 27th January 2010 2:18am

Is this a repost? I'd swear I've read this before. The plot is extremely cliched, but the story's still fun.
"Pookie-pie" is always good. ;-)

Fenris Ulf posted a comment on Wednesday 27th January 2010 1:39am

Things are heating up! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more

Nargus posted a comment on Wednesday 27th January 2010 12:58am

Well, I don't quite understand why Harry has to come back to Hogward at all, or even why he HAS to remain there. Even Albus won't dare start an international incident by having Auror invade another country. And given the fact that Harry's Guardian is a leader of the Gnome, they will be creating an inter-species incident even. I wish he'd just leave British. If Dumble invade, the war would be on top of his own head.

LordNemesis posted a comment on Wednesday 27th January 2010 12:33am

NO Dam dumb GET HARRY OUT OF THERE AWAY FROM HIM AND SAVE POPPY!!!!!!! DUMDS WANTS A WAR GIVE IT TO HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Harry the next dark lord or so say Dumds!!!!!!!!!!!!

dadscooking posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 11:21pm

Wow! This keeps getting better and better. It really threw me when Snape beat Heidi and Harry but it just builds the drama. Very strong plot.

Hypochondriac posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 10:48pm

Whats Cho doing in their potions class? She is a 7th year

honore11 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 10:22pm

No....not Pomphrey! So looking forward to more, I love this. But please make sure that Dumbles and Snape get theirs eventually.......Thanks

maddsloth posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 10:07pm

Well this is interesting let me guess he is going to Obliviate 3/4ths the school? Or people might think it odd that Poppy suddenly keels over right after witnessing everything that happened, not to mention that some students would have already communicated with home.

Aside from plot purposes I can’t quite figure out why he would have went back to Hogwarts. "Let me walk back and sleep in the seat of one of my enemies power"

Why would the King not have gen them a portkey? are they to expensive? lol

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 9:28pm

All I want to know is when is Snape going to end up as a puddle of goo on Harry's shoe?

If he hurts Poppy, should be h#$%$ to pay with not only Harry, but also every other student in the school. Dumbledore should be run out on a rail!!

I look forward to your next chapter.

rdgale

MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 9:06pm

Great chapter, but I thought Cho is a year ahead of Harry.

Thanks for writing
MPF

Vyrexuviel posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 9:03pm

This is getting good. Too bad Dumbles has no clue that HE is the Dark Lord to rise after Tom's fall.

Carol Layland posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 7:39pm

Oh dear, things are really getting nasty now aren't they. I love it and do hope that you post the next chapter tomorrow.
Carol Layland

Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 7:35pm

*fume* Hope those two royal arseholes are strung up by their entrails. Hope Harry and Poppy survive this.

Sure didn't take long for everything to fall apart. Not surprising, I suppose. Still, if every other student knows just how quickly after the start of classes that the three girls abruptly left . . . AD is creating problems for himself in the process of trying to control Harry. Or at the least is allowing doubts to creep into the students.

As always, looking forward to more.

Keronshara posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:56pm

You have Cho in Potions with Harry & Hermione. The problem is that Cho is a 7th year, as such she would not be in a 6th year Potions class with them.

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:46pm

This was a really good chapter a pity about Poppy I liked her, I hope Harry and his ladies can fight back I want to see Albus, Snape and the Weasley's be crushed. I look forward to the next chapter with great anticipation.

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:42pm

Well, here's hoping that the Hell that Snape and Dumbledore burn in in the end is especially hot for the both of them, as Poppy was at least sympathetic to Harry and his girls, and can't wait to see what happens in the fallout from all this later on.

Lottii posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:39pm

This is an awesome story! I'm enjoying it immensely! I look forward to the next update when its ready!

Cheers

slashslut posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:28pm

holy cow, that was edge-of-your-seat exciting!

sern posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:20pm

getting a bit out of hand isn't it?
i enjoy your story very much, please keep up the amazing updating rate!
i must say that it seems like a.d's power know no limits, when would the backleash of him plaing with lives so easilly hit him?