Coolone007 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 2:05pm

interesting... Harry loves hermione so much he goes for the source as well? Is the other two mentioned in the chapter be in the tory as well? Thank you for changing out of first person after this chapter.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:57pm

Intriguing start. I love your tongue-in-cheek writing style. It's so fun to read!

Josh5 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:54pm

This seems like an interesting story. Please update soon!

Ryu Son Goku posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:48pm

Very interesting premiss... I am looking forward to where you take this. Keep up the great work

Alcatras posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:33pm

Please try to makt this fic af funny am possible.
It`s a good begining for a story.

Wizard posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 12:44pm

Ouch... poor Harry.


Now I see why I have you on my update list.

I guess there'll be friction between Jocelyn, Harry, and Hermione (pardon the pun).

[gives gleeful grin of cackle]

All in all a good read, looking forward to the next chappie!

J.

Bells posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 12:15pm

what a GREAT idea! howd you two come up with it?

Frosty posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 11:54am

I Definitly see a future for this story a I have to say I look forward to reading it. Please update asap, or if not this story then "IT Started One Summer" would be nice :)

Lorien__ posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 11:48am

"poor harry" comes to mind at the moment... love the humour... hope you keep that one going and not make it too angsty... need a good laugh...

yeah "poor harry" about sums it up...

Wolff posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 11:34am

Heh, I look forward to reading more of this. Good work, guys!

black_kitten34 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 11:26am

oh, boy this one is going to be a doozy, looking forward to the next chapter, and since you sort of hit this in Family Matters, not the incest part it should be fairly interesting.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 11:20am

Hmm, this is going to be an "interesting" story at the very least. I expect teh clarifying and refining of these relationships will take a while even with the best will in the world.

'Tis a good start on what promises to be a definitely different story.

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:54am

Great story, as I said on Tumbledweeds group. I look forward to more. This is a great start, assuming that Hermione is cool with it.

Mike (MoA)

red jacobson1 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:52am

damn Harry! You must have pissed off a lot of Chinese in your life; because you certainly live in "interesting times" *GRIN*

Nicely done

red

Lufio posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:49am

Heh. Heh hehe heh he. Harry, Harry, Harry. Now this is quite an amusing situation you've described here. I hope you keep the sardonic humor in the future story-telling.

AzureSky posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:44am

lol I love the ending.

David Brookes posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:30am

Love it. Can not wait the next chapter....

amac_1688 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:23am

i like however i would like to know are the plans for any marriage

David Thacker posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 9:24am

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

Philipe posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 9:24am

The only thing i have to say that isn't good about the fic is the amount of warnings.. But i can see why they're needed..

A really like it, but now i curious.. This sounds very interesthing.. Waiting for the next one..
P.