shadowhc posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 2:03pm

great work ..loved it

DJ posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 1:14pm

Interesting opening really want to see ware you take it.

Wolff posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 12:35pm

This looks like an ... interesting start to a story. I rather expect that I'll enjoy this one as much as I do the rest of your writings.

AzureSky posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 11:25am

Nice prologue.

AfterDark posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 11:01am

Great way to setup the next chapter....... whens the next update???? lol

Keep them comming

DarQuing posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 10:35am

*gasps* Dun dun DUN! Hehe. I'm sorry, I couldn't resist. So far, so good. :)

James Benfield posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 10:02am

this looks intresting. I cant wait for more. Keep up the good work.

James

Tarkas posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 9:58am

Is it really Lily Evans Potter?

No, it's not, because no British woman (or Commonwealth, or indeed anyone but a Yank) would ever use their maiden name as a middle name like that -- American authors, kindly take note. It may well be Lily Potter, [i]nee[/i] Evans, but that's what the story's all about, isn't it?

When is this set -- post OotP, obviously, but is it in the summer before sixth year? Or later? Either way, the conflicts you have set up between Harry and Dumbledore have potential to send this story in all sorts of unexpected directions, and I don't imagine that Lily will be happy with the Headmaster's treatment of her son, either.

Ah, well, we shall see...

Kinsfire replied:

Thank you. I honestly hadn't known that about using the maiden name - must be an American thing. I may well go in and change that in the description.

I was thinking of doing what I'm doing with all my stories except Dark Clouds - pretend that Book Six didn't happen. I do not like it, and think she broke too many of her own characters. (Which is not to say that I do them properly, either. *grin*) This is likely to be a post OotP story, written as I get to it, when I need to write, but simply can't get going on the chapter of whatever I'm working on.

jmcqk6 posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 9:49am

very interesting concept. I look forward to reading more.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 9:38am

Uh-oh. If this really *is* Lily, then Harry isn't in trouble. However, *Albus Dumbledore* sure is! (And it could very well *be* Lily (if her soul were trapped in Harry's body somehow), which would explain the Misfired Killing Curse.)

gryffindors posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 9:29am

i really do hope you are still working on ties of blood
no matter how many times you have me hooked on a fic then move on another one without finishing it, i get mad then hooked on the new one as well

Mickey posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 9:20am

Nice start, now what? And what about your other stories? Is this just an evil plot to keep us poor readers in suspense longer?

Alex00 posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 9:03am

great start