jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 10:20pm

OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! This chapter was so cool, I like how Harry just took the punishment they gave him both the prison sentence and the abuse they dished out. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. This story keeps getting better and better every time you update. DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

redjacobson posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 9:36pm

and the fit is about to hit the shan! good one; but i'm not too sure about the sudden addition to Harry's Harem. After spending so much time building the relationship between the core group; to suddenly add 2 or three more women in one chapter seems a bit questionable.

anyway; can't wait to see what happens next.

red

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 9:24pm

"Do ya feel lucky, punk? Well, do ya?" would fit the end of this chapter perfectly. 'Twill be interesting to see just how stupid the head of this group of aurors is.

*shakes head* Scrimgeour really doesn't understand he's trying to cook frozen dynamtie. Wonder if he'll get the message before Harry and company get very, very polite.

kenny posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 9:02pm

very nicely done i almost feel sorry for the boor aurors almost but not quite

Nanio posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 8:11pm

Wow, trippy.

This story has it's good and bad parts. It's a little too WAFF for the atmosphere you're trying to create, but your style pulls it off very well.

jilumasam posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 8:04pm

Booom!! and it all goes up with a really loud and satisfying big bang. Man you've really set this story up nicely. Keep it up and meanwhile I'll keep drooling at the thought of the next juicy chapter.

Ashestoashes posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 7:56pm

I keep reading this for the plot and action etc. But how repetitive can you get? Is there a story or even a chapter of you where Harry doesn't say "Oh nowz, she's angry at those people/she looks a little bit confused by what I said, so... she hates me, poor me, it's already the n-th time she's angry at me but I can't remember the other times, oh I wanna die... Hey, she still loves me, just like those other times (that I can't remember) when I was being dumb and retarded, while I've known those people for years (they're my family, imagine that, I really never meet them, not even with Christmas). etc.etc. ad infinitum"

Aaron2 posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 7:04pm

Nice chapter, love to see how this Magical Civil War turns out. Question though, What are the names of the rest of Harry's kids. we know Loreli and Alexandra, but how many does he have, what are their names, and how old are they? I'm just curious. and seems that Harry got more woman who want to be his 5th, 6th, and 7th wife, Love to see what happens next. Keep it up

Dragonmage182 posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 6:54pm

Love the story and cant wait for the next chapter to come out.

Ian Morgan posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 6:51pm

great chapter

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 6:51pm

"Okay," Harry said to the Aurors. "You've got us fourteen, almost all of whom have fought Voldemort, versus you guys. Do you really want to push this one?"

{Evil Laugh}

Oh they SO deserve what's about to happen to them!

Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 6:42pm

Excellent chapter. I wonder just what the Aurors will say. Will the Minister show up himself? this is awesome please post more soon.

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 6:42pm

Keep up the great work!

darthme1011 posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 6:34pm

are isabella, ginny, and gabby all going to join the wives???

another great chapter cant wait for the next

FenrisWolf posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 5:46pm

Does the phrase, "We're totally screwed" come to mind? I'm reminded of an old Vaughn Bode strip called "Da Duel":

"You, sir, as da challenged, will take up yer Horst-Schmiesser .30 caliber semi/full auto machine pistol, and you, sir, as da challenger, will take up yer brick..."

BUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDA(throw)BUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDABUDDA

Edward Becerra posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 5:45pm

43,000 words, and it's still only the 13th of the month where I am. Bravo, Kins, bravo! Keep going like this, and you'll hit 80,000 words by the end of the month. WITHOUT sacrificing the storyline.

Oh, granted, I can see the occasional typo, but hey, you can always come back and fix those the first week of December. ^_-

Ed Becerra

RoseKelly1021 posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 4:49pm

*chuckle* Do I get to vote in whether or not they push it? Cause I vote, Harry & Co. kick ass either physically or ethically or metaphorically.

Kelly

RhymesWithOrange posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 4:25pm

"Okay," Harry said to the Aurors. "You've got us fourteen, almost all of whom have fought Voldemort, versus you guys. Do you really want to push this one?"

If there's one thing I've learned from fanfic, it's that the answer to that question is *always* a resounding *NO*.

Jolly good show.

Alorkin posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 4:22pm

I was surprised that Amelia did not nullify Harry's arrest, despite his rather provocative statements. His actions are well within the range of instinctive response.
The abuse Harry suffered under in his cell is expected (evil thuggish guards of Azkaban, Inc.), although Auror Honeyspear, is an unexpected twist. I like your reasonong. It made a great deal of sense (even though the scene was rather berift of detail, Hint hint) Harry's penseive memories are going to cause a huge pile of trouble. Like as not it will be used as propaganda.
The Wizengamot should never have sentenced him to prison. There was no real need, except for the intimidation factor.(<<Scrimgeour?>>) Don't those idiots realize that in a class war, it's the rich that invariably fall first?
Harry's fears of rejection at his release were sorta expected considering the emotionally overloaded kid he was at the beginning of 'Phoenix', although I'd have expected five years of nurture from wives and children that adore him, to have mitigated those fears. I wonder if the rings, or more likely the mental link with his wives help to stabilize him.
The unexpected addition of not one, but three petitions to join his harem would likely have most men catatonic within moments of hearing it. Nice touch!
Trial time. it appears Scrimgeour is as interfering as Fudge was. Status quo. His interference is going to guarantee his oustre from his position, especially as Harry has the backing of the queen. (Gee! I don't think he mentioned that little fact. Oopsey!)
Once more into the breach, good friends. Harry tags along and positions himself between the farmfolk and the invaders.
Once again I see the rescue party has arrived, including both Griphook and Alorkin. I guess every Marine is a basic rifleman.
Thank you for another fine chapter. Until next time. Alorkin

EricThorsen posted a comment on Monday 13th November 2006 4:14pm

and the first battle of the British Magical Civil war begins over the right to raise your own children... How stupid is this Scrimgeour? One of the major things that caused the American Revolution was attempts by the occupying force to punish the families of the signitories of the Declaration of Independence, even those who didn't agree with the signatories. Those who don't learn from history are doomed to repeat it. As to your comment about the riot not being representative, you got very close to the events of the Boston Massacre anyway.