By Kinsfire
Reviews
cmatbmed posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 11:48am
Looks like the start of another good story.
matthiasblack posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 11:45am
Wow, what a heartless bastard. Cutting off a 5 year olds finger. I already don't like the guy and hope Harry takes care of business. Keep up the work and I hope you can update soon.
MaryJane6707 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 11:40am
Well, I am glad they were able to have some time in peace! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great beginning!
DJ posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 11:34am
What a start I can't wait to see what you cook up. Is Bill Weasley the bad guy? Any way keep it up & update soon and thanks.
Jeremy DuCharme posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 11:21am
Hmm, call out the guy who knocked off the last Dork Lord by kidnapping his daughter and sending him one of her severed fingers. I believe the Darwin Awards, Magical World Canidates, for 2003 are now closed. Winner by acclimation, once the Potter Clan have made him assume room temperature, Dark Lord Basileus. :)
n4zhg posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 10:58am
Gee, no prizes for guessing that this Lord Basileus is Draco Malfoy?
MarinePotterfan posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 10:17am
What a start, there is a dead man walking in Lord Basileus. I wonder if he is someone from Harry past that is comming back to haunt him.
MPF
KenF posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 10:09am
Oh, dear.
Mark Safransky posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 9:02am
Oh my, someone decided he needed to be planted six feet under. Can't help but wonder if it isn't dear Draco who would have gotten his wand rights back about now. But that might be a bit obvious. Wonder who will be the new Minister? Hope it's Aunt Amelia. Say, is this your NaNoWriMo fic this year?
sylver_skoon posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:20am
there is nothing more dangerous than a pissed off mother, except 4 mothers and their powerful husband.
The earth's axle will be tilted...
More please
texasranger_10 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 7:14am
oh this is to good as much as i want you to finish your others first. please another chapter. i want to see harry strip him a good one.
Kalen Darkmoon posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 6:17am
Interesting start though a little horrific what was done to a toddler. The new dork lord has done something beyond stupid and will deserve getting filtered from the gene pool by Harry.
EricThorsen posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:40am
I agree with Snape... anyone who pisses off someone who the goblins consider their friend needs a current will... except by the time Harry's friends are finishec with them, their heirs won't get anything.
Alorkin posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:32am
As always, a wonderful lead-in chapter. It looks to me that Draco is up to his old tricks. I wonder if Fudge let him bribe his way back into respectibility, or if he found another way. Of all the characters, Draco is the only one with definate ties to Voldy, that seemed to have escaped unscathed. Narcissa would surely have been sent to Azkaban, but likely enough money in the right hands would ensure her 'early release'.
Draco is also the one left from the old guard, who possesses the background of cruelty to mutilate a child. I for one, hope to see Harry tear him a new asshole...from the inside out! (I have a daughter.)
I see the Prophet is again the ministry's mouthpiece. I wonder if it's time for Harry to take a moe active role in the wizarding press. If he was to buy the paper, or at least a controlling interest in it, he could force some rather seriously needed changes. Ok, nuff sed.
As always, I look forward to the next chapter of 'Burning day. Alorkin
IceBlades posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:08am
this looks like its going to be a fun story
azureguy86 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 4:48am
Good story keep it coming, Harry as a badass dad is such a good character.
Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 3:39am
Awesome work so far Keith, keep up the good work as usual.
Adam posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 3:18am
Oh boy and so it begins again. this time though Harry already has allies, so he isnt having to start from stratch.
bit cliche sending a finger, but hey good or original dark lords are hard to find I guess :)
Good chapter, be fun seeing where this goes.
morriganscrow posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:58am
I think "Lord Basileus" just made a giant boo-boo.
How stupid do you have to be to kidnap and mutilate the daughter of the Wizard and Witches who destroyed Voldie and his mangey pack of lickspittles?
This is going to be a fun story and I'm all agog to read the next chapter. Please update soon.
vheritas@aapt.net.au
dahurstsr posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 2:08pm