xBizzle posted a comment on Saturday 7th October 2006 3:00pm

I see that in this world Harry and Tonks have obvisouly fallen for one another. I like how blunt Tonks is. Although IMO Harry seems a little negative with getting shakin' with Tonks. I don't know anyone who wouldn't do the opposite of what Harry is doing. I enjoyed this chapter and like how they are taking their friendship quicker than most authors do. Again good chapter. Onto the next one...

xBizzle posted a comment on Friday 6th October 2006 12:32pm

i like the story far. i'm so used to the by the book harry and company that its a little weird for me to be reading anything with harry and tonks romantically. hopefully more than just tonks since this is a "harem" fic as im told. thanks for the chapter and keep 'em coming.

ladyimmortal posted a comment on Friday 29th September 2006 5:38pm

Awesome story!

And even the outtakes were funny... poor Voldie!

Ppsh posted a comment on Monday 18th September 2006 7:29am

What is with the bazillion monologues in this story? Harry keeps raving on with 3000 word long monologues everytime someone asks him something.
Other then that the only things which really irritated me were the 3,879,284 concidences which makes everything fit in perfectly. There is NO problems in this story, not a single one really. And the characters are all way way too... understanding, i mean seriously, even if you loved your friends it doesnt mean you'd have no problem with your girlfriends/boyfriends sleeping with them. Its ridiculous.

Kinsfire replied:

I recommend that you do a little reading about NaNoWriMo at http://www.nanowrimo.org - that should explain quite a bit of it for you.   A hint - the motto of the contest is "Quantity, not Quality." It was my attempt to write 100,000 words in a single month.

If it's good in some people's eyes, that's wonderful. If it's not, at least I got to 95,000 words before the month was out.

It's not to everyone's taste. Nothing anyone writes is to everyone's taste.

John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 1:33pm

That was a great story. Thanks.

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 4th September 2006 5:28pm

Outstanding Story!!!! loved it, I seriously think Pornish Pixies is just to funny sorry anyways it was an awesome story, by chance how many kids does the Potter Family eventually have and will you be making stories based on what happens to them during their lives or any of the other original characters you've created? Do keep up the outstanding work though:):):):)

Chrystal_06 posted a comment on Saturday 26th August 2006 4:19pm

Fantastic story! Really enjoyed spending my time reading it, and had a great laugh at the out-takes :)
Chrystal

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 9:23am

Calling Harry DR was a masterstroke quickly enhanced by everyone else’s names. Ron surprised me though. Good chapter.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 8:26am

Poor, poor Harry but I do love the way he talks to the Goblins.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 8:00am

Oh, poor Harry!

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 7:27am

The dirty jokes in this are so funny. The Visa T-shirt was fantastic. I want one. "The lumos spell went off in her head" was a wonderful touch.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 5:39am

"Seeking for the other team" was such a great euphemism.

noylj posted a comment on Tuesday 13th June 2006 6:30am

"He made sure the safety was on before putting the magazine into the weapon, and then chambering a round."
Maybe I missed something, but I am pretty sure that my BHP locks the slide when the safety is applied. Are you by chance referencing the slide release as a "safety?" Did he remove that totally useless bit of metal that keeps the magazine from dropping free when the mag release is presses? Personally, I would take a pistol with a grip safety over a BHP--particularly a 1911 in 10mm Auto (want some power and penetration). I would also have some snipers out with rifles, with .50BMG not being out of question.

noylj posted a comment on Monday 12th June 2006 5:28pm

Too much Heinlein, not enough human...Great story, though, just not at all realistic (well, as realistic as one can be in JK's litter box). Hope this doesn't end too soon and I hope you are working on all your other stories.

Vandroza posted a comment on Friday 2nd June 2006 11:33am

love the story...this last chapter is funny :)

CoyoteScion posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2006 3:08am

I must say that this story was thoroughly enjoyable and provided me with much in the way of diversion while I should have been working. Thank you.

Torrey posted a comment on Thursday 18th May 2006 3:50pm

Great story! something I noticed though was that you said that Hermoine & co moved 3000 miles to follow Harry, when the distance between London and San Fancisco is closer to 5400 miles. And I really gotta say that I loved the Dirac Sea stuff! Conjurus backwards, classic!

Um, could I encourage you to finish your other H/Multi ship fics? :)

Thanks for the good reading!

Torrey (torjones@cox.net)

Kinsfire replied:

Y'know, you're absolutely right.   It was a bit of shorthand, since I was thinking of the fact that they were in NYC for a while, which is closer to being 3000 miles from England.

I should have fixed that, though.

thealphamale posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 6:07pm

As an American I say "thank you" for showing Americans in a good way. Too many times have I heard what people from other countries call us. It's just nice to see us portrayed the way we actually are, which is independent and passionate people.

thealphamale posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:25pm

Thank you for ruining a good story by adding a completly ridiculus rape in there. Their is no way in hell that Harry would ever allow that to happen he would probably resort to using magic knowing that he would be expelled, but he would never let that happen, the idea is fucking dumb! You seem to forget how strong Harry is!

thealphamale posted a comment on Thursday 11th May 2006 5:22pm

Thank you for ruining a good story by adding a completly ridiculus rape in there. Their is no way in hell that Harry would ever allow that to happen he would probably resort to using magic knowing that he would be expelled, but he would never let that happen, the idea is fucking dumb!