Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 2:47am

So did they reattach the finger, or did Umbridge somehow copy it? A good chapter, though I'm curious to see where things go from here. Obviously, the ministry still needs to be torn down and rebuilt, it's far too easy for someone to abuse their authority without fear of reprecussions, but the edge of Harry's need for it has been taken off.

liquidfyre posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 2:16am

okay im glad she didnt lose her finger but curse you with a thousand rabid penguins dressed in pink jumpers for ending it there

good chapter and keep it up sparky

Jamie46 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 1:54am

yessssssssssssss. To everything. :-D hehehe. Awesome awesome awesome.

Gah, I need to not review so soon after waking up; I'm not coherent.

Ok, so two options exist: (1) it's a transfigured finger, or (2) it's someone else's finger. While I'm kinda hoping that it's (1), I'm guessing that Harry & Co. could tell about things like this, so it's probably (2). Which brings up even more questions. But we'll see. :) hehehe. Thanks for such an amazing and fast update!

Manatheron posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 1:45am

... Is she not really his daughter?

I find it very hard to believe that umbitch could find someone good enough at transfigeration to have fooled Harry and his wives.

Patricia Lee Finley posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 1:38am

So, toad woman made more mistakes then there are clouds in the sky...what a surprise. What? She's not getting tagged for trying to corrupted the government? Oh wait, she is. Tra la tra la!!

BJH posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 1:09am

I wish I could get my young daughters to voluntarily wash their hands.

Quite the bloodless coup.

Now that legal punishment has been levied, what will Harry do to the toad? A visit to Azkaban perhaps? Or will she escape so he can hunt her down?

BJH

Renzo7 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:54am

Brilliant touch with the finger, it wasn't actually cut, was it?
Glad to see you got rid of toady fast, I hate her character.
Now we've seen some action and drama, can we get some "action" scenes with the wives?
Thanks, keep it up!

DrT posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:32am

I hope you have this well-plotted, beacuse it's getting confusing!

"T"

Crys posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:20am

Okay, now there's a plot twist that we didn't see coming . . .

How many more curveballs are you gonna throw, here?

Anyway, fun story.

Hannah3 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:10am

It isn't over, is it? I hope not!!

William Fowler posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:31pm

Huh?

Either the finger is a tranfigured something or other, or that finger isn't from little Lorelei. Or... of course, the kid isn't Lorelei.

So... what's going on? Hmm...?

Great chapter, can't wait for next.

William

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:30pm

^_^ It is good to see that Lorelei is reunited with her family, and that Dolores is now receiving justice. However... something is amiss here. Did the Healers fix her hand, or is something more afoot here?

The mysteries continue, but at least child is reunited with family. I hope to see that the family stays together in the future. Harry, all of his allies... well done!

Keep it up!

Gwyn Raven posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 11:06pm

Ok, so I see two options -- either that finger belonged to someone else and was tansfigured to look like Lorelei's, or (more sinisterly) that is not Lorelei Potter.

Killua posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:59pm

Good, that was fast, I love fics with a good pace, and this one is growing on me. I'm sure their problems don't end here though and I can't wait to find what happens next.

Darrell1 posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:40pm

And now the twist on whose hand the finger came from right?

Donald Deutsch posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:29pm

Brsvo, I must admit I didn't think that whoever Umbitch had holding her would take and remove a finger from a child, and a great point of transfiguration. Keep up the good work Keith, looking forward to more of this, even tho I'm not sure where you will go with it from here.

crew posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 10:19pm

very very very good better yet it was great

morriganscrow posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 9:49pm

Thank Goodness the finger is where it's supposed to be!
The Toad isn't finished yet, is she?
Cool chapter, great story. Keep going.

Treck posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 9:02pm

YOU LET HER LIVE!!!

Why.

Amamama posted a comment on Sunday 5th November 2006 8:53pm

Hmmm... Thank gooodness the kid seems to be ok - maybe now they should examinate the finger Harry got by owl? Is it real? Did they polyjuice some poor idiot before chopping of the finger, and would the polyjuice enchantment keep?? Or is there somehing else going on?

I read a few reviews commenting on the lack of logic, or the plot being too far fetched. I find that half the fun, this is just so wonderfully over the top... I love it!

Thanks for sharing!