Jason Schulz posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:52am

can't wait for the next chapter!!

mjc posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:47am

Hermione only 'squeed'?

I'd have thought she'd have multiple 'joygasms' or something.

I guess when you're going to overthrow the government, learn from the best?

redjacobson posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:46am

okay; I wasn't expecting to meet old Ben *GRIN*

Nicely done; and I love your update rate on this one.

red

Nightwing510 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:40am

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you have Harry & the Goblins working together.

William Fowler posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:40am

Yay! Great chapter Keith!

I'm glad to have read this chapter... Benjamin Franklin... dude... that's awesome.

Is he seen as a traitor to Great Britain though? I wonder?

Great chapter,

William

Kinsfire replied:

Can you really see Dumbledore worrying about that? *laugh*

Joseph Schuler posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:39am

Great chapter! I look forward to the rest of the story.

One correction though, "dissolve the political bands" should read "dissolve the political bonds".

Sean Dillon posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:16am

Whoa!!! Ben Franklin as a wizard.

Rex posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:14am

IT"S GONNA BE REVOLUTION YAAAAAAAAH YEAH KNOW Now kins fire can harry meet some one else as a wizard please preferablly FDR?

philh1985 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:06am

Almost forgot, is Harry willing to find and wait for someone to publish something like Common Sense as Thomas Paine did in Virginia?

Phil

James Barber posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 11:01am

Hey cool, love the direction this is going. and ole ben franklin was one hell of an ideal! and GO BREASTS!

Chris McFadden posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:46am

<chuckles> Nice twist... let me take a shot in the dark: The Second Revolution?

wana10 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:45am

ben franklin?! thats a first for me in all hp fanfiction but you've done it well and rather believable. i love the idea of him having porn on his desktop...made me burst out laughing startling the people next to me. kind of found it confusing that harry didn't initially understand the significance of the document ben gave him, but then again, i'm american, and the revolution is pounded into us from an early age.
keep up the good work

Beau Wolff posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:40am

'Pretty Smerj O'Hara'?

Incidentally, you write the -best- Potternography.

philh1985 posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:37am

I could see you were heading for Franklin but still went "Geep!" whrn you did it. <g> Well done. More soon please.

Phil

DarQuing posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:36am

Amen, my brother! I liked Hermione's reaction to Master Benjamin Franklin. :)

Voldemort is Dead posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:31am

Yep. All Hell's going to break loose! Excellent chapter!

KenF posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:29am

We finally get around to the group sex. It's not a real Kinsfire fic without.

Seriously, though, I liked the bit with Harry's doubts and Ben Franklin. I could really see Franklin being just like that.

proftlb posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 10:28am

Wonderful chapter! What a perfect person for Harry to talk to before beginning a revolution against the English government. One slight thing, isn't Philadelphia is 5 hours behind England, not 5 hours ahead? Noon in England would be 7am for Ben, but it still shouldn't be a problem. Early to bed, early to rise and all that:)

Kinsfire replied:

This is why a beta is good. I'll fix it.

Intelligo posted a comment on Tuesday 7th November 2006 12:43am

I love it! I especially like how professional you're keeping the court scenes.

Update soon!

The Resident posted a comment on Monday 6th November 2006 6:01pm

An excellent chapter. I can only hope that Harry's remaining years will be free of the troubles and persecution that have plagued him since being left with the Dursleys. As bland as it might be, I'd like to see one final chapter showing Harry living a peaceful life with his wives and possibly a couple more children. I have always enjoyed your stories, keep up the great work.