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Scott Sakraida posted a comment on Saturday 28th January 2006 4:59am for Chapter 13

Good story, u gonna update it anytime in the future?

bmatsea posted a comment on Friday 27th January 2006 7:40pm for Chapter 13

dang it, finish this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Life's a Dance posted a comment on Sunday 22nd January 2006 7:40pm for Chapter 13

Are you going to update this story soon? It'd be greatly appreciated! *looks at you with souldul puppy dog eyes* Please?

Tom Pearson1 posted a comment on Monday 16th January 2006 4:52am for Chapter 13

Hi.
I just wanted to say that I really like this, and that I hope it's not on permanent hold. It looks like it's a while since this was last updated. Are you just hoping to finish other projects (read Ties of Blood) first? Or is it just lack of interest? I certainly hope it's not abandonned. While I do love Ties of Blood too (neglected!Harry when his parents are alive? Genius!), this is too much fun to end now.
Thanks for all the hard work!
Tom

Mickey posted a comment on Monday 9th January 2006 2:26am for Chapter 13

Very nice. Hope you update soon.

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Saturday 7th January 2006 11:52am for Chapter 13

still planning to keep us update?

kcgx23 posted a comment on Monday 2nd January 2006 6:32pm for Chapter 13

I Love this sory, please update soon, I really want to read more.kcgx23@yahoo.co.uk

EricThorsen posted a comment on Sunday 25th December 2005 2:25pm for Chapter 13

I like this one too... now we just need to see if I like the way the rest goes... keep up the good work.

JVTazz posted a comment on Saturday 24th December 2005 2:47pm for Chapter 13

Have you abandoned this story?

Carolyn1 posted a comment on Monday 19th December 2005 5:13am for Chapter 13

Hi. I like the story, I hope that you continue it soon. I look forward to seeing the reactions of the people at Hogwarts, as well as the Weasleys, and the Order.

Exarikun posted a comment on Sunday 11th December 2005 7:09am for Chapter 13

UPDATE!!!

forgive me for borrowing your chars for a bit, but i put together a scene for the future... it's after dumbledore puts his position of chief warlock to good use and gets harry back to hogwarts, where our quintet meets up with the betrayers again...
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Ginny was apprehensive when she entered the Great Hall. She was looking for Harry and she only hoped he'd still talk to her. Rather predictably, he was sitting at his own table, surrounded by the four girls that never gave up on him, and Neville, who'd apparently come to his senses a whole lot sooner than the rest had. She winced, remembering how she gave up her friendship with Hermione and Luna because they sided with Harry. Taking a deep breath, she gathered her courage and walked up to the table.

"Harry? Can I talk to you for a moment? Alone?" She asked.

"Whatever you have to say, you can say right here. We keep no secrets among us." Harry answered, his voice not giving away any emotion he might be feeling now. Ginny cursed inwardly. She'd hoped to talk to Harry alone, away from the girls.

"Ok, Harry, if that's what you prefer." Taking another deep breath, she continued. "I wanted to apologise for the way I've been treating you, and believing Bill and Charlie when they accused you. It was wrong of me to think you could have done that to me." Ginny had fought against the urge to lower her eyes, but she'd succeeded. She had made her apology, and she'd done it without looking away from him.

"Apology not accepted." Harry said after a few moments delibiration. "Now, if that was all, I'd like to get back to my dinner with my wives." Harry said, and turned back to the table.

"WHAT!? Your wives?? But I thought you loved ME!" Ginny exclaimed rather loudly, gaining the attention of all those in the hall.

Harry snorted. "Loved you? Like you loved me enough to find out my side of the story before condemning me? I might have loved you at some point, but with your actions towards me, you've proven quite clearly that whatever you felt for me wasn't love."

"But..."

"No buts, Ginevra. If you only came here to see if we could pick up where you broke it off, then I'm going to tell you straight up, it'll never happen. That path is dead, because of your actions, and those of your family. I might forgive you somewhere in the future, but I'll never forget what you did and said. If you prove yourself to be trustworthy again, then we might be friends again at some point. But never more."

And with that, Harry turned back to his table where his wives and Neville sat, all looking at the exchange. Ginny finally understood just what she had given up because she hadn't bothered to get Harry's side of the story her oldest brothers had spun before her. She turned around, and fled to the Gryffindor tower, tears flowing freely across her cheeks.
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there, that's what i came up with. i don't know if it's up to your standards, but it's something i could see happen. should you like it, feel free to use it, or part of it as you see fit. if you don't like it, then ignore it :P

anyway, hope you'll update soon.

Fantastic Fox posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 11:59am for Chapter 13

Please update this excellent piece of fiction!
It actually hurts...not to know how the Weaslette is reacting to the marriage :-)

Best wishes from germany...Fox

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Saturday 10th December 2005 2:34am for Chapter 13

You said on the notice board that you would work solely on this one. How come not done then? Grin.

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 2:01pm for Chapter 13

Wopeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!

James Benfield posted a comment on Thursday 8th December 2005 3:09pm for Chapter 13

Great so far! Keepup the good work.

James

eddie posted a comment on Thursday 8th December 2005 10:45am for Chapter 13

you just have to update this one soon it is outstanding. i love it. it is very well writen.

noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 7th December 2005 1:56am for Chapter 13

need to update...or tell us that this story is dead. heck, maybe you could pass on to some else to finish

crs_seq posted a comment on Tuesday 6th December 2005 4:05am for Chapter 13

update please

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Monday 5th December 2005 6:00am for Chapter 13

very good work on this story. I realy hope you plan for an update

Genesis posted a comment on Sunday 4th December 2005 1:37pm for Chapter 13

You are truly a gifted writter. I've read two of your stories now and I have been unable to sto until I finished with both.

I find it wonderful that you can add the adult themes with such taste and class. I first expected it to take away from the story, but it adds quite a bit. I actaually feel it add a bit more realism to it, as far as connection is concerned.

I turly look forward to the completion of this. In the meantime, I'll check out more of your work.

Again, you are truly gifted in this field and I'm pleased to have came across your work.