Sepiroth posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:03am for Oh What Have I done?

great story please continue this asap

Alorkin posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:00am for Oh What Have I done?

This ought to turn into a very *interesting* read. Well done again! I anxiously await the next installment of this as well as 'Ties of Blood' 'It started One Summer' 'Three for all' and any of your incomplete stories. Alorkin
Oh, BTW, I hit the 'do not respond to this' link accidentally. If you have a response to my responses, please feel free to respond. Alorkin

Nightwing510 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:41am for Oh What Have I done?

I liked how you told what had happened to everyone after they destroyed Voldemort & the Horecuxs also.

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:26am for Oh What Have I done?

Oh ho... what a story you guys have started... great beginning...

And of course... No, I for one do NOT have a problem with the femmeslash, incest, nudity, sex, um... anyother words that can be used to describe your story... I fully intend to enjoy this mainly because Harry is getting laid by Hermione! *grin* I personally don't care if there is others involved, as long as Hermione and Harry are together...

Remember always to ship what is RIGHT not what is easy... and with the way that Keith writes Nothing is EVER easy! (except for the amount of times Harry can get laid!)

A note to Herman... great work too... gotta love collaborations! I especially like the other story you have got going on right now as well...

Keep up the great work...

As Always,
Muirnin - who is being interrupted by a 5 year old who is trying to learn to read a LOT more than he is supposed to before he enters Kindergarden... (No he was NOT just trying to read this story! He has a children's dictionary and is asking me questions about the words he has found! Did I say my Babes were Brilliant?)

cravingvenom posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:25am for Oh What Have I done?

Oh my god; sick as i like them.
No really...it seems the femslash will be between the mother and the child. (now i understand the incest warning)
Highly disturbing...
I guess... the plot is interesting..that is for sure.
I like the idea...well...the idea that harry love the two of them.
it just..ah...i'll just skip the part of femslash i guess....no point in leaving a story with a good plot just because certain part makes you queasy.
Anyway, good work.
I'll look out for another chapter.

Yours,
Cravingvenom

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:22am for Oh What Have I done?

Well that is one hell of a start to a story. Gets that bothersome Riddle B.S. out of the way so we can get right to the good stuff. Though I'd be curious to see Molly, I can't imagine that the rest of her family took her getting in a snit with Harry over Ginny and him not working out too well.

Robert Hope posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:17am for Oh What Have I done?

Nice chapter, saw something like it on ff.net, but yours is much better written. Hope to read more soon.

Elfguard48 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:13am for Oh What Have I done?

Oh Deadly good this is. Cannot wait for the next chapter aka cliffie. I do feelfor Hermione and her mom. Poor Harry is in the middle. Keep up the great work

Brandon West posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:05am for Oh What Have I done?

AHhh!! Incest!! Flame, flame, random rant deriding your ability, call into question your sanity, etc.

Anyways. It's actually not a bad basis, since I don't think we have much in the way of a description of what Mrs. Granger (Ms. Granger now?) looks like so you have carte blanche.

Depending on what happens I may squick out, but probably not.

Ron posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:02am for Oh What Have I done?

I didn't really believe you guys would go ahead with this. I'm glad you did though,and want to see more of it!

AK posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:01am for Oh What Have I done?

Oh, is this one going to be funny rather than angsty (that would be a nice addition to your stories) lately you had a bit too much angst.

I think it's a bit too bad that the rest won't be in first person. Good first person stories are EXTREMELY rare and this chapter was very nice.

Looking forward to reading more

Jason Fraser posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:01am for Oh What Have I done?

Hmmm... I don't know whether to say "Poor Harry" or "Cor! Harry!" :) A perfect "prologue-type" chapter there. I'll assume that future chapters will have the exploration of the relationship between the three?

I'd love to see more of this, as the idea intrigues me very much, and I know that with Kinsfire involved, it'll be a very interesting read... Thanks for a great first chapter.

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:52am for Oh What Have I done?

Oo... kay. Of course, after Family Matters, a deliberate H/Hr/J triangle story was inevitable. I look forward to seeing what you propose to do with this.

The "What the hell has just happened" explanations were quite interesting and believably IC, especially the nuclear war-level breakup between Ron and Hermione.

Mickey posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:50am for Oh What Have I done?

THIS BETTER NOT BE A STAND ALONE! A very intresting first chapter and I hope you write the rest of the story soon.

Darkness posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:46am for Oh What Have I done?

Creepy! LOL!

Its damn interesting, I'll give you that. Especially the whole mess Harry's in with Hermy's mom. I wonder how Hermione will take it. Maybe that super-computer she has for a brain can come up with something that allows Harry to be with both her and her mom while not really commiting a crime. Who knows?

This story is like coffee in the morning. You take it and you look down at the essay you wrote yesterday night and you just go,WTF!!!!