With a Little Help From My Friends
Chapter 5
By Kinsfire
Reviews
Jason Karr posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 11:03am for Chapter 5
what about Hermione's parents, what will they think about their child being a co-wife.
The Resident posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 9:11am for Chapter 5
An excellent chapter that I just had to read twice. I only found one little thing; 'eleven year old' should be hyphenated as 'eleven-year -old' as it is used as an adjective and modifier of the noun 'girl'. Keep up the excellent work and, please, update soon.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 9:01am for Chapter 5
On re-reading, found a minor typo:
Expensive robes an have...should be
Expensive robes can have..., shouldn't it?
David Whitelock posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 5:40am for Chapter 5
I have just finished reading the story again so as to refresh my memory of it and I must say "This is the most interesting story I have ever read" and hope that you will update sooner than later. I would also like like to say that the plot is really good so far and can't wait to see how it developes not to mention what role Fudge is goimg to have in it.
Chiyo posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 1:59am for Chapter 5
Only a 14 year old would believe this stuff. Its like a 14 year olds wet dream. All your stories are the exact same...
-Harry thinks he fails at life and is tortured near to death
-Hes saved by some random girl from teh series which gets less and less believeable each time
-Women all of a sudden think hes the greatest thing ever even his enemies... oh and they also become BI overnight
-Harry now has a harem and is married to all of them
How about this. How about writing a story thats actually believeable for once? Even a minor one...that maybe just maybe could have happened. In this one and Ties of Blood you have him actually WANTING Bella and Narcissa. WTF!? And then to take the cake have the gaul to have Harry tell anyone that he'll kill them if they question it? Including Neville in TOB when she tortured his parents into insanity?
GTFO.
Kinsfire replied:
And what does it say about your level of intelligence that you've read ALL my stories and hated ALL of them?
Well, you needn't worry about that anymore. You are getting banned.
djo posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 6:01pm for Chapter 5
Great chapter - keep going!!!
Please also update the rest of your stories!
azureguy86 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 4:54pm for Chapter 5
LOVE IT!!!! Keep it coming i am so into this story i have read it 3 times this week.
Terry Swain posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 4:33pm for Chapter 5
Great chapter. :)
whyshouldicare posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 4:05pm for Chapter 5
Mna that was great. If you were to write a book I would read it. You are a very good writer and I can't wait to read your other stories.
Manatheron posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 3:29pm for Chapter 5
Interesting chapter, I had to read them all to rememeber though... not that I'm complaining... I forgot how erotic this story really was,
Keep up the excellent work!
RoseKelly1021 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 2:56pm for Chapter 5
Okay Kens,
You are gooooooood!!!! I mean really this is impressive so far. You have a wick mind for manipulation. Can wait to see Fudge's reaction.
~_^ Kelly
DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 1:49pm for Chapter 5
So nice to this one updated and so well done. I hope to see more this could be a lot of fun.
jilumasam posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 12:42pm for Chapter 5
A fantastic update. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!!!
Coolone007 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 11:31am for Chapter 5
I am glad you updated this story. It give an interesting twist to the plot and great play between the charaters reacting to it. What of Draco? I know he can no longer sier children will he come to his sences and try ti get forgivness from his monther?
If he does not will Cissa care? So fare i have not seen a reaction or interplay between them.
Minerva Granger posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 10:39am for Chapter 5
More!!!! Give us More!!!
MaryJane6707 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 10:14am for Chapter 5
Great chapter! I hope you will be able to update again soon! This is such an interesting story. I mean yeah I like the fluff, but the plot is actually very good.
KenF posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 9:52am for Chapter 5
Hot DOG!!! A new chapter. I kinda like the premise for this one.
noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 9:43am for Chapter 5
Glad to see story is being updated.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 27th September 2006 9:17am for Chapter 5
*snicker* *guffaw* That last exchange was the final capper to a most delightful & enjoyable read. Thank you very much for improving a day that had been feeling like the third Monday of the week.
Gardengirl posted a comment on Thursday 28th September 2006 12:10pm for Chapter 5