mike bates posted a comment on Sunday 5th February 2006 12:34am

niiiiiiiice. write more chapters. write more chapters. i'm liking this one already and you need to write more for this :D. that and all of your other stories are great as well.

Tom Pearson1 posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 11:37pm

Oh, you are a cruel, cruel man.
Please write more! Although, come to think of it, with a cliffy like that you not only have plans for more, it's already being written!
By the way, have you ever heard of a fic called 'Harry Potter and the News'?

maddy143ded posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 9:04pm

if what i think is ight and the story is going in that direction then i hope you keep updating the story at a fast pace. i will be very eagarly waiting for it.

Olafr posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 8:50pm

Intriguing. Look forward to seeing more.

The Resident posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 7:37pm

An interesting start. Even though I know that this will be updated only infrequently, I will be looking forward to those times with great anticipation. You have yet to write anything that has disappointed me. Keep up the excellent work.

Alorkin posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 7:33pm

OK, that was a shocker. If this is like any of your other fics, it's going to be good. Alorkn

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 6:54pm

Interesting. Did Lily actually survive and get buried by mistake only to be awakened by Harry's touch? Did she take care of the yard at the house where James died? Did some kind of strange magic happen when Harry touched her? Is she someone else that needs to help Harry somehow? Looks like the beginning of an interesting story! Looking forward to more on this one. Thank you for writing.
pms

David Brookes posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 6:49pm

Interesting... can not wait to see what happens.

ridmania posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 6:22pm

hmmmmmmmm?

David M. Potter posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 5:41pm

Wow, I can't wait for more. I love your fics!

dstorres posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 5:06pm

Too short. Way too short.

Merle Corey posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 4:43pm

An interesting start. I am looking forward to the rationalization of how Lily lived through the attack, and was not there to raise Harry. I have wondered in the past why Lily's sacrifice worked to save Harry, but James' did not. Good stuff.

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 4:10pm

Interesting start, but wouldn't have made more sense for her to gasp "James?" when she first awakened?

exile posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 3:59pm

No more? I hope it is continued. Looks to be a wonderful start. Very interesting. ^_^

scott2 posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 3:56pm

I think harry will scream like a little girl and cast the AK in fear thus ending the story with an "oops"

Truly I think that there will be confusion some break downs from harry (you seem to like them, and having the ladies come in and say it isn't his fault, you do it well but every single story seems to be the same thing, woe is me what have I done then everyone saying sorry or it's alright blah blah blah...okay rants over, and it might not seem like it but I do like your stories) lily in the end confusing harry for James in a erotic manner awkward moments, harry beating him self up for having an oidepus (spelling?) momment, in the end shagging lil's hermione and ginny all together or not at all.

NB. your a drama writer it works for you and I enjoy reading it, it just gets old with harry beating himself up, nearly commiting suicide, the lady/ies comforting him, but like I said before the plotline works for you is readable and something that after all my criticism i'll read because it is entertaining, if not my usual cup of tea (action, adventure, dark, maybe evil, incontrol harry)

Seeya

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 3:48pm

I'll be interested to see where you take this.
Keep up the good work.

nuttyal34 posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 3:03pm

Ohhhhhhhhh. the dead arise.......

Puck posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 2:59pm

Just a touch freaky
Where you going with this?

Don't forget your other fics.. I exspecailly like your MultiMatches but write all of them

viranne posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 2:25pm

wow, that is an interesting start! It would be interesting to see how, if Lily has been alive down here all alone, that she recognizes Harry instantly as who he is rather than as James.

Rex posted a comment on Saturday 4th February 2006 2:18pm

dude up date often good start