Hemotem posted a comment on Sunday 19th October 2008 7:37am

A great story thank you I like what you did with the girls and even gave Dudly a second chance!?!?! that is a good thing I guess but I thank you again for a great story.


Hemotem

Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Wednesday 1st October 2008 12:56am

This story was very good. I congratulate you on your writing and the descriptions therein.

KEEP UP the writing and PLEASE finish those stories that need to be completed. They should be just as good as the other ones I have read..

Paulette Kilgore posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 2:42pm

Wonderful. I really liked the Heinlein-y feel of the story.

tyler5555 posted a comment on Tuesday 5th August 2008 4:04am

lol thats a cool story

Brad1 posted a comment on Monday 2nd June 2008 3:56pm

I love the story hope you write a couple chapters of what happened to everybody and their kids! keep up the awesome writing!

RNCybergate posted a comment on Friday 30th May 2008 5:40am

Well fuck me!!!...That has got to be one of the most enjoyable sex scenes around.

Right up at the top with the greats.

Also... The comment about surprising Hagrid made me both...laugh and wince at the same time.
Just imagine his cock in a student...ouch...that's just got to hurt.

181 posted a comment on Wednesday 21st May 2008 2:09pm

This is the second best piece of pulp fiction I have ever read, just behind John Ringo's Paladin of Shadows series. Quentin Tarantino meets Harry Potter... I love it.

joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 17th May 2008 7:52pm

Attempted to read. Not terrible but not my cuppa. Does not engage.

Aelita posted a comment on Saturday 3rd May 2008 2:51am

I love the outtake and the story is great

Mionefan posted a comment on Monday 28th April 2008 8:29am

VERY EROTIC! What can I say, If Harry died, he would die happy.

Mionefan posted a comment on Sunday 27th April 2008 1:40pm

He he, lucky Harry! Tonks is quite a tease, I'm surprised Amelia went along with it so easily,

dennis1 posted a comment on Sunday 27th April 2008 10:04am

Good start
Nice job standing up to that big load of Vernon

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Sunday 30th March 2008 1:22pm

Remember how I pointed out that Amelia's permission for Tonks to stay (and sleep) with Harry was critical? Here's why: as much as DUMBledore would basically be blackmailing Harry, it won't fly, because in order to get to Tonks, he has to get to Amelia Bones (the MLE Director). In short, Tonks wasn't staying with Harry for DUMBledore (or the Order); this was an MLE assignment, given by her ultimate boss (Amelia) who knows full well that Tonks has it bad for Harry. Though Harry knows that Amelia approves of Tonks being there, Harry (and Tonks) don't know that Amelia is very aware that Tonks has it bad for Harry; if they had, then DUMBledore's threat would be worth less than a three-galleon coin. That is, in fact, the ONLY reason that DUMBledore's threat has any weight. Still, that was a mighty large hole Harry blew through the castle. That SHOULD have given Dumbledore serious pause (for several reasons):

1. Harry is but sixteen. (A magically-reinforced several-hundred-year-old STONE CASTLE should certainly be able to stand up to even the most adrenalin-charged fit of Magical Pique; yet it failed to stand up to Harry.)

2. Did Harry even bother to use his wand to cast that spell?

3. Put the two together and we have a truly frightening capability. Does DUMBledore really want that sort of firepower aimed at him?

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2008 3:24am

Amanuensis?

Prongs1977 posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2008 3:19am

That has to be one of the corniest, strangest, and all around FUNNIEST DAMN THINGS I've ever seen!

Drifter950 posted a comment on Wednesday 9th January 2008 10:56am

After having read the complete story, this just caps is. Well done!

Definitely going to back up and read more of your work.



May the MUSE be with you!!!

JMandrake posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 1:57pm

Well this just turned to crap. I mean uhh...lord.*fires bludgening hexes in rapid sucession*

JMandrake posted a comment on Tuesday 8th January 2008 1:17pm

Well, I am not going to lie when I say that the rape thing with dud threw me off the story. I mean it might be leading up to something in the plot, but since I haven't read the whole story then I can't be sure, but i'll keep reading.

Immortalitis posted a comment on Monday 7th January 2008 4:14am

*Cackles*

Oh, that was GLORIOUS!

What ever happened to Fleur? :D

Regards
Immo

Aberbadger posted a comment on Sunday 30th December 2007 2:21am

i can just see tonks prancing up and down singing "salah gaduna, menchah gabuna, bibbety bobbety boo"!!!