By Kinsfire
Reviews
Jimbocous posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 4:39pm
Nice so far. Only thing I felt was missing would have been a little more about the family in the beginning. Fluffy, I know, but would have been fun ....
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 12:51pm
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!! You are an evil man Mr Kinsfire, I mean making us think that poor Lorelei's hand had been mutilated but I wont hold it againist ya because this story rules. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I wonder what other dark idiot is gonna prop up next though? DO keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
darthme1011 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 10:26am
thank god!!!!! another great chapter
KenF posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 10:14am
Ah, toad woman gets it. But she's still breathing, and thus still a threat.
jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 9:21am
OUTSTANDING CHAPTER!!!!
imakeeper posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 8:25am
yeah she finally got what she deserved
C. Harris posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 8:16am
Wow, I was a bt amazed at how the last chapter ended. I stubbornly pushed the "Next" button several times, willing it to show me the next chapter. I must say that this is excellent!
matthiasblack posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 7:21am
I am a little upset there was no torture to Umbridge by any of the Potter's but I can live with the happy reuniting of a family.
MaryJane6707 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 7:15am
Huh? Well, thank goodness she was okay! Finally, Umbridge will get whats coming to her. What a nasty piece of work is she. Great chapter! I am thrilled that the family is able to be together. They just work.
Mikkun posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 5:41am
What the hell? so this tale isn't finished yet?
IssaBissa posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 5:39am
Great Job so far on the story!!! I love all of what you are doing!!! Keep up the great work!!!! Bravo!!!!!
Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 4:59am
Boy, does the thick plotten. The removal of Umbridge seemed to be too easy, and what of the finger? Seems to me there is still more going on.
Thanks for the story. Looking forward to the next bit!
Tom A.
Alexis posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 4:58am
Awwwww... that wrapped up that part well. Delores was evil and I loved the way you dealt with her. I can't wait to see the new regime... LOL
Alorkin posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 4:30am
A great chapter filled with nice surprises. Umbitch is too stupid to live, (which brings me to the question 1: Why didn't you just have Harry challenge her, and melt her into protoplasm?)
Harry's 'familial ties' with the Goblin Hordes, was also a nice surprise. Family is important to him and now he has one of the biggest. I have used the baring of the neck in one of my pieces, and hope you won't be offended when I put the story on FicWad, although I have wide, toothy smles as the preferred type.(Open, hiding nothing.)
Dollares Unbunch is nicely screwed, and little Lorelei is hale and happy once more (which brings the question #2: Did she actually lose the finger, and have it replaced? Or was the finger sent, a magical construct? Magic is good, but wouldn't there be some kind of sign that it had been severed?)
As always, I await the next chapter of 'Burning Day'. Alorkin
Tanaxanth posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 4:04am
So... Did they fix her hand or... is this an imposter
Viridian posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 3:38am
Oh crap... where did the finger come from?
That seemed to be wrapped up rather quickly and neatly, but Harry does have a lot of friends in high places. With all the Dark Lord talk, it seemed like a slightly more protracted struggle was indicated.
Viridian posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 3:26am
Interesting developments... and a nasty cliffhanger at the end.
Harry being able to forgive afterward is a definitely mellowing of his character over the five years between. (Though it started with Ron and Ginny at the end of LAPFTA.)
I notice that one of the discussions from the yahoo group made it onto here. = )
goddessa39 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 3:20am
...well, I like it, and I'm glad she didn't really get her fingers cut off. Waiting for the exp. :)
Ken Warner posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 2:49am
so - conjured?, transfigured from some othr child's hand? Azkaban is just too nice a place for scum like umbitch.
great story so far -thanks
hoser41 posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 5:57pm