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Ishi posted a comment on Saturday 11th April 2009 3:06pm for Practice Makes Perfect

I thought it was great. I like plots with my smut, and it was certainly a solution that fits in well with the confrontation in the fifth book. Ignore those silly ficafest journalers, if I'd been there I would have told you how awesome it was.

Dustin Hoeppner posted a comment on Saturday 28th March 2009 9:29am for Practice Makes Perfect

Very good story. Keep on writing.

Waywren Truesong posted a comment on Thursday 26th March 2009 4:41pm for Practice Makes Perfect

I think that the people on that Ficafest were nuts--this was beautiful. Probably all they wanted was smut, but smut's more fun with a story. I particularly loved the bit about Harry and Ginny making Voldie's head outright implode. ^^

Louis Bengtson posted a comment on Wednesday 25th March 2009 2:49pm for Practice Makes Perfect

That was a most enjoyable story. I was directed here by a reviewer on fanfiction.net of a story I posted recently. It uses a similar idea, but focuses mainly on Voldemort's receiving end. Excellent story, quite well written. Best of luck in all future writing endeavors.

aznpieslice posted a comment on Sunday 22nd March 2009 2:28pm for Practice Makes Perfect

hot and funny.t

Xavi7th posted a comment on Sunday 22nd March 2009 1:09am for Practice Makes Perfect

Bold, hilarious and some.

Merciful Moonlight posted a comment on Tuesday 10th March 2009 8:53am for Practice Makes Perfect

Pretty much everyone was OOC, but I thought this was hilarious!

sejones posted a comment on Friday 23rd January 2009 1:57pm for Practice Makes Perfect

I supose the reviewers wanted more porn and less plot. I, on the other hand, thoroughly enjoyed this story. I have read it several times and it never fails to make me smile.

blaine542002 posted a comment on Monday 19th January 2009 5:09am for Practice Makes Perfect

perfect ending

Mistress of Potions posted a comment on Friday 9th January 2009 6:28pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Piffle on the naysayers and plot be damned! I agree with Professor Snape 200 points!

Dragon63 posted a comment on Monday 17th November 2008 6:24pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Happened to stumble upon Herman Tumbleweed's stories over on FFNet, and in his many author's notes, kept mentioning your nom de plume. Thinking that name sounded familiar, I headed over here to FFA, and found you... so now I'm starting to read through your stories. But enough with the background, and on to the review.

As far as I am concerned, PWP gets quite boring. I much prefer my porn (especially the written form of it) to not only have a plot, but to have good characters as well. Granted, the characters here were initially developed by another writer (who, IMNSHO, did not develop *any* of her characters nearly well enough), but your treatment of them rang quite true... except for the Greasy Git, but hey, *anyone* can change when they've had a life-changing experience. And I'd have to say that watching the Dork Lord's head implode is most certainly one of those!

Thus, as far as *this* reader is concerned, this is a most excellent story, with the minor exception (as with all good stories) of it being too short. Yeah, yeah, technically it is just the right length, but you know us voracious readers, we 8always* want more, lol!!

Thanks, Good Job, looking forward to reading more of your work!

Dave

DarkHeart posted a comment on Wednesday 22nd October 2008 2:03pm for Practice Makes Perfect

*twitching*

Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Wednesday 17th September 2008 11:50pm for Practice Makes Perfect

This would have to be one of the best 'adult' stories I have read.

The idea that Voldemort can be killed with Harry and Ginny making love is just brilliant.

Again...WELL DONE!!


PhoenixFeather posted a comment on Sunday 14th September 2008 10:42am for Practice Makes Perfect

ok, i can understand why soe people didnt like this story. It is a bit brassy, buti found it to be funny. I liked snape at the end, hilarous.

~phoenix

boricuagizmo1 posted a comment on Tuesday 26th August 2008 6:38am for Practice Makes Perfect

that had to be the best way to kill voldemort i've ever read...im still laughin

Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Saturday 28th June 2008 5:06pm for Practice Makes Perfect

Congratulations..... This would have to be one of the best ways I have read to defeat the dark lord..

Brad1 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th May 2008 8:01pm for Practice Makes Perfect

loved it hopefully you write a sequel with the wedding! keep up the awesome writing!

Mark Blaine posted a comment on Wednesday 28th May 2008 1:03pm for Practice Makes Perfect

I liked it.

lillybet69 posted a comment on Monday 19th May 2008 4:24am for Practice Makes Perfect

best story EVER! :D

J3ster posted a comment on Monday 19th May 2008 3:17am for Practice Makes Perfect

great fanfic. don't know why others complained. i thought it was great!