DrT posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 12:17am for Approaching Thunder

My goodness, the Royal Prerogative is popping up all over. Glad I finally got mine out!

"T"

James Barber posted a comment on Thursday 9th November 2006 12:00am for Approaching Thunder

Great chapter, but it seems to me the proof you were sending wouldnt be enough if I was the prime minister or the queen to allow me to let you overthrow the wiz world, you need more indepth corruption, but then again what do I know I'm just a peon muggle loving fool!

Djkorrosive posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 11:33pm for Approaching Thunder

This fic is decent, however it looks like my own personal views are in contradiction to this stories 'Free love' philosophy .

I view sex among members of a polyamorous marriage as one thing, and members of said marriage looking for sex outside of it as nothing short of a betrayal. This is where all that self loathing should come into play, his wife wants to seek sex outside of their marriage, this is where he should be questioning himself, and insecureties would be amplified. And for me too, last chapter when 'futanari' was mentioned it really killed the mood for me.

-Dj

DJ Rodriguez posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 11:19pm for Approaching Thunder

0_0 Well, Harry is really doing good so far. He has the loves of his wives, proves he loves ALL his children, has a good connection with the bank, and now it seems he has royalty support. He's doing great!

The thing with Dudley and his parents was gold! Finally, some long-time justice has been delivered to them. And also Harry's honest and straight abilities and talk are paying off so far. Hopefully, this good streak of his will last for awhile until the coming storm envelops his and the other world.

Thanks for the update. Kick ass, all the way! Keep it up!

jeffstrauser@yahoo.com posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 10:23pm for Approaching Thunder

OUT-BLOODY-STANDING CHAPTER!!!! I loved it and i can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. This story rules. DO keep up the amazingly awesome and outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)

morriganscrow posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 9:30pm for Approaching Thunder

Kewl!
Love the story. Keep going.

DJ posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 9:20pm for Approaching Thunder

"He was facing the British Prime Minister and Queen Elizabeth" First Ben Franklin now this, what have you got up your sleve next? This is grate stuff keep it up.

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 7:10pm for Approaching Thunder

The End-Run Strategy has begun, and it's shaping up to be Rather Bad News for Minister Scrigemour and Company. Rufus Scrigemour is a wartime minister in peacetime...which usually NOT a good thing.
Meanwhile, Hermione finds out a pleasant surprise about Harry (but one she should have suspected). Keep up the excellent writing, Keith.

DanielMohn posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 7:09pm for Approaching Thunder

> Ragnok raised an eyebrow. "You
> could make the law so that the
> group of you could cavort naked in
> Diagon Alley," he said, his own
> eyes twinkling.
>
> "Wouldn't that be a kcker?" Harry
> asked. "Wouldn't be fair to the
> ladies, though, and I don't need
> hate mail because I'm proving that
< I married the four sexiest women
> in all Europe."

Oh ... i don't think that there would be so much hate mail. Most people find the concept of 4 naked shemales rather disgusting. I'm one of them. And I really don't know, why you are writing "about" something like that (even if you are only mentioning it), if you're not "a big fan" yourself. I think it is completely superfluous to tell this tale. Even as a "proof of concept" it's not really appropriate, because of the conflicting nature, even if Hermione would give it a try because of her curiosity.

The same goes for Hermione and Ben Franklin. I find the thought highly disturbing that Hermione could, would and is "permitted" to fuck with a 300 year old shrivelled perv. I think it is highly OOC, too!

I really don't know, if I want to continue reading something like that. And I mean it. I really don't know! The problem is, that I'm a little fan of your writing since Family Matters, but you are adjusting your border of good taste (in my opinion) to the worst ever since. I think, it started with the epilogue in Family Matters. But that one I could ignore. Now it is in the story and it is harder to ignore.

I really don't know why you're making your stories more complicated then they are and why you are constricting your original target group (because I think that is it what you are doing) with something like that (concept of shemales, Hermione fucking with other guys, slash in other stories).

Don't get me wrong. You can write what you want. And I don't want to sound too harsh, but this it what I feel.

It's hard for me to continue reading stories of yours, if you're diving deeper and deeper in the abyss of human sexuality.

I know ... I know what some people are thinking know. Don't like it, don't read it! But I wanted to tell you, why I stopped reading (if I'm really going to quit). Maybe you are interested in the reasons.

Greetings
Daniel

Evan Mayerle posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 6:25pm for Approaching Thunder

*chuckle* Nothing like connections to get you the ear(s) of the right people.

Oh, minor typo nitpick:

...because see could slide...

should be

...because she could slide...

*wicked chuckle* I'd gathered that Hermione had learned a futanari spell from the description in the story; that could make a "different" illustration. I'm not a big fan of it either, though I've seen some well done manga or dojinishi works in that genre.

jilumasam posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 5:24pm for Approaching Thunder

Now this is really starting to pick up pace. Love the twists and turns you come up with.

Waits impatiently for the next chapter!

Beau Wolff posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 5:17pm for Approaching Thunder

The peasants aren't revolting, they're actually quite sweet.

I'm enjoying where this is going, Kinsfire, and I'm looking forward to seeing more. Not to mention Hermione's next experience with (*cough*) an American greenback. ;)