Melferd posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 9:54am
The stupidity curve of these folks is astounding! Find a different record to play, Dumbles - this one is sratched and useless! I cannot wait to see how Harry pulls this off, as I cannot see his way out of this other than hope that Wizarding Britain unspools before they can get him.
slashslut posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 9:02am
i LOVE that you update so frequently!!!!!!!! i hate being kept in suspense:) so CANT wait to see how harry's plan will work out, especially when he pokes holes in dumbles "logic." maybe the sheep will finally open their eyes. and what a surprise to see percy back in the mix!
Crys posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 8:51am
*laugh* "Real Genius"!
Ron with Parv and Lav? *sigh* I supposed it's just fair as Harry seems to have three, but . . . RON with Parvati and Lavender?!?
> Dumbledore did it through being the vizier, as did Lucius. I prefer a bit more honesty in the process.
"Honesty"? Well, I suppose it is, in its own way.
> The portraits are on my side, apparently
Which means that Hogwarts is. Wonder if that little factoid (and what it implies) will ever make it into AD's mind and/or the general public's.
Pretty abrupt scene change, moving from Hogwarts to the Med. Yeah, if this is the NaNo, then it's expected, but at least a "four months later" or something . . .
Er, what happened to Ron with Parv and Lav? He's out there ogling the Mrs. Potters and no mention of his (I assume) girlfriends?
Did they get all the Gryff's+Padma out? That's gotta hurt AD's public image, no matter how many actually did escape.
So Amelia got discharged when she disagreed with Dumblemort? Can't see how that's going to help our hero (she hasn't exactly endeared herself to him), but an interesting fact, nonetheless. Wonder how it'll play into the later chapters.
Percy. His mind is going to be bled dry (possibly literally) by AD when he returns to Jolly Ol'. The Potter Gang can't not realize that.
Harry, publish the damn prophecy. Then ask, "why do you all think it's going to be me that is the darker lord mentioned, and not someone already in power?" Okay, not at all subtle, but impossible to refute.
Looking forward to more.
DrT posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 6:29am
(semi) good Percy? (fairly) intelligent Ron? Interesting!
Celevon posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 6:11am
They should try to get Amelia to work with them so they can get rid of Dumbledork for once and for all.
Brad1 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 5:22am
wow cant wait to see what happens with the meet with dumb as a dork! keep up the awesome writing!
GremlinXTJ posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 5:03am
Yay! Nice one.
The last two chapters might have been a bit too fast paced but I figure you always planed Voldi to be a minor bump in the road.
William Martin posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 4:40am
The connection yesterday caused me to leave more reviews than I intended.
It told me that the connection failed then I got it to go through only to find out that they all went through. Sorry :(
Oh, keep up the good, work, and thanks bunches!
Jeffrey Meehan posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 4:18am
RON GETS PUSSY!? WHAT THE FUCK?!
You know what dude you peaked now this is just flowery sloppyness. I'll finish reading it but it reads like shit. Keep it simple stupid!
Slytherin66 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 3:55am
Great chapter I liked the battle and all the twists that are taking place. Harry has a good life, Ron not being a prat is rare he needs a woam of his own. Interesting turn of events with Percy. I am glad Luna is happy and I look forward to the next chapter, thanks.
Anansii posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 3:10am
Ah, progress. One Dark Lord down, one to go.
ghostchicken posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 2:13am
Now that took balls! Harry saveed her life and offed Voldy and his Merry Men, but Madame Bones still insisted she should have had rights to Harry's mind. Her disagreements with Dumbles were a bit too little a bit too late.
Another thing that took balls is to attack the Potter assemblage on foreign soil. Perhaps they might want to see about political asylum, which should slow Dumbles and his minions down. I'm a bit concerned about Harry wanting to meet with Dumbledore anywhere without a few precautions put in place, which I'm sure Einar would insist upon.
Percy appears to be torn, here. He has an idea of what's right, but his ambition tends to get in the way. Perhaps Luna's right--he shied away from and fought a gift that told him what he didn't want to hear. That's not conducive to maintaining ones place as a Ministry lackey.
I just don't get Remus, though. It just seems to me that he would want to put first the son of the man who defended and befriended him and leave the old fool to his crap. Oh well--money is the root of all evil and pride goeth before a fall. There's going to be some big falls before this is over.
So Nev likes Kaatja? Cool! I like her.
Bob Officer posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 2:12am
and the next installment the best last and best.
This story could always best expanded. lots of missing scenes.
Genericrandom posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 1:49am
Epic and fantastic. One of your better works, and thrilling and gripping and all that good stuff. I started reading it, and once I started, I couldn't stop from chapter one to eight. It was marvelous and I'm sincerely looking forward to more.
Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 1:34am
I continue to enjoy your fine story. I hope to contiue to enjoy it and others for some time to come. Thanks for writing. W.
Riegert8 posted a comment on Thursday 28th January 2010 11:47pm
slayersfan01 posted a comment on Thursday 28th January 2010 9:46pm
Why are Dark Lord Dumbledore and his DARK minions not suffering yet? They should be burning in hell right now and Remus should be in the devil's mouth right now, right next to Judas. I sincerely hope that you somehow have James' and Sirius' spirits kick his ass when you kill the backstabbing werewolf. Albus fucking Dumbledore doesn't realise that the Dark Lord that will rise after the current one is dead, killed by the marked one, is himself. You need to kill these hypocrites soon and with a vengence. They do not deserve to live!
slayersfan01 posted a comment on Thursday 28th January 2010 9:17pm
I want you to kill them, Snape and Dumbledore. No, I want you to torture and kill the bastards. Nonono, I want you to torture, humiliate, basically every hurtful thing you can think of to those assholes who don't deserve to be called human beings before killing them. Spend whole chapters on their torture and I will gladly read them. They deserve to be utterly destroyed!
jhbwolverine posted a comment on Thursday 28th January 2010 8:16pm
I'd give it about a 3/10. Like most of your stories, Harry is a perpetual victim of just about everyone else in the world (except the 15 women who he is desperately in love with). He's abused by Snape, Dumbledore, and his non-magical relatives. The one person who doesn't abuse him is Voldemort, and it's hard to understand why Harry doesn't join him to be honest, given the way those on the 'light' side treat him. In short, the story is incredibly unrealistic and is literally painful to read.
Charles Goodroe posted a comment on Thursday 28th January 2010 2:16pm
wow Im really enjoying this one. I like how everyone is so convinced that its harry that would turn dark they never consider its some other evil rising in voldies place