reimanr06 posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 12:45pm for Chapter 16

we know the armor keeps the bullet from penetrating into the body, but does it do enough to keep the blunt force from causing internal injuries, possibly to the baby?

Selector11 posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 12:00pm for Chapter 16

As great as the rest

AzureSky posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 11:51am for Chapter 16

Nice.

Tim Henderson posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 10:44am for Chapter 16

I'm kinda surprised you didn't mention the year long lie about Ron's relationship with Hermione in his talk with Ginny.

Alcatras posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 10:36am for Chapter 16

Not much left till the end.
Good chapter.I realy love the whole story.

Mariposa posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 9:46am for Chapter 16

Yea! Another update! Lovely chapter! I could have done without all the firearms but that's just me. I don't find them fascinating. The part with Ginny and Ron was very sweet. I really liked Harry overhearing that conversation but I don't know why I do.

Elfguard48 posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 9:44am for Chapter 16

OOOOHH!!! DD is going to be a Great Grandad. That's in two ways. Glad Harry made DD part of his family. Great chapter Great story. Until the next installment I'll be thinking of the look on the Dirk Lord's face when the AK fails.

TTFN..Helen

kcgx23 posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 8:27am for Chapter 16

Fabulous chapter, I loved the "cream filling" comment from Luna, Update soon.

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 8:21am for Chapter 16

Now this was good! A vest that can stop the Killing Curse, and protect frm physical attacks. The girls are beauty and brains put together! Nice! Just have to hope that the Killing Curse isn't aimed at exposed areas, otherwise its goodbye.

Keep it up!

Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 8:20am for Chapter 16

excellent, I hope the next chapter comes soon.

Jason Karr posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 7:38am for Chapter 16

this is a great chapter to read. it is a good read

nuttyal34 posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 7:22am for Chapter 16

gwacks..... you are talking about Barrett M107 sniper rifle? You forget that the even a ball bullet can go thru 1 inch of tempered steel! and thing is there is even a armor preicing round for that rifle it suppose able to go thru 3 inches of steel! if this is real life harry will be blown in half just with B.. of blam! the officail range is one mile but i know of range that is much longer then that it's 1 1/2 miles. that is true maxuim range for it! updsate asap will ya!

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 7:14am for Chapter 16

Nicely done. good stage-setting.

Ken Warner posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 6:53am for Chapter 16

LOve the multi layered approach to armor, but this sort of thing, materials aside, has been used for centuries of Muggle warfare - has there really been so little interaction between the worlds that victorian fashions and mores crossed but weapons research did not?

It does not detract in the least from the wonderful story line or the enjoyment in seeing Harry and his line marriage happy

thanks for sharing.

Terry Swain posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 6:43am for Chapter 16

Great chapter. :)

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 6:23am for Chapter 16

Go get em Harry! You lucky bastard!

c3markh posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 4:29am for Chapter 16

Love the chapter. I think all of your styories are great. I dislike the jumping in between stories but I do understand Writers block and your need to work on something different. Really the reason I dislike jumping between stories is for my on selfish reasons. I would like to keep reading the story until the end. Great job in writing and updating as quickly as you do.

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 4:24am for Chapter 16

Hmmm... Harry and his wives should have somehow brought the Malfoys to the castle and used THEM for testing out the vest!

I really liked this chapter.

Treck posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 3:43am for Chapter 16

BRAVO!

The only criticisim (sp) that I can see is wanting a paragraph or three covering the Malfoy's escape from justice.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Friday 21st July 2006 3:39am for Chapter 16

OH! We're near the end! Woo-hoo! Er, actually, not really. That means no more of the story to read . . . sigh . . .