silenceondablock posted a comment on Sunday 1st August 2010 2:14pm for Chapter 3

SUCCESS !!!!!!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 11th December 2008 1:26pm for Chapter 3

This chapter features something new: Logical!Harry (almost Ravenclaw!Harry). Why that's plausible: Hermione's accused him (in canon, and more than once) of hiding his intelligence. Why he does so: the treatment he got at an early age from the Dursleys if he did better than Dudley. As Moody would say, "Nails that stick get hammered; hammers hurt!" (Another canon example: Harry's OWL scores in DADA and Charms, especially Defense. While Hermione had a higher OWL score in Charms, Harry had Hermione pretty well smoked in Defense; in fact, nobody had as high an OWL score in Defense as Harry did before. At all. And that includes Riddle and both of Hogwarts' resident Duelling Masters (Flitwick and Snape), let alone Dumbledore. As revered as Dumbledore is, his strengths were in Transfiguration and Potions, not Defense (remember, he taught Transfiguration before becoming Headmaster). Which is why a Manipulative!Dumbles, let alone Evil!Dumbles, would definitely regard Harry as a threat, Prophecy or no.)

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Tuesday 27th November 2007 6:01pm for Chapter 3

Yay, it just keeps getting better. Tonks and I have the same problem, how funny. Harry is very realistic, I think he would be just like that in this situation.

Rebel Goddess posted a comment on Wednesday 28th June 2006 7:27am for Chapter 3

The dirty jokes in this are so funny. The Visa T-shirt was fantastic. I want one. "The lumos spell went off in her head" was a wonderful touch.

The Resident posted a comment on Sunday 13th November 2005 4:33pm for Chapter 3

Very nice and sweet and living up to what I mentioned in my last review. My opinion of you has just gone up another notch. You're building the story nicely, giving it time to 'grow' instead of forcing it. Well done.