Brent Dax posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 11:24am for Oh What Have I done?

I love the premise--probably one of the more realistic routes to Harry/Multi one can come up with. Good luck...

Greg Johnson posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 10:32am for Oh What Have I done?

Well, this will be an interesting story. ;-)

I'm excited to see what comes next.

Keep up the good work and update again soon.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 10:23am for Oh What Have I done?

Interesting.

gunny

jonnyb posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 9:16am for Oh What Have I done?

lol... Has the basis for a great story

EricThorsen posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 4:29am for Oh What Have I done?

Interesting idea, will wait for more before really talking more

Particle_Accelerator posted a comment on Tuesday 23rd May 2006 3:12am for Oh What Have I done?

Interesting concept. That is, can a man truly love a daughter & mother equally? Pardon me for asking, but is this a takeoff of what was hinted at in Family Matters? BTW, I actually liked the slightly-snarky first person POV. A few more interspersed would be interesting. I look forwards to the next update.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 10:24pm for Oh What Have I done?

Whoa pretty messed up but not in a bad way interested to see how this turns out. in other words get writing before i have to get out teh whip.

Hyahhhh my lil writing mule hyaaaahhh hyaahhh

n4zhg posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 9:49pm for Oh What Have I done?

OK, I fail to see how this is incest. Mother-in-law don't count.

scott2 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:47pm for Oh What Have I done?

That is going to cause issues :) (and award for understatement of the century goes to...)

Great fic and can't wait for more :)

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 6:11pm for Oh What Have I done?

A good opening (even If I realy like H/G better)

PhiloWorm posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:20pm for Oh What Have I done?

... errr, this reminds me of something I read on FF.net a while back, AND BY ALL GODS ABOVE I ENJOYED IT!!! Do kep up this fantastic work;=)

James Barber posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 5:18pm for Oh What Have I done?

Oh please continue this, cant wait for further updates on harry's little problem and how he or should I say the two girls/women or dau/mum help him out with that little problem... hehehehe

If only I could be so lucky!

LegalAlien posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:10pm for Oh What Have I done?

That an awesome start and such a wonderfully unique idea!
Please write more soon!

RedPhoenix_2k3 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 4:06pm for Oh What Have I done?

Frank and Jocelyn Granger? Don't think I've ever read a fic with those names for Hermione's parents.

If this is what comes from you playing in Jo's sandbox then be sure to play in it quite often. :)
This is a good prologue to what I hope will be a fun fic to read. Can't wait for more....

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 2:36pm for Oh What Have I done?

Okay...how will Hermione and her mum ambush Harry *this* time? Keith, I don't mean this as a criticism, but I could see this coming several kilometers off. Harry has to deal with what *he* sees as emotional *unfaithfulness* of the worst sort: he's sexually attracted to both his girlfriend (Hermione) *and* her mother. That he is *also* attracted to Jocelyn in ways OTHER than sexual makes things *worse*, not better. However, (given Hermione, and given *you*, Keith) I have every reason to suspect that Hermione (with help from Jocelyn) will use the Heinleinology to straighten out the Man Who Triumphed so the three of them can live Happily Ever After. Like you, I'm a major fan of RAH (I even own the restored-to-original Ace Trade "Stranger In A Strange Land", which was NOT my first time reading that particular story), and you're that rare author that manage to make his philosophy make sense in JKR's Harry Potter universe. So I'm anxiously awaiting how you get Harry to see sense.

Coolone007 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 2:05pm for Oh What Have I done?

interesting... Harry loves hermione so much he goes for the source as well? Is the other two mentioned in the chapter be in the tory as well? Thank you for changing out of first person after this chapter.

Christina C. Keimig posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:57pm for Oh What Have I done?

Intriguing start. I love your tongue-in-cheek writing style. It's so fun to read!

Josh5 posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:54pm for Oh What Have I done?

This seems like an interesting story. Please update soon!

Ryu Son Goku posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:48pm for Oh What Have I done?

Very interesting premiss... I am looking forward to where you take this. Keep up the great work

Alcatras posted a comment on Monday 22nd May 2006 1:33pm for Oh What Have I done?

Please try to makt this fic af funny am possible.
It`s a good begining for a story.