DrT posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:07pm
Oh, dear, Dumbles has obviously gone far past MOB through gray (with Hermione during the summer) to Dark Lord wannabe!
NymPotter posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:00pm
Don't let Snape harm Poppy
Gwyn Raven posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 6:00pm
Gods this one has me on the edge of my chair the whole time. More soon please!
stormmaster posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 5:47pm
Fantastic chapter. I like the twists so far, and cannot wait for the next.
Dragen posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 5:41pm
Great chapter mate, I can't believe what Dumbass and Snapeass are planning, I hope that someone will save Poppy and Harry soon.
Chaossama posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 5:29pm
Quite the cliched story, if you pardon the expression. This story probably would've fit well during the times in which such themes were popular (Evil Dumbledore, Hero Harry who needs to escape Evil Dumbledore, Voldemort who doesn't do anything while focus is on Dumbledorem, etc), but things have changed, even ever so slightly. Subtly is the name of the game these days, really.
A couple years back, I would've said this is a good story. Now, it doesn't read well in that the characters are predictable, and one-sided.
Tabi posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 5:25pm
I can really tell why you didn't post this before...I really dislike the fic, but seeing as it is rather captivating in it's extremes I'm still reading.
The obvious evilness is rather entertaining though.
david bullock posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 5:23pm
Oh it is marvelous. I can't wait to see how you destroy everything Snape and Dumbledore have been trying to do.
Riegert8 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 5:17pm
Good story but the evil Dumbledore plot is old and boring
maddsloth posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 4:50pm
"I want to have sex with you" said the Hot Girl
"My name is Harry, Harry Potter Stupid is Stupid Does".
Either, Harry has more morals then Dumbledore pretends to have or he is Gay… does bug me when Harry has this â€˜holier then tho art’ attitude. Or let me guess he is saving himself for Hermione who he does not yet know did not sell him out?
NymPotter posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 2:55pm
This is great. I hope DD gets his before he can harm Harry, Hermione, Cho or Heidi. I hope Ginny, Molly, Snape, Tonks, Remus and whoever else is doing DD dirty work get theirs. I can hardly wait for more.
SasparillaX posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 1:12pm
story is getting better and better. Harry an girls getting together was quick. Parents agreeing was suprising, but I like it!
I still don't understand why they go back though... If he's married, he's an adult, yeah?! So he should be able to chose his school and bank etc... Or did I misread something?
Good story anyways, I liked the smut, maybe little longer next time?
D4rkPr1nz posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 1:25am
Great chapter. I love your writting. I have read most of your other work even before some of it was on this website. Like a Phoneix From the Ashes and Burning Day are two of my favorites. Forever Yours and Yours? was a good read as well as had the incest thing going which in some stories is just wrong but that one made it work. It took me a while to figure out what happened to your Unnamed Story but on further review noticed the name change to the Paradigm Shift great story, and the bloopers at the end were hilarious. Lilly's Return, Three For All and With a Little Help From My Friends are also amazing stories I also loved My Father's Image and Sorceror's Apprentice. It made me sad when i found out that they were abandoned but I am sure you had your reasons for them having to go. And while on this site you still have My Father's Image I didn't see any for Sorceror's Apprentice...is there another site that while abandoned has it posted or any way for me to be able to read it again because it has been many years since I could last read it and it was a fanfic that really made me a huge HP fanfic fan. Well I am sorry for boring you with this review about all your stories and not so much about the chapter of this one but I wanted to give you koodoos for them as well as this story. I cant wait for the next chapter and am looking forward to it. As always Kinsfire you have done great justice to the Harry Potter Fanfic Universe. You make an maniputlive dumbles also fun to read. I will go now.
P.S.: If it is possible to read Sorceror's Apprentice could you please point me in the right direction cause I had trouble finding it. Thank You.
AlaskanKing posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 10:53pm
Love it. Really enjoying this story. Can't wait for the bombshell to drop on Dumbles. Update soon.
dorodrigo posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 10:52pm
Loved the story, and hope you update it soon enough. Please keep up the great work. Cheers!
Gaurav posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 9:52pm
BEAUTIFUL mate, keep it flowing.
Nothing like a little bit of confrontation and smut to spice up the life.... hopefully in the upcoming chapters..........
Good Luck and God Speed
ching965 posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 9:37pm
Great story. And a very welcome update from you. I look forward to how Dumbles reacts. Thank you.
Wish you the best.
larry freshour posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 9:27pm
love the story.waiting for more,
Tumshie posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 9:24pm
Great to see more of this, looking forward to the smackdowns that are due
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 25th January 2010 8:56pm
Great to see Snape called out here, and here's hoping this won't be some stranger who JKR felt, after all was said and done, that he was the bravest guy ever? Whut? No, though too bad that Tonks is in the bad guy camp, and wonder whom else Harry can actually trust for the most part, any adults at all?