Three For All
Chapter 3
By Kinsfire
Reviews
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Sunday 10th February 2008 6:33pm for Chapter 3
They aren't really dirty minded if people were actually talking dirty... Im glad it's working out the way I had hoped it would.
dennisud posted a comment on Saturday 1st December 2007 11:18am for Chapter 3
I'm more one to have Harry & Hermione involved in a triad with Luna or even Ginny.
But here its a fun read and belivable enough for it to be ok with mose reading this!
dennisud
Sdarian posted a comment on Sunday 14th October 2007 8:53am for Chapter 3
How did Albus know to come there, and what needed to be done to fix things? This doesn't seem like one of the super-manipulative Dumbledore stories, so I doubt that he had them or the room bugged. Well, whatever.
Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Saturday 24th June 2006 5:36am for Chapter 3
The knickers were especially hilarious. You have a wicked sense of humour. Great chapter.
Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Monday 15th May 2006 2:47am for Chapter 3
8-| Well, that is one solution to that problem, I guess.
The wonderful thing about that closing conversation at the Gryffindor table is that it is so much like normal teen teasing and boasting that few (probably including Ginny, who as Hermione's first lover will guess what she is capable of) will realise that Harry and Hermione are being serious.
You write passion (as opposed to smut) very well and you also are good at communicating feelings. However, I maintain that you do have to jump through some real characterisation hoops to explain some of your polyamorous groups.
Overall, however, another great chapter.
BenRG's Rating: 8/10
The Resident posted a comment on Tuesday 15th November 2005 5:39am for Chapter 3
The scene at breakfast is one I'll remember for a long timr. Classic. I love it. Your ideas are great and your ability to let othes see them is outstanding.
TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Friday 12th August 2005 1:26am for Chapter 3
Very good chapter. Love it when Harry has fun...lol. Lucky stiff.
gunny
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Tuesday 26th January 2010 4:27am for Chapter 3