By Kinsfire
Reviews
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 10th February 2008 6:04pm
If I didn't already know what section this story was in on your page I would be very worried for poor Harry now. As it is, I know approximately what's going to happen. And wow does Hermione have skills, without any physical stimulation no less. Wow, that's a TALENT.
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 10th February 2008 5:35pm
I like this. I'm so glad Harry is coming into his own here, I love to see him stand up for himself.
DrgnMstr posted a comment on Wednesday 16th January 2008 7:43am
I really enjoy this. Are you planning to continue this story sometime?
dennisud posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 1:16pm
That threw me a bit but its understandable given their situation.
So far an intersting story!
dennisud posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 11:43am
WOW!
That was so 'out of the park'!
The gang Rape sure changes the mood and chemistrty of the story!
Lets see where this goes.
dennisud
dennisud posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 11:18am
I'm more one to have Harry & Hermione involved in a triad with Luna or even Ginny.
But here its a fun read and belivable enough for it to be ok with mose reading this!
dennisud
dennisud posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 10:00am
First nice interplay and as for Vernon... he should have been a greasy spot at the end!
Oh well lets see where this goes!
dennisud
gadriam posted a comment on Monday 19th November 2007 6:52am
I can understand it's hard to continue from this, but for the sake of my sanity, please do!
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scribbler posted a comment on Tuesday 6th November 2007 12:39pm
I love this story!! I love where you're taking it...just wish there was more *heat*. Could you post a more graphic version to hp.adultfanfiction.net ?
I'm going to keep reading this until you finish it!!
Regards,
the_scribbler
Delta-Theta posted a comment on Tuesday 30th October 2007 4:26am
I love this fic, even if it was written witout the sex scenes it would still be a great fic. I'm looking forward to more being written, hopefully it will be sometime soon!!
keep up the good work!!
Delta-Theta
Sdarian posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 10:01am
I'm wondering why this was rated as it was. Dispite the fact that it is listed as Adult Only, there really hasn't been a need for it. There hasn't been any explicit sex, just things that let you know that it is going to or has happened. This story could be knocked down at least one, maybe two rating levels.
Sdarian posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 8:53am
How did Albus know to come there, and what needed to be done to fix things? This doesn't seem like one of the super-manipulative Dumbledore stories, so I doubt that he had them or the room bugged. Well, whatever.
ladysarah posted a comment on Tuesday 9th October 2007 1:39pm
this needs to be finished.
Katsuhito posted a comment on Friday 5th October 2007 3:13am
Over all, I enjoyed this story greatly. Mostly because H/onks is one of my favorite pairings, but you have some original material in there that caught my interest too, especially the pseudo-character of Blossom. I look forward to further explorations of that aspect. (Actually that particular plot twist reminds me of Ranma 1/2, one of the first manga series I ever bought.)
The only thing that detracts, IMO, is the pace of the story. It seems to me that, while justified/rationalized enough for believability, the romances especially in this story are a little rushed (well, the primary one anyway - or is that two.. or three...)
I hope this story is continued one way or another.
Hemotem posted a comment on Tuesday 11th September 2007 1:59pm
Damn good story I do hope you do continue it.
Thank you
Hemotem
BloodRedJawz posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2007 1:33pm
The following line would NEVER EVER occur, no matter how AU-ish a story is.
"Harry, there is no excuse for what I have done to you these years. We will find some way to keep you safe. You will never return to the Dursley household, except to get your belongings." -Dumbledore
Still, I always love a good Harry/Tonks story.
gadriam posted a comment on Wednesday 5th September 2007 6:38pm
There's nothing like a spot of Kinsfire to brighten up a sickleave. Beats tylenol every time. Not a bad Viagra substitute either in places. It's similar to a DrT-story i just read on RS, but without the trademark alienness of the good doctor.
This fic is a bit strange. I really want the next chapter, but storywise it's a bit cramped. Unfortunately, i can't really see how it could develop much. I just like Blossom to be explored further, but that's not enough to base a story on. Sadly, i understand if it's been abandoned. There are more promising beginnings on this site. Discoveries for one.
{insert standard pleas here.}
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GuardianOfLight posted a comment on Tuesday 28th August 2007 8:21am
I really hope you finish this story, its very good
steve coburn posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 2:20am
Really enjoyed this story hope you may decide to finish it one day.
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 10th February 2008 6:33pm