Adam posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 10:02pm for London

Good start to this, be interesting to see where you take it. Now all they have to do is get past the person who has recognized them :)

jake m posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 9:54pm for London

hey kinsfire.
i found your site www.kinsfire.net while searching the net it took me at least 2 weeks to read the stories you have posted there.
very entertaining thanks alot!
then i stumled on the link to all these fan fic authors and holy heck theres more to read!
ive nearly finsihed reading all the stories or the ones im interested in.
i always like it when hermoine gets harry and ron goes ans gets stuffed lol
so i think thi sone could be awsome plz write with speed!

Patches posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 9:31pm for London

I like this story. Just enough information to keep the imagination working. But not too much.
I'm looking forward to where this goes. Thank you for writing.
pms

Alexis posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 6:47pm for London

a wonderful job!!! I am really enjoying this story and I do hope you pick it back up again!

Bobmin356 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 6:47pm for London

Is this a new story or one you're posting from someplace else?

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:46pm for London

Keep with the heterosexual stories. I am not a fan of slash or homosexual and lesbian stories.

I have watched all of the Harry Potter movies, and I really do not like Ron. I don't think Harry should be involved with Ginevra or Hermione. Nor should Hermione be involved with Ron.

Ron is a loser. Harry and Hermione should put him in his place as a jealous and hateful git. Ginevra, Ron's sister, should get over her crush with Harry.

crs_seq posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:41pm for London

That was hot. would have loved if there was a smut scene on the train. Hope there will some smut in the upcoming chapters. Very good explanation on hermione's forward behavior.
Anyways Update soon.

Katherine posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:19pm for London

Is the female Fleur, Gabrielle or Madam Maxine? Will who ever it is find a way to perhaps enroll Harry and Hermione into the French Magic School? If that is what they want. Or help them find a place to hide out where Dumbledore wouldn't think to look. Just hope they don’t tell Dumbledore they saw Harry. Hope to see another chapter soon.

Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:16pm for London

Awsome work I can't wait for more.

James Benfield posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 5:12pm for London

great story! Normally I'd think Hermione was being to OOC, but you explained that away by her wanting him to notice her. You have covered all of you tracks so far, and I can't wait to see the rest of this! Great job!

James

Renzo7 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 4:04pm for London

great story, though i don't like the way harry looks down upon himself so much... nice job on getting the naughty librarian out of hermione.

Prince Charon posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:34pm for London

You're very good at this.

More soon, I hope.

freakyfinger posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:19pm for London

Well, Its a good start in my opinion. Is that Fleur or Gabrielle at the end?

DarkPhoenix2500 posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:18pm for London

@_@ Uhm....wow, its a bit odd, ill admit <_< their relationship seems to be moving fast....yet knowing each other for roughly 5 years i can see thats its resonable o_O Update soon...

AmeSuisei/AdronTaltos/CarlOort posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 3:05pm for London

::blinks:: Okay i like it..
Write more! or else i'll rent a house elf and send them to 'assist' you in your efforts.. I know they can be quite insistant when they need be...

jake m posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 2:53pm for London

i think u on to somehting keep writing and dam fast

HPpassion posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 2:37pm for London

cute very cute

Treck posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 2:24pm for London

Damn. You know how to leave a guy wanting more.

David Thacker posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 1:23pm for London

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

mac_gin posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 12:59pm for London

French accent, guess it's Fleur or Gabby - But who is she supposed to be meeting? suspect Billy boy, so do they go hide with the dragon bloke???