By Kinsfire
Reviews
lwj2 posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 9:41am
Oh, my. I like what you've started, looking forward to reading more.
Thanks for writing this.
Gaelyn posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 5:18am
Nice to see something from you, Kins! Once again, I'm hooked on the possibilities and can't wait for what's next. A bit rushed on the relationship side, I think, but still, you were trying to get through a whole summer in a chapter as a prologue-esque chapter.
Keep up the wonderful work!
firetown posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 3:33am
A very good start, glad to see you back writing
Dervish posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 3:13am
Very Nice me likey a lot
tekan posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 2:41am
Truly Awesome.
bratling posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 2:30am
More, please, Keith? Pretty please?
nfk posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 1:17am
Been a big fan of your stories for a while, so getting something new to read is always a delight! I am looking forward to reading how this story plays out.
Quick question, the word count for the first chapter is at 11,783 but the actual chapter has a little less than 6,000 words. Was part of the story cut off or is the word count being displayed incorrect?
Bob Officer posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 1:04am
Woo! well it isn't another bad dull tale about sexless and clueless Harry Potter.
It will be interesting to see how Dumble fumbles, fudge smears, umbridge takes offense.
Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 12:35am
Only one thing I can say for this beginning...Brilliant.
I love Harry's attitude and please let him keep both girls. (he deserves them both).
I can't wait to read more.
witowsmp posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 12:28am
This looks like it will be quite an interesting tale. I look forward to seeing what you have in store. I will say that I don't think the goblins, at least as a nation, would confiscate anything from anybody for the Ministry of Magic. I don't believe they take sides between humans, instead protecting everyone's valuables equally. That's why Sirius Black had access to his money to buy a Firebolt for Harry. Once they proven they'll help the Ministry or anybody else rob someone, no one would trust them with their gold again.
Robert Owen posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 11:25pm
Definately an interesting twist although perhaps a bit downplayed on the mchinations of the wizarding world against Harry and I'd have liked to have seen more on the efforts to prevent the meeting with Major and how Harry circumvented them. Bring on Chapter 2!
scribbler posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 11:25pm
Excellent Tim! I can't wait to see more of this. It's a really solid start!
Regards,
the_scribbler
Eric Oppen posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 10:50pm
This is a good start. I think Harry's been planning ahead for a while, and he's got a lot of eventualities covered. One thing I've wondered about is: Would it be possible for a wizard or witch to have more than one wand? Ollivander's may be the best place to get them, but that doesn't mean it's the only one...in my own "The Girl Nobody Knows: A Soliloquy" the "heroine" mentioned buying several used wands on the second-hand market and stashing them here and there, just in case,
MonCappy posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 10:49pm
Harry's definitely in a bit of a pickle. He has one Dark Lord out to control his every action. Another Dark Lord is out to kill him, and he has a corrupt Ministry determined to shove its head so far into the sand that they would snap his wand instead of facing the truth.
I look forward to his vengeance. May his enemies be broken spiritually, emotionally, financially, and psychologically by the end of this story.
Neil Glover posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 10:41pm
Interesting take on the snapped wand, I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
Yanagi-wa posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 10:33pm
They really don't know what they've done. I hope Harry skins them when he comes back. Great stuff
Jonathan Langford posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 10:07pm
I'm very much looking forward to seeing where this story goes. I'm also wondering what the logic was that enabled the wizarding government to claim all of Harry's things.
Where did Harry's portkey come from (the one he uses at the end)?
dg Fry posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 10:01pm
An excellent start. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
webdoc posted a comment on Thursday 5th January 2012 9:49pm
Sounds interesting...... I always love a story when fudge and the toad lady get what they so richly deserve
Michael Cornfoot posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2012 10:27am