By Kinsfire
Reviews
Michelline posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 9:11am
Awesome! I never saw THAT coming. Momcest. Guess she's a true MILF. And how does Mum feel about this? LOL. Very nice collaboration so far. Keep 'em coming.
Knight_Hax0r posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 8:34am
-Insert Flame Here-
Heh heh heh... =D
Hmmm... Not a whole lot to go on, for an educated decision, but knowing you and your previous works It will no doubt be excellent! I look forward to reading more of this story when you deem to update it.
Molly wanting H/G? could that be because she truly wants his money? BAHH! I think she just wanted raven-haired, emarald-eyed, boys for variety of grand children! :)
Keep up the phenominal work Kinsfire!
Jeffrey1 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 8:24am
nice narrative,but it seems to be lacking in something(maybe depth). don't get me wrong,i like it.i like most of your other stories.i'm certain it will get better considering the stories (mostly incomplete i'm sad to mention.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 8:12am
Awesome!!! Of course i'm not surprised . . . I wouldn't expect anything different from you or Herman . . . I look forward to your next chapter of this . . . your next chapter of ANYTHING really . . . Keep up the good work.
'Mione
ace posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 8:09am
Very very interesting. I look forward to more of this story.
KLGreen posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 8:06am
that was totally cute
Charles Slone posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:59am
lmao....i can't wait it see if this one gets a second chapter lol
Darrell1 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:46am
Oh god please continue this its gonna be great i can tell that from here hahaha
japanese_jew posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:44am
-_- So... is this a carmen complex, or an oedipal?
nuttyal34 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:43am
I like this one! hey Keep your dirty mind working will ya!
Jason Karr posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:26am
so harry is sleeping with both hermione and her mother. So is hermione ok with this if so,I am looking forward to the next chapter
Howard posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:24am
Nice work, i was kinda <sick thought i know> hopin for another story in the vein as it were of family matters. Keep up the great work.
Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:21am
Very interesting, and I like the way you write these things. I haven't read anything else of your co-author in this story, but find he is also a good writer. Keep up the good work, both of you.
Meehanium posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:15am
well...this is going to be interesting.
LoggingInSucksAss posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:13am
hominahominahomina
In the immortal words of Keanu Reeves...
"Whoa."
James Benfield posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 7:05am
Oh ho! This is looking to be good. Keep up the good work, friend, because I cant wait to see more.
hoser41 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:54am
That was a pretty cool opening chapter.
Lira posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:46am
*chuckles* LOL! Love that writing style - even if it's so not Harry Potter! ;)
But I guess normal-style chapters will work even better! ;)
freakyfinger posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:43am
woah . . . well's thats a new idea . . .
Lionsgate posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 9:13am