By Kinsfire
Reviews
CoyoteScion posted a comment on Monday 12th March 2007 8:56am
excellent chapter, much slacking fodder here for me. thank you. keep it up
Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 12th March 2007 3:45am
A wonderful chapter here, and great to see some of the greatest witches minds plotting like they are, I'd guess that the wizarding world doesn't stand a chance, and they might finally be able to make it advance in one form or another.
Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 4:03pm
Interesting developments.
Rather clumsily-done of Pansy, I must say.
PerfesserN posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 12:15pm
Excellent, as usual, nice placement for the dark mark I must say. It'll be bittersweet to see the end of this series, like saying goodbye to old friends. Ah, well.
Write on,
write on.
Ken Warner posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 10:06am
another wonderful chapter - this is a most enjoyable story, very well balanced in the various elements of romance, adventure, humor and action. Incredible job in reforming the Malfoys in a believable manner.
thanks and warmest regards
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 5:05am
Wow! I hope that the baby wasn't harmed due to the poison. I can't wait to see the next Wizengamot meeting and what wonderful things Harry does in it. I wonder how much chaos he can create while thwarting Voldedorks plans? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
Stanley Chalk posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 3:18am
Love this story. can't wait for the next chapter/
DrT posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 12:25am
A fun, if short, chapter.
"T"
morriganscrow posted a comment on Sunday 11th March 2007 12:13am
Excellent! Pretty please crank out that last chapter pronto?
Amamama posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 11:13pm
Interesting development, and it makes it clear that I need to reread the last few chapters, because I don't remember what was up with the Wizengamot?
Anyway, I like the Draco you've got here, and the bantering... Very nice.
Cheers!
KenF posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 10:36pm
OK, we've got the spell, let's slot this bad guy already.
Thanks for the update.
The Resident posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 9:26pm
I am really, REALLY looking forward to the final confrontation with Mouldieshorts. It ought to be very interesting. In the meantime, I am enjoying this story very much. As another reviewer said, the use of Narcissa's viewpoint is quite unusual and very well handled. Keep up the great work.
Wolfric posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 7:25pm
I enjoyed your chapter. Narcissa's pov is an interesting change from most stories I read. Thanks. W.
Debbie Hollander posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 7:04pm
good chapter thanks for the update can't wait for more
John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 6:29pm
This was a great chapter. I hope to see an update soon. Thanks.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 4:55pm
A very good chapter. I'm glad Draco is coming around. That and the fact that Ginny and Ron are giving him a chance. Those are very good things. Of course one of the death-eater wannabees had to attack Hermione and Cissy. I think Harry's response was understandable due to the provication. At least Pansy got told in no uncertain terms that Harry wouldn't be lenient toward anyone who hurt his family! I look forward to the last chapter. Thanks for writing. pms
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 4:35pm
Nice one, and the "team" passes another hurdle. This upcoming Wizengamot meeting, with the detection spell active, should be "fascinating".
DarkPhoenix2500 posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 3:49pm
1 small thing....both his wives get poisoned and there was no mention of the child (or possibly fetus but regardless a child none the less) but im just gonna go ahead and believe the antidote worked for the fetus and it was not harmed by the poison, or it wasn't poisoned at all. Other then that, good chapter, cant wait for more.
redjacobson posted a comment on Saturday 10th March 2007 3:22pm
good to see a new chapter of this. i see that you are getting close to wrapping it up. What's next on the list of things to do?
Red
kainboa posted a comment on Monday 12th March 2007 10:18am