By Kinsfire
Reviews
Marie2 posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:25pm
Another good chapter I really liked Draco S@"££^*) himself had me giggling keep em rolling
Stygius posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:13pm
so the plot thickens... i hope we get Lorelei back. Draco certainly wasn't a surprise. so what was with the daughter kidnapping, and what about the message that was deliveried. update soon, this is getting good.
just makes sure we get Lorelie back.
David Thacker posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:12pm
One other review said that this was a plots {the kidnapping} of Fudge's and with the tie frame it might be how long dose it take to wake up from a stunner on ones own maybe 30 minutes(speling?) at the most and the attacke could have been a few {2-6 minutes} to anouther 30 minutes that is with the girl running fro the bad guys and Fudge could be killed in 1 or 2 minutes and found if at hoe or work very fast or faster if he was dumped some where.
How meany chapters or you planing for this story you stated that you wish t finish it the 15 of the November that pules the numbers of chapters will let us know who fast you might [big might] post?
Adam posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 8:03pm
well that little bit of information will cause someone some problems. I can see Amelia getting a little bit upset to hear it.
Good job with dealing withy Draco, they had that dark lord id'd right from the start lol. Pity it wasnt who they really wanted, but the story would be very short if it was.
Good chapter.
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 7:52pm
Surprise, surprise. It *wasn't* the Ferret that kidnapped Lorelei (however, it *was* the Ferret that did in Fudge). Amelia, however, is feeling rather ill when Lawrence recognized the fellow that Portkeyed Harry as an Auror. Malfoy is definitely looking at spending the rest of his days in Azkaban for knocking off Fudge (not to mention losing a major portion of his fortune to Harry in fines and restitution), as Amelia pointed out that he'll go from being merely the richest wizard in Britain to the richest wizard in all Europe. Who's left on the planet that's ahead of him, at least among wizards? (I can see a few Muggles still having a lead on him, namely Warren Buffett and Bill Gates, along with a few Arabs; however, not really anyone else.)
Amamama posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 7:18pm
So, Lord Basselope The Ferret is now out of the game... and an Auror kidnapped Lorelei. Now that's an interesting twist.
Look forward to seeing where this goes next. I really could get used to a dose of action like this each day... :-D
Thanks!
mjc posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 7:03pm
One dickless wonder down...
Loved the "eight years to finish a seven year school" line...
jilumasam posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 6:41pm
Excellent! Looking forward to more.
Davideg posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 6:26pm
wow this is fantastic please update agin a.s.a.p.
Yenom posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 6:06pm
Ohh shit that is a great twist, one of Amelia's Aurors kidnaped and was part of cutting off his daughters' finger. This story gets better by the chapter. I loved the can of worms the last line opened.
Anyway enjoyed the whole thing, the fact the Draco's goons listen to him even after knowing he almost powerless was funny as hell, though the Rubber chicken vibrator made me laugh harder.
So again great work, and for the suprisingly fast update speed. November tends to be your in the zone month I've noticed, though this October was close to that level also. =)
So what ever you've been doing keep at it. =)
Dade posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 6:02pm
Oohh, and the plot thickens...
nice job on the chapter.
MononWalker posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:40pm
Again, another fine job you'be done here, Keith. You're well on your way to fulfilling the NaNo.
So in just the second chapter you've eliminated the ferret - not just from the free world but also from contention of kidnappers.
And thrown suspicion back among the Aurors!
Great chapter.
Beau Wolff posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:19pm
<i>Lord Basselope</i>?
*cries with laughter*
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:09pm
Oh, brother, things start to get complicated. It's obvious that Draco never learned from what happened the last tim, much to his distress. Now, let's see how the new complication stirs the pot.
Bravo!!
DJ posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 5:00pm
O Sh*t you love these clif hangers. Keep them coming grate work.
Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 4:56pm
oooh! What was it? A plan of the late Fudge to force Harry to return to England and take care of their newest problem? I love this new twist to the happily ever after. Please hurry and post more soon.
David Thacker posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 4:47pm
Ok some shocks here!Like Draco and the Auror that Lawrence recognised.I do hope that Bill and his brother that help set Harry up are not involed.
Teresa Lynne posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 4:45pm
Chuckling....I knew that Lord Big Mouthed Bass was Draco the Spineless Wonder! Hmmmmm.....looks like there were two sets of idiots in the villain buisness. Oh well, if the other set doesn't wise up soon they'll wish they had. Harry, his wives, and their assorted friends and family won't leave enough scraps for DNA testing! At least Draco and Nacissa will have their " mother and child reunion " in that well known holiday spot of Azkaban....snicker. Thanks for another excellent chapter!
MercuryBlue posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 4:35pm
One of my YahooGroups has a list of funny names for Voldemort, to which I just added "He Who Now Pushes Up Daisies". One of the group members commented, "I'm having a awful image of Voldemort taking horticulture lessons..." Thought that might amuse you.
Nice twists, there, having Lorelei kidnapped by (1) not Lord Basileus and (2) an Auror.
Imbrium posted a comment on Thursday 2nd November 2006 9:10pm