MichelleG posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 5:43am for Chapter 15

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Davideg posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 3:00am for Chapter 15

this story is great keep up the fantastic work

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 2:27am for Chapter 15

Nice, though I'm curious to see how the mess with Neville and his gran shakes loose. She was being a bit of a bitch on wheels, wasn't she? All I can say is any chapter that involves a Malfoy getting blown through a wall and urinated on is a good one. Great job, thank you.

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 1:52am for Chapter 15

Good chapter Kinsfire, but one mistake I think... I thought that at this point in the story only Luna was pregnant, and Hermione was trying to become so. You stated that two were pregnant and hopefully a third would be also after the library. So, when did susan become pregnant?

Sonicdale posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 1:51am for Chapter 15

Dare I type it?
This is Kinsfire, Keith, we're talking about here.
It could work. He's a rational person.
He can string sentences together coherently.
Maybe he can take it.
I certainly hope so.

Ahem.

Mr. Keith. I respectfully submit that this story could be stripped of the explicit sex and the story and plot wouldn't suffer. You've given us a great bond between Harry and his wives. I wonder if you could or even would do it.

Just a thought. Not really expecting you to do so, but I had to put the idea down.

Loved the Neville interaction. Hope to see him more. Hermione's shield idea is going to factor into the end of the story - I only hope it's not too much of a MacGuffin.

Good work. Looking forward to the next chapter.

KLGreen posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 1:11am for Chapter 15

That means that Susan is having a baby?
I liked it very much especially the part with Ginny

c3markh posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 12:39am for Chapter 15

Love the chapter and I am glad to see the story continuing on. Thanks for writing.

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 12:32am for Chapter 15

Another fantasmic chapter. I hope Ginny was truely sorry. Becuase I won't feel sorry for her if she wasn't. Keep up the good work.

'Mione

red jacobson1 posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 12:17am for Chapter 15

nice! good to see another chapter of this story, keith.

red

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 29th June 2006 12:11am for Chapter 15

Well, Lucius Malfoy, I hate to tell you that Neville Longbottom actually grew a SPINE this school year! (Whoever would have thought that Lucius Malfoy would lose a War of Words to *any* Longbottom, let alone Neville? And in public, no less!) "You talk down to everyone in the world, and even a *mosquito* is your better." - Neville Longbottom. Definitely choice.

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 11:36pm for Chapter 15

^_^ Thanks for the update. It would appear that things are moving quite pleasently now. I want to see more soon though! Keep it up!

John Wilburn posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 10:40pm for Chapter 15

Dear Keith,
Another winning chapter, I really look forward to your updates.
John

Nightwing510 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 10:35pm for Chapter 15

I enjoyed reading your story. I laughed where the Dog pedd on Lucius Malfoy. And when the woman caused soap bubbles to come out of his mouth. Please update soon.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 10:26pm for Chapter 15

Neville standing up to Lucius was almost as heavenly as the beagle. The shagging shield idea was so funny. Good chapter, as always.

n4zhg posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 9:41pm for Chapter 15

Good chapter, just some continuity issues.

Harry is saying two maybe three wives are pregnant, but in the last chapter only Luna was confirmed.

Also, shouldn't it be Ravenclaw apologizing and not Hufflepuff? Not many of the Puffs turned on Harry from what I remember.

djo posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 5:26pm for Chapter 15

Again a chapter where a lot is happening - the ongoing reformation of the governors board of Hogwarts; Ginny's apology (I think it was sincere, but only the future will tell...) and the planning for Voldemorts demise is firming up and putting muggle technology into the equation will secure the anihilation of the dark lord in my opinion.

Definitely looking forward to the next chapters and the big finale!
Dominik

David M. Potter posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 5:23pm for Chapter 15

Awesome chapter and fic.

Wolff posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 4:54pm for Chapter 15

yet another masterful piece, Keith. Well done. Even when angsty, your works always leave me with a smile. Can we possibly convince you to replace JKR and write book 7 and rewrite book 6?

Kinsfire replied:

Amusingly, at one point I had considered reading through HBP again and writing down all the important things and then doing just that - rewriting HBP.

See what would happen if I took all her info and ran with it - all the important things showing up, and even ending as it should, but rewritten in my style.   (It would not be a harem story, mind you.)

May yet do it before the new book comes out.

Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 4:36pm for Chapter 15

Excellent chapter. (I really should learn another language so that I can say more verbose and varried things than that every time, but, hey, it's too late to learn proper English and so all I have is bad English)

The library smut scene was good, if a bit light on smut. I worry about two (or three [maybe four]) of Harry's wives going into battle pregnant, but I'm sure that it will work out.

Thank you for writing and sharing.

Mike (MoA)

Nick5 posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 4:29pm for Chapter 15

'We shall orgasm our way into victory!'

'Well, there are harder ways to win a war...'

Hehehehe, good part. More, soon, please.