mashimaromadness posted a comment on Monday 3rd March 2008 5:30am for Chapter 9

That was really well done. The fight was well done but I am more impressed with the parts that followed. I'm glad there's one more chapter. I think it needs an ending.

TxA_GunFighter posted a comment on Saturday 9th February 2008 2:21pm for Chapter 9

Very good, I like that Moldyshorts went down so easy. That the good guys kicked ass. Very good.

gunny

Wonderbee31 posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 11:39pm for Chapter 9

Wo, an impressive chapter here, and great to see the way things went, though this Harry was a heck of a lot more forceful in dealing with Tom for the last time. Looking forward to how this all wraps up, and to hope that all involved get a happy ending(not an egg roll either, LOL)

Christopher Patton posted a comment on Monday 14th May 2007 7:28am for Chapter 9

The time compression of combat or any other highly stressful and focused activity is incredible at times.

While I tend to more than slightly dislike Draco as a character. I've found that I've enjoyed your portrayal of him as well as Bob and Alyx's version of Draco in their Sunrise/Sunset stories.

I'll be looking forward to the final chapter of this story soon I hope. Thanks.

cyberpurple posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 10:54am for Chapter 9

Thanks for a realistic final battle scene - and for the rest of the chapter.

Melissa posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 9:19am for Chapter 9

I do so love to read your stories and this one is no exception. Keep up the outstanding work!

Robin Westerly posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 3:17am for Chapter 9

ayayayayayayayayayaaaaayyay

Minerva Granger posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 1:14am for Chapter 9

AWWWWWW! Well done, Keith, Dorothy and Aaran St Vines. This was a great chapter.

DrT posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 12:21am for Chapter 9

I'm almost sorry the story is drawing to a conclusion. Well-executed all around.

"T"

gadriam posted a comment on Sunday 13th May 2007 12:05am for Chapter 9

Great fightscene.
The notion of physically killing Riddle in something of a brawl was hilarious, and the use of such formalized language no matter what's described makes this story one of a kind.
Awesome. And i know what that means literally.

g

KenF posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 11:24pm for Chapter 9

I don't think I've seen another one where Harry finishes V off with his bare hands. Gruesome.

Amamama posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 10:34pm for Chapter 9

Eewww - green "blood"!? Yuk. Great way to make Tommy boy even more disgusting and point out his unnaturalness. Amazing fight, you do have some good helpers - whose work I love. And I really appreciate you ending a chapter all about fighting with "celebrating life." Wouldn't be a Kinsfire fic without. ;-)

Thanks for sharing!

Christopher Estep posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 8:30pm for Chapter 9

And thus ends the Dark Dweeb, in as fitting a fashion as could be.
Lucius Malfoy vs. Draco Malfoy: Who would have expected *this* particular sidepiece to the Main Event? Or Draco whacking Daddy Not-So-Dearest with a Reducto at point-blank range (and to save *Hermione Potter* no less)? Looks like he is well on his way to redeeming the Malfoy Reputation. (Dating Ginny certainly wouldn't hurt.)
The sixty-four galleon question: Who will become permanent Minister for Magic? It certainly won't be Dumbledore (he'd decline again), and likely won't be any Weasley (same thing), so who's left? Narcissa? Hermione? Andromeda? Harry? Draco?

Bernd Jacobitz posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 7:05pm for Chapter 9

Excellent work. I like the battle very well. You conveyed the confusion and chaos. Well done.

Patches posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 5:48pm for Chapter 9

So we have a Wizagamot meeting to attend. Ugh!
Of course there will be unwanted guests. The battle was impressive and I appreciate all the detail that went into writing it. Very well done. There seems to be a strong theme that Harry will kill Riddle in a muggle fashion instead of a magical one. That makes sense to me. Riddle has over 50 years of magical learning on Harry. Even though in this story he had taken a strengthening potion to make him stronger that did not make his magic stronger. It enalbled Harry to kill Voldemort with his bare hands. A fitting end for a stupid Dark Lord who didn't appreciate that all have their strengths and weaknesses. Including Riddle himself. I like the way Harry thanked those that helped him the most. That was very good. Of course Harry got his own thank you later. I look forward to the epilog. Thank you so much for writing. pms

thumper posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 4:34pm for Chapter 9

Great chapter

Ken Warner posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 2:57pm for Chapter 9

thanks to you and to Aaran for a wonderful chapter - you have taken characters that in canon are completely without virtue and made them heros, and convince us in a apparently effortless manner to believe in and cheer for them - The fictional character most like your Harry that I can think of is Micheal Valentine Smith, kind, gentle, loving, and ready to send back to the foot of the line those who have utterly failed this version of the great test of life - How will you use your agency??

thanks and warmest regards

morriganscrow posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 2:50pm for Chapter 9

Lovely! Brilliant! Wonderful!
So glad to see this update, as this was a story that had lingered in my mind, well ahead of the pack of others that I read.
I look forward to the epilogue.

NateGold posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 2:33pm for Chapter 9

Interesting read. By the way, congrats on being mentioned in the Thursday Star Ledger article..wish I could get to Borders to listen to you, but it's not to be. Keep on trucking!

csktech posted a comment on Saturday 12th May 2007 2:24pm for Chapter 9

Wow perfect timing. I just finished the last of the stories on the Kinsfire site and came back to check to see if Addams Famiy Values had been updated.

Kyle