dennisud posted a comment on Thursday 29th May 2008 10:09am for Chapter 18

Its been almost 2 years, we need either a continuation because Draco's not mentioned to be dead! So he and a few others not mentiond can be trouble.

Or we can give us a large epilogue!

Hope you can do either soon!

dennisud

Aelita posted a comment on Thursday 21st February 2008 2:53pm for Chapter 18

THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY THANK YOU SOOOOOO MUCH!

Josh Jackson posted a comment on Sunday 13th January 2008 10:02pm for Chapter 18

That was tha new hotness ma mans

Drifter950 posted a comment on Thursday 10th January 2008 4:11pm for Chapter 18

A lotta fun and very enjoyable. Definitely checking out the sequel.

Thank you for the good read.



May the MUSE be with you!!!

mashimaromadness posted a comment on Thursday 27th December 2007 8:36pm for Chapter 18

I loved this! It was great. Very nice work. I'm off to the sequel as we speak.

dennisud posted a comment on Monday 3rd December 2007 9:38am for Chapter 18

Wow again!

Not a bad ending and the quartet sure seems like a keeper of sorts. Glad that Gin and Ron realized their mistake. But I suggest next time Percy would be an obvious bad wez.

dennisud

joeBob posted a comment on Saturday 27th October 2007 12:46pm for Chapter 18

Thanks for the story.

Curlism posted a comment on Sunday 19th August 2007 10:52am for Chapter 18

Loved it.

Thanks for writing.
~Curlism

Gulfbar posted a comment on Thursday 16th August 2007 5:16am for Chapter 18

Great story!

The only thing I was missing was a chapter on the Wedding-Night ... maybe there will be a one-shot? ;)

pfeil posted a comment on Monday 13th August 2007 3:16pm for Chapter 18

Thanks, that was fun.

I enjoy most of (all of?) your harem fics, but was particularly happy to see that this time it actually stayed to the original, more reasonable harem than turn into a few dozen with what often seems to me to be little thought.

KEFIOX posted a comment on Saturday 11th August 2007 6:59pm for Chapter 18

No matter how many times I read this story, it is still by far my favorite out of all of yours, great job and keep up the good work.

Cynthia1850 posted a comment on Friday 4th May 2007 11:21am for Chapter 18

Excellent!

patrik svensson posted a comment on Sunday 15th April 2007 12:09am for Chapter 18

My thought about the fic as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

mythic77 posted a comment on Monday 12th February 2007 9:10pm for Chapter 18

Excellent story, well written. Now, on to the sequel!

vertru posted a comment on Tuesday 30th January 2007 1:21pm for Chapter 18

Since you were so kind as to finally finish writing this, I thought perhaps I should finish reading it and actually leave a review. Quite the send up, you gave his snakeyness there, if a bit anticlimactic. Actually I enjoyed the whole final battle scene taking place in Myrtle's bathroom, how apropos. Good writing, my friend. I suppose now I have to go and read burning day, before the curse of the green ganges garfoyles infests my left earlobe. Ok, so on to the next Kinsfire masterpiece. Thanks, Keith, good show.

Vern

jml0335 posted a comment on Sunday 14th January 2007 9:43am for Chapter 18

Loved the story except for Ron and Ginny becoming friends with Harry again! :(

Alan Williams posted a comment on Saturday 13th January 2007 2:43pm for Chapter 18

Hi, Over all I liked this story quit well, but I have one question? There were four bed rooms, Head boy and girl, Luna and Pansy. Where was Susan staying????

kainboa posted a comment on Monday 25th December 2006 6:24am for Chapter 18

i just finished reading this fic and i have only one thing to say.

Brilliant!

Muirnin Cocan posted a comment on Saturday 11th November 2006 11:31am for Chapter 18

Hey Keith,

*grin* Ok, so as I was working on my NaNoWriMo Project ... cleaning house and also reading Dorothy's 2006 entry ... I realized that you had finally completed LAPFTA ... and I am guessing that this years entry for NaNo is your Burning sequel ... well I told Dorothy that I would postpone reading yours but not postpone reading hers *GRIN* sorry, girls perogagtive you know.

Anyway, I finally finished LAPFTA and I will TRY and start Burning ... since there isn't a new chapter of Addams Family Values yet. I'm having fun with my NaNoWrimo Project and actually found a way to include some of my past storylines into my new storyline ... *GRIN* so don't be surprised if you see Keith or Dorothy or Bob or Alyx in there as well as Ted and Madge (I'm borrowing from Aaran now too!)

I actually have a Post HBP storyline worked out that is amusing and weird and the funkiest part is that the Prologue is actually my Dreamtime Disclaimer that is over 1400 words long! *LOL* I don't know if I will ever post the story on NaNo or not, but I will write the thing...

Keep up the writing and I look forward to reading the sequel Sir Kinsfire (For you and Dorothy are now dubbed my Garden Gnomes!)

As Always,
Muirnin - Queen Mum etc.

Kinsfire replied:

If we are officially the Queen Mum's Garden Gnomes, then we must have our Pointy Hats! Where are our Pointy Hats? *grin*

MonkeyAxman1302 posted a comment on Wednesday 8th November 2006 6:20am for Chapter 18

This is a review of the last two chapters collectively. I liked the fact that Voldemorts death happened in a bathroom. Let alone a girls bathroom. Poetic justice really that it was probably the same place he had his first kill. Allbeit through the basilisk when he was still in school. That was quite original using that bathroom not a very epic setting though. It did work!

Not sure about no fatalities by the Hogwarts defenders its a little far fetched!! Some of the character interaction is a little mushy, but I sitll do think that you "adult" scenes are usually quite well done.

Looking forward to the sequel

Monkey