TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th August 2010 12:14pm
Very good chapter.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th August 2010 11:06am
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th August 2010 10:15am
Very good chapter. Time for some payback.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th August 2010 9:29am
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Monday 16th August 2010 8:26am
Very good chapter. Really love powerful, take charge, kick ass Harry fics. Very good so far.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 15th August 2010 11:52pm
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 15th August 2010 10:38pm
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Sunday 15th August 2010 8:38pm
Very good start.
loretta537 posted a comment on Monday 26th July 2010 7:35pm
this was another great story
ILikeToRead posted a comment on Saturday 10th July 2010 12:17pm
This is a great story. I really enjoyed reading about the girls helping out Harry. Thanks for sharing!
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Friday 11th June 2010 10:40pm
Crys; in response to your query, yeah, Ron is ogling Hermione/Cho/Heidi/Kaatje. However, remember back when the Weasley Triangle was originally assembled (Ron+Lavender+Pavarti) - who talked *whom* into that? (Reminder: Ron was doing the *listening*.) In both this chapter and the last, we have the emergence of Logical!Ron (practically Ravenclaw!Ron); if anything, he's actually being more logical than most characters that were *sorted* there (including Cho, up to that point, which she would actually admit; practically the only Ravenclaws that are actually acting like Ravenclaws are Padma and Luna). On that beach, Harry isn't complaining about Ron ogling (didn't hear any complaints out of the ogled, either) - Harry didn't complain because, despite being the husband of Hermione and Cho, logically, it isn't his place to whinge. (Besides, if Hermione or Cho actually minded Ron's ogling, they are certainly capable enough to demonstrate their displeasure.)
KirijamaScion posted a comment on Friday 21st May 2010 3:18pm
We are amused and we applaud you.... wait a sec.. 'we'? Who the hell else is in here!?
timbits200 posted a comment on Friday 14th May 2010 12:50am
Hey, great story, I enjoyed the flow of the story and the way that your oc's were explored more than most authors do. Also, the ending was also very good as well.
bonnie posted a comment on Monday 19th April 2010 5:26pm
Great story! I got caught up in real life and didn't get a chance to read the final chapter until now and just wanted to say how much I enjoyed this.
Lientjuhh posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 7:18pm
I love it.. WEll done.. :)
crocket posted a comment on Friday 19th March 2010 1:52pm
Stella Sebarron Black posted a comment on Monday 15th March 2010 9:03pm
"Random Folgai"? That is hilarious. And what a unique name for a largely unimportant, author-inserted guy. I quite enjoy your stories. You are really good.
Ginny Tracy posted a comment on Sunday 7th March 2010 11:32am
In addition to you usual great writing and interesting story lines, I fell for this story as soon as the young lady in Amsterdam introduced herself. My late aunt was name Kaatje Vliet :-)
Sandrine Lupin posted a comment on Wednesday 24th February 2010 3:59am
It was a wonderfull story that you had written. I really like the way harry fell in love with all of them but Cho (it is not really detailled for hermione or heidi and after the way harry broke with her it is really strange that he still love her)
but reall I like this story. it is strange that remus don't finish with Luna or she is also the scarlet woman for him an Katje?
it is also strange that Macgonnagal finish in an hermit, I was expecting that she finish after perhaps a year to go to Harry apologise and live with them like Poppy. After all she didn't know half of what AD was doing.
and I'm really disapointed that Draco Malfoy is still alive nevertheless. but it is just details.
I really have fun reading this story. I hope you rest well and maybe write another story not to far away in time.
thanks for your beautiful writing.
Jimbocous posted a comment on Monday 22nd February 2010 11:31pm
Good grins, nicely written.
One thing that occured to me while reading this was regarding magical oaths. A lot of writers make a big deal out of oaths, and their potential consequences if broken. Makes me wonder how any of Bumblemore's pet aurors can function. Surely even a stupid or corrupt Ministry would require a substantial and binding oath preventing their law enforcement people from serving another master?
Anyway, thanks for a great read!