By Kinsfire
Reviews
DaZZa posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 7:52pm
If we killed you, we'd never see the end of this story. That would be rather silly, wouldn't it? :-)
James Barber posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 7:48pm
As much as I love this story, I can also understand how that law that umbitch passed didnt get out to everybody in the ministry after it was cancelled, that is the way of government even a government that harry will set up, the word never seems to get around to everybody on every single subject! Plus when you have arrogant aurors or just police officers, which seem to happen alot, then you have crises abundantly about to happen
jenks posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 7:37pm
nice chapter
Sean Dillon posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:55pm
Damn
eiramss posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:45pm
Killing the author would be counterproductive! Then we'd never know what's supposed to happen next!!
I just wanted to say that I absolutely love reading your stories, and I can hardly wait to read more!!
Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:31pm
Oh, my, someone did take their stupid pills that day, didn't they? For all that it has the appearance of containing some democratic aspects, Wizarding Brittain is still very much an autocracy and it looks like they're making the same mistakes such governments often do. I suspect a lot of the present government is going to be in for a very rude and shocking awakening.
JVTazz posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:31pm
*sharpens his serrated knives*
Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:09pm
Nicely done.
Ron posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:04pm
A cliffie like that is grounds for justifiable homicide, Keith. Hope the next chapter is out soon, for your own safety.
DJ posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 5:57pm
WOW they realy are dumb!! You do not take people's kids. Keep this up it is grate.
Alex00 posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 5:29pm
Nicely done.
Chris McFadden posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 5:26pm
Feces, meet oscilating air conditioner.
Patrick posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 4:58pm
So it Begins.
MaryJane6707 posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 3:42pm
Harry is so incredibly cool. I mean he really is just cool. I like how you have made into a strong and kind person. He doen't get to show it often enough in that other authors writing.
Viridian posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 5:37am
""Did he just give me permission to seduce Benjamin Franklin?" she asked."
Quote of the day, Keith!
mike bates posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 3:06am
very nice ending to this chapter.
The Resident posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 4:40pm
I seem to be repeating myself when I review your stories because there are a limited number of superlatives. Once again you have lived up to the larger-than-life image I have of you. The talk with Lorelei, the love making session with Hermione, the talks with Smythe and then ending with a face-to-face with the PM and the Queen. All scenes excellently crafted and a joy to read. Keep up the excellent work and, as always, PLEASE, update soon.
Christopher Estep posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 4:02pm
On *sex outside the marriage bed* (whether the marriage is polyamourous or not): it is *only* betrayal if taken that way. If neither side says it's betrayal, then the only viewpoints who would hold that belief about the relationship are those not in the relationship (thus their viewpoints should hold no weight). If Harry had said (to Hermione) "No, you can't have Ben Franklin." and *then* she went behind his back and seduced him anyway, that *would* be a betrayal (and your criticism would have merit). However, his granting permission (and as long as the others *also* grant permission) would make your opinion (in either direction) moot. At this point, the ball is in the court of the other women (Susan, Pansy, and Luna) as Harry has already voted. (A similar circumstance occurs in "Family Matters" when Harry is *invited* to sleep with Emma Granger, by both her and her husband, even though they are both well aware of his marriage to their eldest daughter. All three other parties stamped their approval, leaving Harry to *cooperate with the inevitable*. This was the *second time*, not the first. Therefore, the situation is not even new to any fan of Keith's writing; if it squicks you that much, then why are you reading his works?)
MaryJane6707 posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 3:46pm
Great chapter! I love the idea of old Ben being a wizard, if anyone could have been, it would have been him.
Mark Safransky posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 8:09pm