Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 9:45pm

Nice wrap up here, and glad to see Dumbledore get torn down at last, just a shame that he got off basically free in canon as far as his rep anyway. Well done!

jessie179 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 9:01pm

I really loved it! It was different but in a good way! :)

DrT posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 8:23pm

Fun little story! Thanks for sharing it

Rick D Gale posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 8:15pm

And thus ends Albus Dumb-as-a-dore.

Good wrap-up

I look forward to your next posting.

rdgale

Dragen posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 8:12pm

Great end to your story mate, I hope you'll work on you other mulite stroies as I would like to see what happens next in them

Patches posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 7:01pm

This is a great story. I love the back and forth machinations between Dumbledore and Harry. The fact that Dumbledore completed his own end on wizarding television no less was perfect. I like the family you created for Harry and his wives, etc. Ron developing a mutil wife situation was great too. Percy actually redeemed himself. That was unexpected but appreciated. I really like Einar. He became a true father figure to Harry. Something he had never really had before. Harry developing into a happy fulfilled family man was really poetic justice for Harry. In true Kinsfire tradition Harry and company also ended up having a lot of "fun"! Thanks for such a great addition to your list of Harry Potter stories. I look forward to more when it strikes your fancy! A Kinsfire fan, Patches

Crys posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 6:42pm

Yeah, Cho, you somehow forgot to mention that "broadcasting live" part. Yikes. Talk about giving him enough rope to hang himself.

Good wrap-up. Enjoyed that story. Thanks for posting it.

Wolfric posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 6:39pm

Congratulations on finishing your fine story. I have enjoyed it all the way through. Thanks for writing. W.

Slytherin66 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 6:09pm

Great and fun ending a very enjoyable chapter and story there were many nice twists and lots of oh wow moments. I look forward to your next story, thanks.

slashslut posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 6:01pm

oh, im sad that this fic has ended! harry's plan against dumbles was GENIUS!!! how could the others not see that he was completely off his broomstick? cant wait to read what you've come up with next!!!!

joeBob posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 5:53pm

Well, this story started out well (if cliched), for a pre HP6-book-release story.

But, now I remember why I didn't recall the ending from your first posting... Because I had stopped reading.

This go-round, I slogged through -- skimming much of the last 2 chapters.

Thanks for reposting.

Jamey posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 5:08pm

1) Gotta love Random Fallguy. He takes the blame for *EVERYONE* to keep the real problem people out of trouble!

2) It Started One Summer? Seems I've heard that somewhere before. I hope just *PERHAPS* the omen might mean that we get to see some Patil Presence soon?

Kimr posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 5:07pm

An excellent story, I especially liked Mr Random Falgoi, took me a few minutes to catch on to a random fall guy ;)

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 4:47pm

Great work, by the way. Sorry for that little rant, but your last paragraph just set my brain off on a weird tangent. Now all I need is for you to update Wishful Thinking. Good luck on that. Really great work once more. Congratulations and thanks for letting us share your literary genius.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 4:45pm

Totally irrelevant questin, but, due to the last paragraph of this chapter, I must ask: How is ISOS going? For that matter, how is Ties of BLood going? And when are you going to update anything at your other site?

Riegert8 posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 4:05pm

This is well written story, but it was also a very Hard story to read. You made too evil for my taste

jilumasam posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 3:37pm

That was one entertaining read!!!!! I'm glad you wrote this!!! Thanks for the great read!!!

Carol Layland posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 3:29pm

This whole story has been one of the most entrancing stories that I have ever read and I have been reading stories and books for over 72 years. I eeven rate this story equal with such authors as Isaac Asimov and Ray Bradbury. It has been a fun read. Thank you very much.
Carol Layland

Jewelle posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 3:17pm

Good story. Thanks and keep writing.

Trent posted a comment on Friday 29th January 2010 2:13pm

Okay, I can deal with the cliche of the story to this point. I can deal with the fact that parts of the story make no sense whatsoever. I can even deal with the fact that Kinsfire seems to rehash his stories over and over again (Hermione the bi-sexual, massive Dursley abuse, evil Dumbledore, etc).

That said, I threw up my hands when Cho popped up and not only was bi-sexual, but had a thing for both Hermione and Harry. This thing plays out like a teen boy fantasy run amok.

As much as I hate the character assassination that JKR did to Harry in HBP, he isn't this smart. It seems like you're just twisting Harry to be who you want him to be, instead of actually taking Harry at the end of OotP and cleverly crafting a believable character and storyline.