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soggynoodle posted a comment on Thursday 23rd November 2017 8:51am

Yes, the romantic aspect of this story is the weakest part, in my opinion. Harry being okay with and/or basically whoring out his wives I found rather disgusting.

Everything else about the story - the schemes, the twists - I liked.

soggynoodle posted a comment on Thursday 23rd November 2017 6:59am

The romance aspect of this story is extremely cringeworthy.

It's a shame really, as I was liking this fic for the intigue and the revenge plot until it devolved into a poorly executed harem type. Don't get me wrong, I have nothing against harem fics but this one was just so rushed and contrived as well as the way the members of it speak to one another.

noylj posted a comment on Saturday 14th October 2017 2:06am

And WHY did they have to return to Hoggy? That's the last place I would be unless they kidnapped me, and I would trying my best to escape...

noylj posted a comment on Thursday 12th October 2017 5:15pm

She's loose, just not a prostitute...

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Sunday 16th July 2017 4:05pm

Great story; wish there was moreā€¦

karry299 posted a comment on Saturday 19th November 2016 8:50am

This....is unreadable. Just a random stream of consciousness with barely any coherent plot.

Lovebug2867 posted a comment on Sunday 5th June 2016 2:46am

Great Story!

MonCappy posted a comment on Thursday 26th November 2015 2:38am

I find amusing that Ron is one of the good Weasleys in this story. Usually, with betrayal plotlines he is among the villains.

hubris posted a comment on Saturday 3rd January 2015 9:24pm

Don't know how I missed this one. A very enjoyable read.

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 7:49am

This is a great ending. Of course Dumbledore was insane but he was the only one that didn't know it. I'm surprised at the assumptions Dumbledore made at the meeting in Nice. He really thought Percy was behind him 100%. Of course Percy had figured out that Dumbledore was wrong in the long run. I'm glad that the Weasley boys rose above the ways of their parents and sister. Harry finally got the family he wanted all along. I look forward to more stories from you. Thanks for writing. pms

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 7:07am

This is very different. Harry and his wives have escaped from Britain. Dumbledore has taken over the Ministry and the sheep have followed him. Percy has seen the light and is asking Harry for help against Dumbledore. Dumbldore still wants Harry to marry Ginny? He's nuts. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 3:13am

I'm glad that Amelia is heading the investigation about all of this. Einar did well to accuse Dumbledore of trying to start a war. I'm glad Amelia ordered him arrested. To bad he got away. She did manage to catch Tonks and Shackleboldt. i'm really shocked at Remus. To believe that Harry is going dark is stupid. Snape is just trying to cover his own ass. I'm glad Harry got back to the girls and Poppy. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 2:27am

This is really bad. Snape gets away with attacking Harry and Heidie and now Dumbledore thinks he is back in control. Now they are planning to also obliviate Poppy so severely that she won't be able to do her job anymore. I hope Harry can stop that. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 1:37am

Wow! This is a great return to Hogwarts. Ginny really got told when she realized that her howler caused Harry great pain and was one of the reasons he ran away. The girls have all 3 jumped on his bandwagon and aren't afraid to show it. I look forward to their talk with Dumbledore. Thanks for writing. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 1:04am

Wow! This is amazing. Harry gets a new guardian, He gets betrothed to Hermione, He also has a potential relationship with his "lawyer" Heidie and now it looks like Cho is going to join them as Lady Black. Talk about moving things along. Very well done and it makes sense. Wild. Thanks for writing. p

Patches posted a comment on Friday 22nd August 2014 12:07am

Dumbledore is really pushing the limits and beyond as long as Harry is concerned. kidnapping Kaaje did Dumbledore a lot of harm. I'm glad that Harry is wise to him and that he and Hermione figured out a way to communicate in such a way that Dumbledore didn't get that message. Heidie is great. Is she the possible solution to the Black family clause in Harry's inheritance? I look forward to how you work this all out. p

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 10:02pm

Well Harry has really met an interesting girl at "the club". I'm glad he is being careful and only had two beers. The conversation has become quite heavy but with a good moral concluscion. I look forward to more of this story. p

Patches posted a comment on Thursday 21st August 2014 6:22pm

This is an excellent beginning. Dumbledore is definitely bad in this one. He must know that Harry is being beaten at Privet Drive. I'm glad Hermione figured out that Dumbledore had her under the imperious. Now maybe she will help Harry if she finds him. I look forward to more of this story. p

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2014 6:51pm

Wish you'd add more, but I doubt it. WAAAAH! *throws tantrum*

Noble Korhedron posted a comment on Tuesday 3rd June 2014 6:44pm

"Perhaps," Percy said. "But it makes no difference to the job ahead of us."

"I know one of my demands, though," Harry said as Percy started to rise.

"What might that be?" Percy asked.

"Amelia Bones' head on a pike or a platter. I don't appreciate her sending her Aurors after me any more than I appreciated her telling me that she had a right to use me as a weapon or tool. I'd thought she was different, but she was just another power abuser."

"Actually," Percy said, "she was relieved of duty - cashiered out - when she began to argue against Dumbledore and his attitudes. You must have made an impression, because she publicly blasted him for treating you no better than a weapon or tool to use and throw away." Harry's eyebrows rose at that."

So did mine. Amelia seemed as arrogant as Dumb-ass-dork last chapter. DId you write her that way on purpose?