David Thacker posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 1:19pm

This is the second story that has Harry with Hermione and her mom after her dad leaves them I just can not recall the other one name and it was a few months ago when I read it last.

Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 11:36am

that is... different. Not bad, just... different. It'll be interesting to see where you take this.

chase1 posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 9:34am

loved it please continue. You shpuld have some more detailed sex scenes. Like the pairing it's certainly different.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 7:21am

The 1st person is most likely the clearest existing method to get the right (as in accurate) required expository information out on the stage - This is a great start, and I am looking forward to seeing the rest almost as much as I am the other 7? 8? 9? WIPS that you have going. As a beneficiary of your great imagination, it is cool, but I am glad that I do not have quite that much going in my head.
Warmest regards
Ken

Giovanni posted a comment on Wednesday 24th May 2006 1:47am

Now this is interesting. Love the premise, love the execution so far.

Keep it up!

Brent Dax posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 11:24am

I love the premise--probably one of the more realistic routes to Harry/Multi one can come up with. Good luck...

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 10:32am

Well, this will be an interesting story. ;-)

I'm excited to see what comes next.

Keep up the good work and update again soon.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 10:23am

Interesting.

gunny

jonnyb posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 9:16am

lol... Has the basis for a great story

EricThorsen posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 4:29am

Interesting idea, will wait for more before really talking more

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 3:12am

Interesting concept. That is, can a man truly love a daughter & mother equally? Pardon me for asking, but is this a takeoff of what was hinted at in Family Matters? BTW, I actually liked the slightly-snarky first person POV. A few more interspersed would be interesting. I look forwards to the next update.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:24pm

Whoa pretty messed up but not in a bad way interested to see how this turns out. in other words get writing before i have to get out teh whip.

Hyahhhh my lil writing mule hyaaaahhh hyaahhh

n4zhg posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 9:49pm

OK, I fail to see how this is incest. Mother-in-law don't count.

scott2 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:47pm

That is going to cause issues :) (and award for understatement of the century goes to...)

Great fic and can't wait for more :)

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:11pm

A good opening (even If I realy like H/G better)

PhiloWorm posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:20pm

... errr, this reminds me of something I read on FF.net a while back, AND BY ALL GODS ABOVE I ENJOYED IT!!! Do kep up this fantastic work;=)

James Barber posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:18pm

Oh please continue this, cant wait for further updates on harry's little problem and how he or should I say the two girls/women or dau/mum help him out with that little problem... hehehehe

If only I could be so lucky!

LegalAlien posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:10pm

That an awesome start and such a wonderfully unique idea!
Please write more soon!

RedPhoenix_2k3 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:06pm

Frank and Jocelyn Granger? Don't think I've ever read a fic with those names for Hermione's parents.

If this is what comes from you playing in Jo's sandbox then be sure to play in it quite often. :)
This is a good prologue to what I hope will be a fun fic to read. Can't wait for more....

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 2:36pm

Okay...how will Hermione and her mum ambush Harry *this* time? Keith, I don't mean this as a criticism, but I could see this coming several kilometers off. Harry has to deal with what *he* sees as emotional *unfaithfulness* of the worst sort: he's sexually attracted to both his girlfriend (Hermione) *and* her mother. That he is *also* attracted to Jocelyn in ways OTHER than sexual makes things *worse*, not better. However, (given Hermione, and given *you*, Keith) I have every reason to suspect that Hermione (with help from Jocelyn) will use the Heinleinology to straighten out the Man Who Triumphed so the three of them can live Happily Ever After. Like you, I'm a major fan of RAH (I even own the restored-to-original Ace Trade "Stranger In A Strange Land", which was NOT my first time reading that particular story), and you're that rare author that manage to make his philosophy make sense in JKR's Harry Potter universe. So I'm anxiously awaiting how you get Harry to see sense.