By Kinsfire
Reviews
crocket posted a comment on Wednesday 20th May 2009 3:42am
extremly good read
WBH21C posted a comment on Friday 6th February 2009 3:51pm
OUTSTANDING!
Tex posted a comment on Tuesday 14th October 2008 9:36am
wow i liked this story.
harry was not overly power full or had mass training, it made for a different story that i dont see much on on the sites.
keep up the good work on story's like this one.
Carolyn Jinn posted a comment on Friday 19th September 2008 1:55pm
Well Done.. It was a most execellent story.
The detail in the scenes were great and made the story seem very real.
Again, congratulations on a wonderful story..
Kokuyo posted a comment on Thursday 4th September 2008 2:04am
This truly is a "Plot? What plot?" porn fic... just without the porn. Dammit, my dyslexic friend who speaks only German wouldn't manage to write an English story this... erm... well, I truly lack the words to describe what is wrong with this.
Say, might this be a response to a "Who can write the most unbelievable HP fanfic ever" challenge?
Paulette Kilgore posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 5:55pm
Oh, I love it when the castle helps!
Paulette Kilgore posted a comment on Saturday 9th August 2008 5:49pm
So many great things. Brand recognition. :)
ROBERT_1958 posted a comment on Monday 28th July 2008 1:11pm
Why did Dumbledore not use a Time Turner to save the four girls Harry loved?
dennisud posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 10:09am
Its been almost 2 years, we need either a continuation because Draco's not mentioned to be dead! So he and a few others not mentiond can be trouble.
Or we can give us a large epilogue!
Hope you can do either soon!
dennisud
PaulD posted a comment on Thursday 15th May 2008 4:41am
So far, this fic is one of the better ones I have been reading (and I've read a lot of them ... and I still do).
- very good dialogue
- I hate the guilt ridden Harry stories. This isn't one of them
- most persons in this story are NOT caricatures. In most fanfics they are. Even JKR is prone to exaggerate in this way.
- no idiotic superHarry or supreme evil Dumbledore. The characters involved get the room they deserve in this story.
- the story is human, understandable, the characters are evolving. In lots of fics they are at a standstill.
I am not an expert (haven been reading a hell of al lot of books since I was 10 years old and still do (53 years now)), but you might have talent in writing. Why don't you try your own fiction?
Best regards,
Paul
noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2008 9:54am
You know, the lad really needs to wear a helmet. And dragon hide clothes. And get his eyes fixed...
noylj posted a comment on Wednesday 26th March 2008 9:11am
I'm re-reading this story again. Need more good stories.
Aelita posted a comment on Thursday 21st February 2008 2:53pm
THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!
Josh Jackson posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2008 10:02pm
That was tha new hotness ma mans
Drifter950 posted a comment on Thursday 10th January 2008 4:11pm
A lotta fun and very enjoyable. Definitely checking out the sequel.
Thank you for the good read.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2007 8:36pm
I loved this! It was great. Very nice work. I'm off to the sequel as we speak.
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2007 8:18pm
Such a great final battle. I just have to keep reading, reviewing is standing in my way.
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2007 12:08pm
I forgot to mention how much I love your choice of names. Lorelei. That is by far my favorite TV show. Anyway, I love it and I'm looking forward to your final battle.
mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2007 6:43am
Fancy that... I love this!
sleepygirl68 posted a comment on Wednesday 27th May 2009 1:32pm