Princess Fictoria posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 10:51am

Wow! Great chapter. I love the well thought out way that the revolution is being handled, as well as the way Harry is doing this in spite of his feelings towards ruling the wizarding world, and not because of them.

The obviouse love and respect that Harry and his wives share... as well as his relationships with others of power... goes a long way in proving that this way is the right way for the sheeple of England.

Hurry and post more soon!

Treck posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 7:45am

Another great chapter.

Question... How many kids does Harry have ATM?

Alorkin posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 7:17am

I really liked the interaction between Adam Smythe and Harry. "My contact will be hearing from me about setting up meetings with the insane. I do not appreciate pranks. Good day, sir." Reminds me of a similar discussion between Fox Mulder and some psychiatrist in the first season of 'X-Files'
Harry's discussion with Loreilei minds me of many I've had with my daughter after her mother died. Most of them were reassurances that I still loved her and would never leave her alone.
I'm going to have my daughter read an excerpt from this. The preamble and first part of the declaration of independence. It's well past time she learns exactly what this means. Having been a soldier for most of my adult life, (among other jobs,) I want her to understand exactly how fragile the freedoms we take for granted, really are.
Harry's idea of setting up a represantational democracy in the place of a oligarchy is going to be seen as a direct attack on the sovreignty of the crown, his disclaimer notwithstanding. Only the Queen could approve such a decision, especially as the magical world is hidden from the rest of Britain. Since the Prime minister answers to her, and the upper and lower houses are unaware, it stands to reason that she would have to become involved.
I liked how you dealt with the Dursleys. Kinda symbolic, neh?
Too bad Harry couldn't get control of the prophet. I wonder how they found out? (normally nobody associated with that rag has any common sense. (What happened to dear old Rita!?!)
Harry's mirrored room scene really was rather predictable. Who else but Queen Elizabeh couldbe behind that mirror. (Blair...eeh! For the sake of brevity, I won't go into him.)
As always, a great chapter. I look forward to reading more. Alorkin

IssaBissa posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 6:13am

very interesting so far!!! I really like it!!! Keep up the great work!!!!

Johnny Wood posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 4:13am

Is your Adam Smythe any realation to Alan Smithee, acclaimed film 'director'?

imakeeper posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 3:12am

good chapter!

Killua posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 3:03am

The whole Franklin thing is creepy as hell! So it's OK to fuck someone else just because you want it? If they wanted that kind of relationships why did they marry and have kids, why not be totally open about it? and you can't compare it with Harry doing the other girls, you have to compare it to Harry shagging Ginny or some other woman. I have very mixed feelings about this.

Shawn Pickett posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 2:19am

Good chapter, I really liked Harry's conversation with Lorelei, and then Hermione. I'm curious to see how things go with the Queen and the PM.

Jamie46 posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 1:49am

Ba-du-dummmmmmmmm. :-D Anyone who didn't see that coming, raise your hand. ;) hehehe, but it was built up really well. Again, good plot development and flow. I liked Smythe's original affronted stance and how calmly Harry took care of it. ;) I'm guessing, from Smythe's later statement, that he actually was under orders to act like that, since his superiors didn't "trust his instincts." I also liked the bit where Harry reassured Lorelei; that was sweet. Overall, really well-done.

Crys posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 1:22am

> Hermione fathering a child with Pansy and blinked at it. It was not a typo.
Oh, I knew it wasn't a typo. I also understood the implication (her looking down later before cancelling the spell). It just squicked me out.

> They say that karma is a wheel, and it sounds like it rolled right over them.
Hey, I like that phrase.

Okay, three super-magician kid-sets . . . Flooding her with magic at that very moment HAS to have an effect.

Building up to quite the storm, Kins.

Alexis posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 1:21am

Well, that's definitely one good way to get support for your revolution! *grin* Great chapter!

Renzo7 posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 1:00am

excellent, keep it up!

Ken Warner posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 12:41am

I am glad he was stopped - the magical ministry could not have become as corrupt as it is without complicity from the other side - and there is LOTS of real world evidence that the british government is quite far along Lord Acton's road.

good story - thanks for sharing

matthiasblack posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 12:24am

Well the ball is rolling. I enjoy the smut that is thrown in every chapter as it adds a nice dynamic to the fic and shows your writing skill. Keep up the good work.

DrT posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 12:17am

My goodness, the Royal Prerogative is popping up all over. Glad I finally got mine out!

"T"

James Barber posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 12:00am

Great chapter, but it seems to me the proof you were sending wouldnt be enough if I was the prime minister or the queen to allow me to let you overthrow the wiz world, you need more indepth corruption, but then again what do I know I'm just a peon muggle loving fool!

Djkorrosive posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 11:33pm

This fic is decent, however it looks like my own personal views are in contradiction to this stories 'Free love' philosophy .

I view sex among members of a polyamorous marriage as one thing, and members of said marriage looking for sex outside of it as nothing short of a betrayal. This is where all that self loathing should come into play, his wife wants to seek sex outside of their marriage, this is where he should be questioning himself, and insecureties would be amplified. And for me too, last chapter when 'futanari' was mentioned it really killed the mood for me.

-Dj

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 11:19pm

0_0 Well, Harry is really doing good so far. He has the loves of his wives, proves he loves ALL his children, has a good connection with the bank, and now it seems he has royalty support. He's doing great!

The thing with Dudley and his parents was gold! Finally, some long-time justice has been delivered to them. And also Harry's honest and straight abilities and talk are paying off so far. Hopefully, this good streak of his will last for awhile until the coming storm envelops his and the other world.

Thanks for the update. Kick ass, all the way! Keep it up!

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 10:23pm

OUT-BLOODY-STANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved it and i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. This story rules. DO keep up the amazingly awesome and outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 9:30pm

Kewl!
Love the story. Keep going.