DaZZa posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 8:46am

Robert Heinlein would either be rolling in his grave, or snickering behind his hand.

I don't quite know which!

You should watch out for a visit from the lawyers of Lazarus Long! :-)

EricThorsen posted a comment on Thursday 22nd December 2005 2:54pm

Interesting... strange, having shades of Piers Anthony's Incarnations of Immortality, but definitely good. Keep up the good work.

Jack-A-Roe posted a comment on Thursday 22nd December 2005 10:50am

Well that was...um...different.

A unique take on the devil. Not quite what they had me learning about in Catholic grade school.

Actually the whole afterlife philosophy was intriguing.

If nothing else you can always get an orgy chapter out of this if you want. :-)

James Benfield posted a comment on Tuesday 13th December 2005 5:21am

You really should do a sequal for this story. Mabye show how his church turns out and what he does after bodily ascending. It'd probably be a short story, but it would be good none the less.

James

David Thacker posted a comment on Saturday 3rd December 2005 6:17pm

I like how Satan is in this story it all feels right comparied(spelling) to what is belived.

James Benfield posted a comment on Friday 2nd December 2005 6:19pm

I loved this, it made me laugh, and spit out much tea due to said laughter. Seriously, this is intresting, I wish it hadn't ended where it did, you could have done alot more and made it even better, which for an average author like me, would have been an impossibility. Keep up the good work.

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Wednesday 30th November 2005 1:20pm

Um its different.
But hey I like it.
Thankyou

Mara Flynn posted a comment on Saturday 26th November 2005 2:32pm

Hilarious! A great, fun romp, and with a harem any man would be jealous of! I especially like the afterlife!

Terry Swain posted a comment on Saturday 19th November 2005 7:18pm

this is a great story. great job.

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 3:23am

I like your 'Author Notes:' on this one. That and the last paragraph of the story. Gives hope for more of this incredibly happy story.

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:57am

I don't think I have any superlatives left, so all I'm going to do is reiterate my previous request: Don't stop writing.

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:27am

You have such a wonderful imagination and the skill to write in such a way as to evoke strong emotions in your readers. Never stop writing, you are so good at it.

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 14th November 2005 2:01am

Intreresting, very interesting. (Quote from Laugh-In)

patrik svensson posted a comment on Sunday 16th October 2005 9:02am

grejt story,
keep upp the good work.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

Endlessdesk posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 5:16pm

I loved this story, even though somethings didn't quite click, for example the fact that Snape's resentment faded rather quickly. But overall, good job and i was wondering on when you'd have a sequel or even one at all.

Coolone007 posted a comment on Thursday 6th October 2005 6:18am

it was a great story. It was interesting to wrap my mind around the freindship of Satin and Jesus. So Since he is marrying the lord of darkenss will her punishment be finsdished as well? Since you did mention that Hell was rehab. And she was cast into it for rehab. Too bad you ended it so quick I was couriouse to see your theories on the church of potter.

Mike posted a comment on Friday 30th September 2005 8:58am

very nice stories man......first thing i read on here was Like A Phoenix From The Ashes and i read that past the first chapter and onto the last one you put up and now i just got finished reading the last chapter of Death Isn't All It's Cracked Up To Be and that is also a very great story you made there as well....anyways glad to have given you something to read as a compliment on your stories and keep putting up more cause they are one thing......GREAT

Adam posted a comment on Monday 26th September 2005 6:51pm

Now this was a lot of fun to read first thing in the morning :)

Machiavelli Jr posted a comment on Sunday 25th September 2005 8:01am

Bizarre, OOS, slightly icky, very funny. The dour Yorkshireman in me wants to threaten you with eternal hellfire, except that you'd grin and probably enjoy whatever you actually ended up with, so I'll settle for congrats, thanks and WRITE MORE!

sylvain pelletier posted a comment on Thursday 1st September 2005 9:22am

I was almost right about Satan in the pool...
Nice open ending. Could have been longer but sequels (lots of them I hope) will be interesting.
I'm a big fan of Heinlein and approve the idea of the Long family (and the Potter family)

Now for a few phrases that caught my eyes:
"Can I keep him Daddy?"
THAT made me laugh loudly while I was reading during break at the office. At least, no one was around... Now I don't dare read at work... even during breaks.

"Gives a whole new meaning to the term 'GOD-son', doesn't it?"
I love that kind of pun (mines are sometimes as bad (or good) as that one).