Dark Clouds

HermioneGreen posted a comment on Sunday 9th April 2006 2:53pm

When do you plan on continuing this fic? It is very interesting that the aurors that caught up eith Harry, seem to have no clue as to what he went through in Azkaban.

jake m posted a comment on Friday 24th March 2006 4:08pm

YOU MUST UPDATE THIS

ThomasWatts posted a comment on Saturday 18th March 2006 11:48pm

Your Harry has always been an f'n ass-basket. If he took three seconds to let Hermione say something, he may have found he still had friends, no matter what her 'fuck buddy' thinks. Neither Ron, nor Hermione have ever completely abandoned Harry in any of the books.
Harry doesn't know, that perhaps, he wasn't allowed visitors. Or perhaps, any defense built up by Hermione, or others, was thrown out for petty reasons.
He doesn't deserve friends because, right now, he is truely being a grade A asshat.

Kinsfire replied:

You're welcome to your opinion, and are cordially invited to not read any further when I get around to updating it again, since you will undoubtedly not like the direction this will go in.

jake m posted a comment on Friday 17th March 2006 10:27pm

where the hell is the rest this is suspensful you know !!!!!
its been weeks wheres the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(eager fan)

jake m posted a comment on Saturday 4th March 2006 12:26pm

dude that was awsome i thin kone of the best uhv done but where is the rest plz write thats awsome write more!

Jay-F posted a comment on Tuesday 31st January 2006 8:06am

hmmm, now i want to know what happens

fopalup posted a comment on Saturday 28th January 2006 2:33pm

Well, I for one hope you come back to this story soon. There are very few good azkaban stories and I think this could be a good one. I like how you have held on to Harry's ideals even if he is bent on revenge. I also hope he gets to ring Scrimgeour's neck.

jmcqk6 posted a comment on Thursday 26th January 2006 5:29am

rather interesting story you have here. definately looking forward to reading more.

TheHard posted a comment on Monday 23rd January 2006 3:30am

Hi!

Good story, great start... you're going to continue soon?

Thanks for sharing :)

Jasmine posted a comment on Thursday 19th January 2006 4:22am

This is really good! Not only is the action and dialog interesting but Harry's thoughts are too. (Typially things like that bore me but not the way you write it. I absolutely can't wait for more!!

hedwig_edwiges posted a comment on Saturday 7th January 2006 8:03am

interesting but a bit confusing. Harry is angry or not, after all? Even if he doesn't want to kill someone innocent, he wouldn't just let himself get caught, right? I would like to see where you take this but right now "Ties of Blood" are my priority in reading.

jonnyb posted a comment on Friday 6th January 2006 1:00am

Interesting story. One problem being that the punishment system in this country hasn't included the death penalty since the 60s, so that might need to be changed a little bit.

EricThorsen posted a comment on Wednesday 4th January 2006 10:40am

Want More... Want More Now! Seriously though, one of the more interesting HBP stories I've read, which, when you consider I hated HBP, is saying something.

pandora5002002 posted a comment on Thursday 29th December 2005 12:48am

Hi,
I love this one. It is a unique one of the "Harry in Azkaban" plot. Please update asap

Maxennce posted a comment on Thursday 15th December 2005 5:50pm

Jesus, just what the hell was happeneing, has the wizarding world gone to hell in a handbasket. Keep up the great work, really looking forward to your next chapter and just what you have planned for your next chapter and cynical Harry
Cheers
Max

James Benfield posted a comment on Friday 9th December 2005 1:31am

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter!

James

helva2260 posted a comment on Saturday 3rd December 2005 10:17pm

Um, just a minor thing, but when Scrimgeour told Harry that the Muggles had given him the death penalty, it cannot have been true, since the UK abolished the death penalty sometime in the 1960s(-ish).
Hopefully, I'm worrying about nothing and this was just Scrimgeour attempting to intimidate Harry. However I'm pretty sure that even as someone who has only spent summers in the muggle world since his eleventh birthday, he'd still know that, which means he should have noticed Scrimgeour was lying.

Ah well! I rather like feral!Harry, though I'm not quite convinced (yet!) that he'd get so bad in such a short space of time. It's a great idea though, so keep up the good work!

By Kinsfire

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