The Last Straw
By Kinsfire
Reviews
c50cnameless posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 12:19am for The Last Straw
please please please please post more, need more, so sad, harry can't die, he needs to live!
Alexis posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 10:57pm for The Last Straw
Great job so far, Keith! I wanted to kill Ron and Hermione after Voldemort. Talk about clueless prats. Jeez! I like Trio, but it would take a lot of groveling before they should ever be taken back - because that wasn't good planning, it was just hurtful and mean of the two of them.
XanDutch posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 11:22am for The Last Straw
Interesting way to kill Voldemort, by the way. Don't think I've seen that one before!
XanDutch posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 10:16am for The Last Straw
Oh I really hope that further chapter has Harry surviving, but not getting back together with them. He might love them, but he will never trust them with his heart again.
Some further Ginny ranting on criminal stupidity wouldn't be amiss either. *G*
Mtc297c posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 9:20am for The Last Straw
by the way, chances are, its being looked at the wrong way. ron and hermione are probably planning something for harry
Adam posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 9:10am for The Last Straw
Just been rereading this (hey is a nice story) but noticed that you appear to have let Hermione and Ron get away with treating Harry like dirt. After all they didnt even notice that he had split up with them and Gin telling them off doesnt really count as they had no idea what she was talking about. That does kinda spoil it.
Philipe posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 8:51am for The Last Straw
Strange.. but i liked it.. Very nice..
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Mtc297c posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 8:42am for The Last Straw
please post the next chapter soon
Killua posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 6:43am for The Last Straw
As others have said, if Harry survives I don't want him to be with them, they don't deserve him, and no amount of fluff will convince me otherwise. Actions have consequences, and what they did was an horrible thing to do to someone you are supposed to love. No excuses here, they have a lot to learn.
loralee posted a comment on Sunday 10th September 2006 6:36am for The Last Straw
That is a truly evil cliffy. Wonderful chapter, more soon please.
Patches posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 7:52pm for The Last Straw
I really thought that this is the end of Harry
but if there is another chapter coming I'll wait
to make my final comments. This is a good story. I am looking forward to seeing the rest. Thanks for writing. pms
Coolone007 posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 5:42pm for The Last Straw
To bad it will only be a happy ending for Ron and Hermione. In this relm that is. At least they willhave each other to cope with his death.
Jeremy DuCharme posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 5:26pm for The Last Straw
Re: Darkness describing Harry being used like a whore. I object to that description, at least a whore gets laid. :)
I would have prefered the last line to of Harry to be 'loved you', past tense. That would have indicated that the Trio 'relationship' had been dead for a year and a half as Harry had concluded, even if two of them were just now smelling how ripe the corpse was. If Kinsfire wants to steal that particular description, feel free.
OTOH Harry said he loved lots of people, possibly meaning his love of Ron and Hermoine shifted from the romantic, lets all get married, to the platonic 'I was never more than a friend and a marital aid to the two of you'. His last incomplete line 'I would have married you both if I could' would fit this with an uncompleted 'but I was never as fully in your heart like eachother'.
But that's my take on the possible outcomes, we shall have to wait for part 2, please write fast Kinsfire...
RoseKelly1021 posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 5:13pm for The Last Straw
Okay, so far I want to kill Mione & Ron. I have to admit that is maybe a first. Can I kill both of them? But WHERE are you going with this story? Well written as always and very much an attention grabber.
scott2 posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 4:38pm for The Last Straw
sad but very well written :)
heirpendragon posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 4:11pm for The Last Straw
What site was the contest on? I though t this was pretty good but I thought Harry would not be nice in the end. I think i would have liked it more if there was a big end of the trio scene.
Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 4:09pm for The Last Straw
Well, that was pretty fracked up. A well written little story, just depressing as all get out. Excellent work as usual Keith.
RedKnight posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 2:41pm for The Last Straw
Well, I think the next chapter should be interesting.
Steve Stephan posted a comment on Saturday 9th September 2006 2:02pm for The Last Straw
That was absolutely horribly painful.
AD40K posted a comment on Monday 11th September 2006 3:19am for The Last Straw
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