Practice Makes Perfect
By Kinsfire
Reviews
raitono posted a comment on Sunday 27th April 2008 1:06pm for Practice Makes Perfect
hahahahahaha!!! I love the new way of defeating old moldieshirts. Liked the wizard of oz bit too.
Mionefan posted a comment on Sunday 27th April 2008 12:35pm for Practice Makes Perfect
Oh, yes. Despite the fact that I'm a H/Hr shipper, this one is a keeper. Can't imagine why others didn't like it.
Denice posted a comment on Tuesday 15th April 2008 1:15pm for Practice Makes Perfect
Seems a bit rushed. Would've been awesome as a novel or novella. Otherwise, the writing is good, the characters are a lil OOC, but when writing about horny teenagers, I'd say they'd have to be since JKR painted them so innocent(and we all know they aren't). Overall, I'd give it a 3 out of 4 broomsticks (or stars).
Takeru Saotome posted a comment on Wednesday 9th April 2008 8:41pm for Practice Makes Perfect
Thank you for another masterpiece of written work!
Althoug I myself would have liked another of your wonderful Multi Storys better , this was one of the best storylines you could have come up with in regards to this challange .
Again , thank you .
TK
Adam Franzen posted a comment on Tuesday 18th March 2008 5:42am for Practice Makes Perfect
Don't know why people panned it before. it's a lot better than some one-shots I've read.
liz1611 posted a comment on Tuesday 18th March 2008 3:44am for Practice Makes Perfect
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!
you make me pull my hair out in tufts, but you sure have my brand of humor!
Leleanor posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 10:08am for Practice Makes Perfect
hehe I love it x
CodeRomance posted a comment on Saturday 23rd February 2008 6:49am for Practice Makes Perfect
hmmm you know i actually feel kind of sry for Voldie...that really must have hurt! haaa well really brilliant!
CodeRomance
carlelonex posted a comment on Wednesday 20th February 2008 9:55am for Practice Makes Perfect
that was both weird and halerious well done
jrokshady posted a comment on Monday 28th January 2008 10:54pm for Practice Makes Perfect
pretty good
Ricky Gene Thompson posted a comment on Monday 26th November 2007 11:02am for Practice Makes Perfect
First do not eat or drink anything while reading. Do not read with broken or bruised ribs. Enjoyed this fic very much, a nice little comedy piece even with all the porn.
Mcmllnchrstn posted a comment on Saturday 6th October 2007 3:02am for Practice Makes Perfect
YThat was funny at the end
Neil Glover posted a comment on Monday 1st October 2007 2:22am for Practice Makes Perfect
great story, liked the bit with snape.
Mark Willson posted a comment on Tuesday 25th September 2007 5:11am for Practice Makes Perfect
I liked it. Very interesting way of defeating Voldermort. Cheers
lydiakate98 posted a comment on Wednesday 19th September 2007 12:35pm for Practice Makes Perfect
I really enjoyed this. It was cute and fluffy. I really liked the Wizard of Oz bit and the comments in the shower. While not literature of the highest degree it was certainly something that fills my sweet quotient for the day.
Lydia
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Tuesday 18th September 2007 4:41pm for Practice Makes Perfect
Well I disagree with all the people that disliked this. I think it's utterly fantastic. They were just mad because they couldn't find the sex part instantly and had to get through plot before they could get off. I think your idea is a splendid one, with it killing Voldie and all. Quite fantastic, I am truly impressed
Inibrius posted a comment on Thursday 6th September 2007 10:09am for Practice Makes Perfect
freaking hilarious.
Miss_sigma posted a comment on Saturday 25th August 2007 4:59am for Practice Makes Perfect
Well, I liked it, and I have no idea what the people at the H/G ficafest where thinking giving it neagtive reviews, I particularaly like the way Voldemort died though.
Clell65619 posted a comment on Friday 24th August 2007 7:15am for Practice Makes Perfect
Death by orgasm. How... unique.
amk31094 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd May 2008 2:48am for Practice Makes Perfect