By Kinsfire
Reviews
Graup posted a comment on Sunday 2nd April 2006 7:12am
Enjoyed the story. I got a bit confused about the Mary/Tonks thing, but it worked out in the end.
I love the name Moldie - good one, there.
Thanks for sharing your story.
Patches posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 10:02pm
Great story. I like it all but especially the Halloween Ball! Quite and ending. Thank you for writing.
pms
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 11th March 2006 7:46pm
The Dark Tosser becomes the Dark TOSSEE! A Rather Pissed Harry works *through* Voldy's Crucio, beats him up Muggle-fashion, then picks him up and throws him off the Astronomy Tower to land with a rather nasty *SPLAT*! He then gets engaged to Tonks, followed shortly thereafter, apparently, to both Hermione *and* Ginny. Given how close Hermione and Ginny are to Harry, and to each other, even had they NOT been in a relationship with each other, given that neither was involved with anyone else, could you see any other reasonable alternative, Tonks or no Tonks? Lastly, there *is* no wizarding equivalent of the Archbishop of Canterbury to create the *one wizard to one witch* rule (the closest equivalent would, in fact, be Albus Dumbledore, and I didn't hear HIM say Boo....did you?) so any assumption that there IS such a rule is just that...an assumption. (Also, given that the religions of most of Muggle Europe have a Rather Low opinion of either witchcraft OR wizardry, let alone both, why in Merlin's Beard would wizarding Europe follow blindly that particular tradition found primarily in post-split Muggle Europe?)
Aberbadger posted a comment on Friday 3rd March 2006 8:21pm
actually, I'm not certain, but I think either the foreign students arrived on Halloween, or the day before, which meant that the Triwizard Tournament draw actually took place on Haloween
Evan2 posted a comment on Wednesday 1st March 2006 11:02am
I trust they came as the other 2 wives because Harry would not have displeased them had he told them he had fallen for both of them (in other words, they would have invited him to join them). In short, they want to join him and Tonks in bed. Please respond to: evanb2_860@hotmail.com
Fantastic Fox posted a comment on Wednesday 1st March 2006 7:00am
Fantastic One-Shot! Wish i could write like that!
I love the pairing and i love your stories.
Fox
Fishburne posted a comment on Wednesday 1st March 2006 1:39am
ROFL... Voldie fall down, go splat.
Always loved your HT pairings. SO much fun.
James Benfield posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 9:30pm
Sweet! Gotta love the angsty Harry, especially when it all turns out well in the end.
james
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 6:28pm
Thank you for a lovely story. Romance, angst, happily ever after. Harry ends up with the girl. What more could I ask for. Keep up the good work.
Manatheron posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 5:58pm
a... converstation... eh?
nice story, the adam part was rather a touch of risque' brilliance, but I like it.
Keep up the excellent work!
AK posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 5:05pm
Meh yeah not bad exept this part:(its serioulsy waaaaaayyyyy to uh... whats the word? well unnatural)
"I know, Harry. Not every woman hears her love say that he’d die to bring her back just to tell her that he loved her, and knows that he means it."
"I need to say it, Tonks. I love you. I love you with as much of my soul as a sixteen year old little git can know. You are truly my life."
"I know," she said, her eyes shining suspiciously. "But I’ll have you know that I do not take kindly to anyone calling my fiancé a git."
He smiled. "Okay, Tonks, I’ll not call myself a git again, at least not … not in … did you say fiancé?"
"You don’t want to be married to me?" she asked, her eyes wide, and a slight smile tweaking her lips to let him knowing that she was joking.
"If you’re crazy enough to want me, Nymph, I’m sane enough to take advantage of that. Yes! My God, yes!" He leapt from the bed to grab her in a hug, spinning her around. "Oh my God, Tonks — I love you so much!"
DJ posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 4:38pm
Good story the end was funny.
Aaran St Vines posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 2:16pm
The old man blushes, but I must say that this is a very clever bit of fluff.
Crys posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 1:37pm
> why she and Hermione had chosen to come to the party as Adam’s other two wives.
Kinsfire, please don't take this the wrong way, but I saw that coming a mile away.
Entertaining little ficlet. Thanks for sharing.
Hagrid posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 12:28pm
A day or two you say? nah, not too shabby at all...
Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 12:14pm
I love it. This was so funny that my sides hurt from the laughter. Keep up the great work.
David Thacker posted a comment on Tuesday 28th February 2006 11:36am
I would love to see a story that fills in the blanks about what Tonks thinks about Hermione and Ginny and why they whent has Adams other wives.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.
HermioneGreen posted a comment on Sunday 9th April 2006 10:50am