Dark Clouds
Chapter 4
By Kinsfire
Reviews
Nightwing510 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 2:39pm for Chapter 4
I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you have Harry fight his anger. After he found out the truth. I hope if you decide to pair Harry up with someone it will be with Ginny. Please update soon.
Sandra Smith posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 1:52pm for Chapter 4
this has the potential to be a very good story. please keep updating
n4zhg posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 1:30pm for Chapter 4
Ask, and ye shall receive, huh?
This is not your father's Azkaban!Harry, and so far I like it.
John Pinkston posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 1:08pm for Chapter 4
Good work. I'm interested to see where you are going to take this from here. Keep up the good work.
Jennifer4 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 12:53pm for Chapter 4
I hadn't read the first few chapters until now, and so far I like where it sort of looks like where you are going. I wonder what they (Hermione and gang) will have to do to prove they didn't (if indeed they didn't) know Harry was in Azkaban.
Miguel Cadena posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 12:41pm for Chapter 4
Quite a good story, I like the form Harry is behaving himself, is credible after all he belive that he was betrayed for his friends and only need them to kill Riddle.
I just hope that some of his friendship with the others could be recuperated, and also I really, really hope that the minister pay for his crimes and fall from his position.
Also is this going to be with no "ships" at all or you accept suggestions? (I vote for a H/Hr, R/L and G/N in case you could do it).
Any way good story and I hope to read next chapter soon.
Cheers.
MAC
JVTazz posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 12:01pm for Chapter 4
At first I wasn't going to read this story due to the fact that I really dislike HBP, but on the same note I do like AzkabanHarry stories so I decided to give it a chance, and I must say that I'm happy that I did decide to read it and hope that you do continue it :)
greywizard posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 11:59am for Chapter 4
Excellent chapter here. You've certainly got me intrigued as to what will happen next. Hope to see another chapter of this in the very near future.
Musings of Apathy posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 11:52am for Chapter 4
Excellent chapter. I am glad to see something happen on this.
Harry's anger, while not fully justified is understandable. I don't think that Ron will easily tolerate it, but Hermione will, as she can better understand Harry's thought processes. A little plot hole there with Hedwig catching up with Harry between the time he received his key and when he arrived at his vault where he received his portkey, unless of course he risked being in Diagon Alley for a time before he used the international portkey.
Thank you for writing.
Mike (MoA)
Greg Johnson posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 11:26am for Chapter 4
Great Chapter! Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work.
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 11:06am for Chapter 4
Wheels within wheels, here. The complexities of the whole situation start to show themselves. I'd be willing to wager that there are more betrayals and assaults ahead. *wicked grin* One can hope, though, that Scrimgeour gets his cummupance by the end of this tale.
Jason Karr posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 11:03am for Chapter 4
good story. looking forward to the next chapter
Alexis posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 10:43am for Chapter 4
Keith - I'm really enjoying the rewrite! I went back and read it from the beginning and was very impressed. Great job with this!
James13 posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 10:41am for Chapter 4
Hmm. If I were tortured and abused and then someone gave me my wand and I knew my tormenter was in the building, I'd probabbly nuke the building and kill everyone around me, just to give em something to talk about. Barring a nuke, drop a couple of reductos on load bearing walls and just drop the entire building on them.
Of course I wasn't tortured and no one gave me a magic wand...mores the pity.
Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 9:59am for Chapter 4
Excellent!
Kenji posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 9:56am for Chapter 4
Good but I wanna know what happens next update sooon
PPPPPPPLLLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE
Deborahsu posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 9:55am for Chapter 4
Sounds interesting ...
John Davis posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 9:46am for Chapter 4
Please continue this story. It is one of the best Azkaban!Harry fic I have read in a long time.
By the way, which one is missing, he named 5 but only 4 arrived?
mjc posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 9:05am for Chapter 4
Keith...
Umm...
Damn...
Wow...
The Federal Reserve run by Goblins?
Umm...well...Greenspan did look a bit like the Goblin in SS...didn't he?
Manatheron posted a comment on Tuesday 1st August 2006 2:47pm for Chapter 4