darthme1011 posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 3:33am for The Storm Breaks

i forgot to add this but u should add gabby as a new wife

Meteoricshipyards posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 3:33am for The Storm Breaks

Powerful image at the end. Good job.

Tom A.

darthme1011 posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 3:32am for The Storm Breaks

cant wait for more

loralee posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 1:52am for The Storm Breaks

Great chapter, that poor little boy. Harry is going to really kick butt.

Thanks so much for giving Steve the kind words and highlighting the Weasley Plot. When i saw it this morning i squee'd. lol

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 1:42am for The Storm Breaks

I see that things had turned out good, and then all went downhill from here. Gabrielle maybe a soon-to-be fifth wife, but now it seems that the Ministry shows more incompetence and idioicy then realized.

I hope the boy is okay. Harry did what he had to do, and he still has my respect and admiration. He REALLY needs to turn the government upside down, because if this is what the Aurors and other law officers are like, then the Wizarding world is going to go down in flames without help.

Keep it up!

red jacobson1 posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 1:25am for The Storm Breaks

as usual; an excellent chapter; but; I do have a quick question; What's going on with Neville and Hannah? After the point you made in the original story about Neville standing at Harry's side; you paired him up with Hannah; and he kind of disappeared. I'd like to see what the Longbottom's are up to as well.

red

Johnny Eagle posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 1:23am for The Storm Breaks

Looks like the **** has hit the fan

Ben Russell-Gough posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 12:35am for The Storm Breaks

The incident in the bank will probably go down in history in the same way as the machine-gunning of a crowd of protesters in St. Petersburg, Russia, October 1917 went down in history. It is the match that lit the powder keg.

Action is now inevitable. If Harry does not instigate it, someone else will and that could only multiply the bloodshed.

This is good writing. After a slow start to the sequel, 'LaPFTA' and 'Burning Day' are shaping up to be amongst your best works so far. I enjoy your adult Harry & the other characters and I think that they actually managed to be very IC despite the extreme circumstances.

Looking forward to more.

BenRG's Rating: 8/10

matthiasblack posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 12:21am for The Storm Breaks

An interesting turn of events. I like the possible addition of Gabrielle and commend you on giving Harry such an opportunity. The revolution is coming and it just got its first casualty. Thanks for the update and good luck with the fic.

Ian Morgan posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 8:45pm for The Storm Breaks

fantastic chapter
Keep the updates comming

Nightwing510 posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 8:30pm for The Storm Breaks

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you had Harry try to calm the crowd down.

Viridian posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 8:15pm for The Storm Breaks

Oh crap...

Mark Safransky posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 8:09pm for The Storm Breaks

Holy smokes Keith! The revolution has begun. I wonder if someone (Luna) got a picture of Harry crying over that poor childs body. Remember the saying, a picture is worth a thousand words. Amelia is going to be pissed, Harry is pissed and the Ministry is going down for this one. Keep it coming!!

DaZZa posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 7:52pm for The Storm Breaks

If we killed you, we'd never see the end of this story. That would be rather silly, wouldn't it? :-)

James Barber posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 7:48pm for The Storm Breaks

As much as I love this story, I can also understand how that law that umbitch passed didnt get out to everybody in the ministry after it was cancelled, that is the way of government even a government that harry will set up, the word never seems to get around to everybody on every single subject! Plus when you have arrogant aurors or just police officers, which seem to happen alot, then you have crises abundantly about to happen

jenks posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 7:37pm for The Storm Breaks

nice chapter

Sean Dillon posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:55pm for The Storm Breaks

Damn

eiramss posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:45pm for The Storm Breaks

Killing the author would be counterproductive! Then we'd never know what's supposed to happen next!!

I just wanted to say that I absolutely love reading your stories, and I can hardly wait to read more!!

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:31pm for The Storm Breaks

Oh, my, someone did take their stupid pills that day, didn't they? For all that it has the appearance of containing some democratic aspects, Wizarding Brittain is still very much an autocracy and it looks like they're making the same mistakes such governments often do. I suspect a lot of the present government is going to be in for a very rude and shocking awakening.

JVTazz posted a comment on Friday 10th November 2006 6:31pm for The Storm Breaks

*sharpens his serrated knives*