Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 7:14am

Hmmm. Interesting. This ending has me worrying about Harry, he needs some gentle, but firm, guidance to let this fear of DOM go. Poor guy, I do understand where he comes from. And why did those idiots have to "test" Lily that way? Jerks.

Harry's arguing that the house-elves should decide Kreacher's punishment was brilliant. I'm glad Hermione saw his reasoning and agreed.

I hope Harry accepts Hermione's reasoning that he's not to blame for Sirius' death - if he can forgive Dumbledore, he should be able to forgive himself, but that forgiveness is the hardest to get... Believe me, I know.

Thanks for sharing, I'm looking forward to the next "surprise" uppdate!

Rocky235 posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 6:36am

"A bright flash later and they were all in Godrics Hollow."

I swear to Cow, (as in Holy Cow! I have to be careful not to cause any world wide fan fiction story burnings by offending anyone.), that's the first time I've seen Harry say something like that and then it happened. There's always some discussion and then the scene continues as before. It was a wonderful surprise.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 6:33am

I do believe that Harry just apparated *all eight people* back to Godric's Hollow. (And *clean through* TWO sets of Anti-Apparation Wards; not only those of the Ministry Building, but those of the DoM itself.) Number of other wizards or witches capable of that feat: *none*! (And yes, I am including both Voldy *and* Dumbledore.) There is now some *extreme chin-scratching* going on back at the Department of Mysteries. And even with three normally reliable witnesses (Hermione, Remus, and Dumbledore), who would believe that a mere sixteen-year-old wizard with *no* training could punch through the toughest set of Anti-Apparation Wards outside of Hogwarts or Gringott's, let alone carrying seven others?
The words we're looking for are *absolutely flapped*. And naturally, it will start with the aforementioned *Albus Dumbledore*.

Rocky235 posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 6:11am

"What happens now? Is it really Lily Evans Potter?"

What happens now? If it was me I know I'd have to pee. Ha

I like it, as all your work.

The Resident posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 2:57am

As always, an excellently written, fully engrossing chapter. Thank you for providing alternate looks at the HP universe and give me and so many others, hours of enjoyment. Keep up the great work.

James Benfield posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 2:16am

Great chapter! I love this story, it's to bad you only write on it when you are stuck on other things.

James

Mariposa posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 12:46am

Interesting chapter. The beginning seemed a bit choppy and rushed. Why isn't Lily surprised or sad that Sirius has died? Harry being a horcrux for Lily is an intresting idea but she didn't have to tell everyone she sleeps without pajamas, even in jest. I think it would have been more interesting for her to spring it to him in private. I think for once you rushed the sexual tension a bit. Seriously, Harry would be too shocked his mum was back to even start to think of how beautiful she is until he is just a bit more grounded. Ok so she may have a sence time has passed but, she should also be on cloud 9 to be back with her boy again. You did the protective mum bit great though. And I loved Remus reciting the poem. And I know Tonks is in the room but she's been too quiet. I like the general direction the story is going and I think, at least, Lily was an Unspeakable since there's that room in the DoM that is filled with the "power of love" or something and she obviously studied the old magicks to give Harry that protection. Good "palet cleansing" story and I'm always happy to see an update from you

Mari :oD

Alcatras posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 11:42pm

Too bad you update this sotry so iregularly because it as good as your other ones.

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 10:14pm

nice, a bit to open ended for my liking. It offers quite a few story lines however.

Soldier posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 9:43pm

He gave this story under Harry/Lily pairing, so it has to be incest.

Tom Pearson1 posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 9:39pm

I'm glad to read another chapter of this. I know it's just your 'filler' hobby, but it is enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work!

Coolone007 posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 9:28pm

So far a great start. Will Lily actually ever regenerate? Or are they forever stuck together? Will this be a Siriuse Lily fic? I am glad you are not taking an incest rought... ye from teh looks of it. I wish you would update this one though it is a nice story.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 9:19pm

A very good chapter. I like this story and if I haven't reviewed before I'm sorry. I will be able to keep up now. I applaud Harry's caution. It wouldn't be the first time that Death Eaters infiltrated the Unspeakables. Thank you for writing. pms

EricThorsen posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 7:11pm

Wow... interesting beginning. The stage direction thing was unneccesary, and confusing, but the rest of the story so far was pretty good... keep up the good work.

vertru posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 5:49pm

Whoa, that was just too damn cool Keith. That is what I call a chapter ending. Very nicely done chapter. I know this is a side project to all the others, but I wouldn't mind seeing it continue. :) But then I think that about the other 8 as well, hint hint.

Vern,

cdog21 posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 5:10pm

You know I never expected this story to be updated, but now that you have I really really want to find out what happens next. Which makes me sad because you don't update this like you do the other ones.

AzureSky posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 4:32pm

Nice chapter, a little short though.

Prince Charon posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 3:56pm

Paranoid, isn't he? I don't blame him, thou, he's got good reason.

Very interesting.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 3:05pm

fabulous chapter - thanks so much for the full text of Kipling - while I have trouble with the accent I love his work.

Nice to see Dumbledore finally learning something - although I agree with Hermione that he is getting off lightly.

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Saturday 29th April 2006 2:32pm

Ohh, now it starts getting interesting and we start finding out that Lily was rather more than most knew. This is going to be a most interesting story to follow.