John Fitzgerald posted a comment on Saturday 23rd September 2006 4:58pm for Chapter 6

I wish that you would continue this story. THanks.

DaZZa posted a comment on Wednesday 20th September 2006 3:02pm for Chapter 6

Damn shame you abandoned this one. I was really enjoying it.

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Thursday 24th August 2006 5:21pm for Chapter 6

I think I just might have a few Ideas for this series. It's a pity you Abandoned it, but would you mind terribly if someone else had a shot at working on it? I can think of a few interesting situations, and there are a few suggestions made earlier on, which I would love to see eventuate.

potterfrkintx posted a comment on Wednesday 2nd August 2006 8:45pm for Chapter 6

oh my god!! Have you ever written erotica? I don't know if it's just me or if it's the way you write cuz I have a stiffy after that chapter. PLEASE update soon!! I know you have other fics in the works, but PUHLEASE update soon. :)

Puck posted a comment on Tuesday 18th July 2006 6:53am for Chapter 6

Kinsfire-

Ya need to continue this PLEASE

Josh6 posted a comment on Friday 30th June 2006 11:30pm for Chapter 6

awesome chapter, youir doing a really good job with the story

Tim T.M. posted a comment on Thursday 22nd June 2006 4:48am for Chapter 6

hi Kinsfire

I have read all your sotry here. In fact i have read them so many time i am starting to memeris them. so pleas finch this story and the others befor going bonker!

Tim T.M. posted a comment on Wednesday 14th June 2006 9:36am for Chapter 6

Kinfire i am new to this site. and you are dring me up a wall. i like what i am reading but by the dates on the stores you have not been doing a lot of writing .So pleas finch or at lest write a little fast :) . Tim

Ken Warner posted a comment on Tuesday 6th June 2006 2:07pm for Chapter 6

just re-read this for the 3rd or 4th time and enjoyed jsut as much, if not a little more than the others\great work and much appreciated.

David M. Potter posted a comment on Wednesday 31st May 2006 11:55pm for Chapter 6

Bravo! I love this fic. I hope it is updated soon.

jarno posted a comment on Thursday 18th May 2006 7:59pm for Chapter 6

update update update ists a good fic

kalee posted a comment on Sunday 30th April 2006 4:31am for Chapter 6

oh my god i loved it if you have any more mature-adult only harry/hermione please e-mail them or the links to me at gettogurl3001@yahoo.com your a great writer

Life's a Dance posted a comment on Thursday 6th April 2006 8:55am for Chapter 6

Are you going to update this?

Mariposa posted a comment on Thursday 30th March 2006 9:32am for Chapter 6

About the most expressive I get is biting my lower lip.

LOL! That was so good! And your writing is too hot! This is my first day reading this and I can't wait to read more!

Mari

jake m posted a comment on Thursday 16th March 2006 3:38pm for Chapter 6

okay......could go somewherw write more

dadofdj posted a comment on Thursday 9th March 2006 12:10pm for Chapter 6

Like all your other stories excellent work. Please update this one and the others when you can. Thank you.

Brian Campbell posted a comment on Tuesday 21st February 2006 6:12pm for Chapter 6

Got to say, I love all your writing, beginning with "Family Matters." I've noticed that you seem very skilled in portraying a young person in the chains of depression, leaving this survivor of severe teen depression (more than 16 years ago) very impressed with the realism. "My Father's Image" continues with very realistic emotional scenes, and though I bounce like a five-year-old in the McDonalds Drive-In Lane waiting for new chapters, I also appreciate that you don't offer quick resolutions to severe negative emotions, such as anger and depression. Oops, run-on sentence - sorry.
Of all the stories you still have incomplete, I think this is one of my favorites. I wish JKR would deal with Albus' criminal negligence in leaving HP with the Dursleys. As a minister, should I find a minor being emotionally and physically abuse in such a way, I would be considered an accessory to child abuse for not reporting, as would any physician or teacher. I assume England's laws are not that dissimilar from those of South Carolina. In addition, I would lose my ministerial credentials with no possibility of ever getting them back.
I find that I have no serious criticisms to offer. Many writers bring HP into multi-amorous situations quite unrealistically, but I find that when they occur for reasons other than simple lust or perversity, they actually happened much more slowly than those other writers might wish. I suspect laziness on the part of the other authors. Your delightfully long and intricate chapters set a much higher standard. If you ever publish something I can get at B.Daltons or elsewhere, I predict an immediate drop in my cash-flow, since I'd go crazy getting my order in.
One could wish for more frequent updates, but I do understand that you must have a life. I may review some other tale in the future, but for now, best wishes -
BC

Alice Kendalwood posted a comment on Saturday 11th February 2006 3:24pm for Chapter 6

Very nice. I'm just waiting for the twist. Will it be that Lily slept with Sirius as well, and Sirius is Harry's real father? I, personally, find it odd that he looks so much like James. Wizarding genetics, I suppose.

Alex00 posted a comment on Monday 30th January 2006 5:42pm for Chapter 6

great chapter please update soon

Patches posted a comment on Sunday 8th January 2006 11:02pm for Chapter 6

Very well done. Not too much details but enough to see a loving first time for both of them. Please write some more on this story. It is a good one. Thanks for writing.